Not the best but better than I have done in the past. It might develop into its own style. Who knows. Thoughts?
I’m quite excited about the proton stream emerging from his ■■■■■■.
I like it. Quirky comic book stlye gets a thumbs up from me.
Did you draw it in pencil, then scan into Photoshop?
I didn’t have a pencil handy so I just used a ball point pen. 
Clearer more accurate version of the “terror snake”.
I have no backstory yet for this entity, but I’ll think of something for this ectoplasmic critter. Might work him into a story at some point.
That 2nd drawing is much better.
You might want to think about having a lighter background on that first one. The outline of Egon’s hair gets lost in all the black causing him to appear to have a horribly misshapen head.
Contrast is your friend.
Does contrast have a sister you can introduce me to?
LOL
LOL gotcha!