Ghostbusters: "Mutes": COMPLETE! 05/13/2012

Synopsis:

When animal mutilations, strange lights, unidentified flying objects and poltergeist activity becomes too much for a Utah rancher and his family, he calls for long distance help. The Boys in Grey arrive to find a place that may even be too much for them as they stumble upon the solution to one of the nation’s most enduring mysteries that really is out of this world…


**Uintah Basin, Utah

20 miles outside of Vernal

April 1993**

The land was dark as the storm lashed the night-laced earth. Lightning snarled like blazing blue white sky-dragons while the thunder growled and rumbled like an enraged monstrous tiger, piercing through the gale force winds that ripped up and down the Uintah Mountains with their rounded and at times pointed snow covered gray rock peaks and valleys. For miles, there was nothing but open field and plain, studded with ancient rocky outcrops that during summer were hot enough to cook an egg on and during winter, turned into dead lumps of ice and snow.

Now was the spring time and the storms were frequent as the heat of the day rose in shimmering fields of invisible sweltering nothingness, the air hot and humid, and at night, the air cooling down so fast it was like winter had set in again. Nature was powerful in the Uintah Basin. Here, man’s survival was secondary only to nature’s whim to allow him to claw out a meager existence and only then if she was in a good mood.

The city of Vernal was lost into the miasma of the late night storm, what locals would have called a gulley washer. Nevertheless, this land was not totally uninhabited. Native American tribes had lived on the land almost continuously for over twelve thousand years, and more importantly, the Ute Indians who called the basin and the surrounding plains and hills home then as they do now. The first white men had first set foot in the Ute lands in mid 1700’s, led by Father Dominguez and Escalante, Spanish priests and explorers.

In the 1860’s, when Brigham Young had sent an expedition to the basin to see if the region could be settled, he was less than enthusiastic with his reviews, going on to state that the basic was nothing but a waste, good for nothing but nomadic hunting and to hold the world together. The Utes had carved a living out of the rough land, and they were a proud and just people, fierce and loyal yet full of stories and wonderful legends of beings and creatures, stories of strange lights in the sky and vanishing people.

While they were a brave and powerful people, there was one place that the Utes refused to go. For fifteen generations they had avoided patch of land in the western basin, a land of cliffs, gorges and plains with forests and fields. When they talked about the place, it was in hushed quick whispers, whispers dripping with fear that silenced the stories before they were ever fully uttered in case …in case IT heard them and would come to collect its dues. The place was a cursed place they said, a dark place, an evil place for it was as they said, in the path of the skinwalker…

Emerson Ranch, Uintah Basin….

Ronald Emerson was forty-three years old. He had been raised by his father, a stout and sturdy rancher with a firm hard worth ethic in mind and Ron had inherited that ethic. He was tall, about six foot three, and not a small man by any means. He had wavy and now somewhat thinner hair that had at one time been a dark brown but was now a rusty mix of gray and tan. His face was weather lined, not chiseled but still it showed the many hard days out in the hard Utah sun. His eyes were sharp yet not unkind and were the color of a steel gray pool and as sharp as an eagles.

His ears, just as sharp, rested under his mop of unruly hair. He wore a dark rain slicked coat that reached down to his ankles and he rode atop a beautiful chestnut stallion, his personal favorite of the four horses he and his family kept on the ranch, named Dommers. The hat on his head threatened to blow away as the violent winds from the storm. Around him, the rain swept across the sun-baked grass and the stars had vanished into the swirl of dark clouds. The lightning flashed like a supernova, causing the shadows of the trees to shoot across the ground in horrifying shapes, twisted forms and dancing death umbraes.

A few seconds later, the thunder shook the earth hard enough that Ron thought it would split open. Dommers reared on his hind legs, neighing loudly, his rain-slicked reins almost sliding out of Ron’s grip, his mane billowing, his eyes rolling in his sockets as he chewed on his bit.

“WHOA! Hold it!” Ron yelled, his voice lost in the storm as he tried to calm the horse down, and with great effort was able to get him to settle down enough, though he pranced uncomfortably in place.

The rain made it hard to see but Ron could make out his fifteen year old son, Jake, next to him, dressed in a yellow rain slicker, soaked to the bone just as Ron himself. They both had been out in the raging tempest for the better part of two hours trying to round up the cattle that had escaped their pen and had hastily made for the fields next to the river and the gulley as if the devil himself were on their heels. That thought made Ron screw up his face as he tried to force the idea from his mind and the images that came with it.

The cows, he remembered had been peaceful, standing under their shelter in the north east corner of the ranch, about fifty feet from the rustling tree line, trying to avoid the storm as much as they could, lowing and calling in the dark. He had been watching them intently as his wife, Becca, stood next to him, tense like a rubber band. The storm was bad but that was not what had the Emerson’s worried. It was the something else that had been plaguing the ranch since they had moved in six months ago. He remembered the first day as clear as now as if it were yesterday.

The ranch itself had struck him and Becca as far and beyond as possessing the most stunning landscapes they had ever laid eyes upon.

480 acres of cottonwood trees, Russian olives and a lush greenly carpeted grazing pasture on the north east end of the property bordered by a forest that went on for miles all the way back to the majestic snow capped Uintah Mountains that overlooked it all. The ranch was bordered on the north by the forest and the pasture which itself was bordered by a two hundred foot ridge made of red rock. When it rained, the dirt and mud below the ridge became a deadly torrent. This canal was where the cows had run too, huddled in terror and in fear.

But it wasn’t of the storm.

He remembered seeing the herd divide into two groups, like something was running in between them, scattering them, working them into a frenzy. He had strained to see it then, through the glass of the kitchen window, but the storm made the shadows all alive but he could have sworn there was nothing there. It had been moments later that whatever was scaring his animals, unseen as it was, finally worked them into such a state that his largest and most prize heifer had ran head long into the fence line, smashing through the thick wooden planks like toothpicks sending shattered wooden braces and joints flying. The herd had swarmed out behind her, trampling her as she fell into a daze, stamping the life out of her in their haste to be away from their invisible tormentor as their hooves thundered across the open plain towards the ridge and the gulley.

It wasn’t the first weird thing to have happened.

No. The weird lights came first. The strange blue and red orbs that flew around the ranch. The objects in the house going missing and turning up in odd places…the odd snorting sounds when nothing was there even in the house itself. The strange sulphurous stench and the absolutely horrifying feeling of being watched that was so real it often felt like someone was there with you, right on the top of the back of your neck, breathing but you never felt anything. Only the idea of what I might see kept me from turning around but even if I did, there was never anything there, he remembered.

Those were the little things…

Then there had been his dogs, three prize blue heelers who were about the closet thing he had to a best friend. He, Becca and Jake loved them and they were the best guard dogs a man could ask for. One day, one of those blue spheres had appeared and started tormenting them, bobbing and weaving just out of reach, sending the poor beasts into a frenzy of rage. In a spout of anger, Ron had let them off their leashes to chase the blue ball of light, tired of having his animals terrified, tired of seeing the unknown lights and the strange presences and smells…the smell of a predator.

The dogs had chased the light across the field and the light seemed to pay them no mind, only dipping low enough to tease them, almost as if it were playing with them.

Ron remembered growing fearful as the light reached the edge of the tree line and for some reason he never recalled, he yelled for the dogs to come back, but they had ignored him, instead, plunging into the forests after the blue ball. A few moments later, they vanished into the vegetation and for a few seconds, it was silent.

Then came the sound, a high piercing howling wail of agony, tapering off into yelps and canine screams. Ron wanted to tear into the woods but found that had had not been able to move and out of terror refused to go in after his prize dogs. His dogs never came out that night or the next morning. When the sun came up, and having gotten his courage back, Ron had grabbed his gun and went in after his pets.

What he found in the clearing, he would never forget until the day he died.

There, in the clearing just past the tree line, the grass was scorched deep black and brown and the air stuck of burned hair and charred flesh. There were three circles of deeper black earth, as if something had burned intensely in those spots. In the middle of the spots was a pile of black greasy black material that was unrecognizable except that it stunk of burned fur.

Whatever those blue spheres were they had incinerated his pets, liquefying them alive.

He had vomited and had run from the clearing and from that day forward, he kept his distance when the blue ■■■■■ of light were dancing on the horizon.

Now, almost a month later, here he was, with more weirdness as something invisible had driven his cows to smash through the fencerow. He and Jake had not seen any sign of what may have spooked them but regardless, these cattle were his family’s source of income and Ron prided himself on loosing less than 1 percent of his herd each year before in New Mexico, before they had moved here, to the Uintah Basin. Over the last two hours they had rounded up almost all of the cattle and all except for the one that had been trampled during the stampede were accounted for.

Or they would have been, except for the younger cow that had just given birth to a new calf last week. The calf itself was safe with the herd that they had managed to round up into a rough circle, and though shaken badly, they showed no further signs of stampeding. But the younger cow was nowhere to be seen.

The near hurricane blasted them with rain and pieces of grass as the lighting snarled in the skies like snakes of light, flashing like strobes and the wind and rain made it hard to hear. Jake’s horse, a younger and slightly smaller female named Ebony remained stilled but her eyes were wide and her nostrils flared with each breath. Ron knew that something wasn’t right but he couldn’t see anything in this storm.

“Dad! Where is she?!” Jake shouted as the rain lashed his face, matting his hair to his forehead.

“I don’t know! I hope she didn’t—“

There. He heard it. A low-pitched low that grew in timbre to a pleading bellow that was almost lost in the thunderclap.

Ron smiled in spite of the situation. The cow. She was alive.

“Over here! Stick close to me and stay away from that ridgeline! That’s a two hundred foot drop!” he called and with a flick of his heels sent Dommers into motion, the horse trotting forward briskly. About five feet from the edge of the ridgeline, Ron pulled back on the reins and Dommers neighed wildly shaking his head, stamping his front feet. Something was here he didn’t like but still there was nothing in sight. The cow’s pitiful cries were coming from…

“How in the hell?!” Ron cursed violently as he looked over the edge of the ridgeline and in the next lightning flash saw the young female at the bottom of the gulley trying to climb her way back up out of the swollen river onto the rain slicked and muddy shores where the mud ran in streams and torrents. Her front legs were cutting deep grooves in the mud as the water began to rise as the rain engorged the already turgid river.

“We have to get her out!” Ron reached around to his saddlebag and took out his longest rope, and he gauged he had about three hundred feet of it. Riding over to the nearest thick cottonwood that he could find, he looped the rope around it in a triple slipknot, making sure it wasn’t going to come undone. “Jake, come here! Your smaller and weigh less. I need to you tie this around you and take the rope down there,” Ron said, pointing an inclined drop that went down much more gently and shortened the trip down to the river to about a hundred and fifty feet. “That slope is made of rock and it’s safer than trying to go down on the southern end!”

“Right dad!”

Jake went about wrapping the rope around his waist while below them the cow was beginning to tire, thrashing wildly.

Next to her, in the dark, a dim dirty yellow glint flashed that had no nothing to do with lightning. The flash grew and began to stretch out, flat, hovering in mid air as the space around it begin to ripple like a heat mirage. The yellow light began to burn a furious orange and the rip began to widen, like a mouth. The cow noticed the light, the strange pulsing shimmering brightness, hotter than the sun.

Her eyes began to run in their sockets, rolling wildly as she began to bellow louder, her tongue sticking out and froth forming at her jaws, clawing for the shores as a dark shape began to reach up and out of the light, probing, seeking.

Jake had made it half way down the slope, carefully, his footing precarious as he nearly slipped on the loose rock, his father holding the line steady, the storm pelting them violently, his flashlight beam aimed at the ground beneath his feet.

Almost there, he told himself…almost…just a bit further and—

His feet went out from under him as the mud and rock slurry finally took away all the traction he had and with a cry of shock and pain, he slammed down hard on his back, driving the wind from him as he crashed and rolled down the final fifty feet, the world spinning wildly.

“JAKE!!!” he heard his father yell over the storm and then the world threatened to go blacker than it already was as he hit rock bottom, careening to a sloppy and muddy stop on the slick and mud thick shores of the river.

Rubbing his head he called out.

“I’m alright! Just fell on the slope!”

His father ran to the edge and kept the rope tight in his hands as the slack began to play out. Down below, Jake found his flashlight lying a few feet away from where he had come to rest. Picking it up, he was surprised it was still working. He cleaned off the lens and shook it for good measure. The beam stayed steady. He made his way carefully with large steps to pull out of the mud as it sucked his feet down deeper, getting closer to the cow.

Odd, he thought. She wasn’t moving or calling anymore. She’s probably exhausted, he thought. Wiping the mud out of his eyes, he saw that he wasn’t mistaken. She was lying as still as stone.

The light played across her eyes and that was when he realized something was horribly wrong.

Her eyes weren’t reflecting the light. Normally, they would be shiny, wet, and even slightly greenish as they refracted the beam. But there was nothing….nothing but darkness…and…

Red. Lots of red.

Jake felt his stomach retch as he moved the beam down her face…

…what was left of it.

…the flesh from her jaw had been stripped clean to the bone, exposing her teeth in a death’s grin, her nose holes now gaping black and smoking slightly. Her tongue…gone…One of her ears…sliced away as neatly as with a scalpel, revealing the pink flesh of her inner skull standing wetly out in the beam of the flashlight.

As his light moved down the body, his hand began to shake and the light began to dance. There were strange deep gashes on her sides, as if she been raked by something with ungodly claws but the slashes were huge, a good few inches across. It was her rear that was the worst.

He felt his mouth drop open and he knew he was going to vomit. He kept swallowing as he moved closer to see the impossible. Her entire ■■■■■■ had been cored out, as if something had taken a tool larger than a coffee can, but perfectly round and sawed into her and…

…yanked out everything inside. The light dropped from his hands.

The cow’s internal organs were missing.

Gone.

Taken.

There was no blood on the ground. No sign of a struggle.

His mind reeled.

“DAD!!!”

Ron had worked his way down the slope and stood next to his son, his own flashlight illuminating the grisly scene.

“….they got her…its back again dad…” Jake said the rain poured down and the night boomed with the growls of thunder.

“…Its back…”

Ron wondered, there, in the dark, with the smell of sulphur tainting the air and death all around him, if the growls were caused by the thunder alone.

**One Week Later…

Emerson Ranch

Uintah Basin….**

The strange car came bouncing up the rutted gravel driveway, dust trailing out behind it towards the Emerson ranch homestead, following the now repaired fence line closely. The sun shone brightly and all signs of last week’s torrential downpour had vanished. Now the air was warm with a steady yet gentle breeze that smelled of cottonwood, hay grass and earth that caressed the world like a ghostly mother. The single story ranch house was simple yet functional, just as it needed to be. A large plate glass window overlooked the expanse of fields that stretched all the way back to the main road, while the kitchen faced the northeast pastures and the tree lines.

It was built of brick that had begun to fade to that light pinkish red that brick seems to discolor to. It had built just over fifty years prior by the previous family. When the Emerson’s had bought it, they had discovered it had strange add ons by the previous family, including double dead bolts and latches on every door, inside and outside as well as heavy iron rings sunk into the ground on the back porch facing the north eastern fields with heavy chains attached. The previous owners had said they kept guard dogs posted there. They never said what they were guarding against. Ron had found it odd, but he and Becca assumed it was the eccentricities of the elderly.

Six months later, Ron wondered darkly if he was the one who was mistaken. The deadbolts and latches now served an all too clear purpose…to keep things out that wanted in.

He sat on the front porch with Jake, sipping a glass of lemonade, his hat pulled low over his eyes, dressed in well-worn jeans and a t-shirt, his boots on his feet. Jake wore a sleeveless top and khaki shorts and sneakers. Becca had run to town to discuss some issues with the mortgage company. Jake was enjoying the day off as the school’s air conditioning system had shorted out and the school board said it was too hot for them to be there.

Ron watched the two-door coupe bounced up and down the road at a decent pace as it neared the entrance to the ranch, the dust cloud behind it rising and fading into the air like an ancient smoke signal. It was a Chevy Cavalier, a light turquoise with black trim and cheap plastic wheels. A peace sign hung from the rearview mirror and it flashed brilliantly silver in the sun’s glare.

The stories of the strangeness that was taking place on his ranch had finally been leaked by neighborhood gossip to the press and the media had a field day with it. Since it had broken late last week, he had been besieged by curiosity seekers, wackos and wierdos of every nation and creed. He highly suspected this would be a another one and frankly, he was sick of it. He eyed the car with a mix of irritation and suspicion as it stopped at the gate and waited from him to come up and greet the driver.

When it was clear that they would not be going away, Ron sighed and set his drink down.

“Come on…let’s go see what in the hell they want. Probably want to build another tourist attraction.” He grumbled in frustration to Jake as he rose from his wooden chair on the front porch. Crossing the yard, his footsteps crunching as he got on the drive way path proper, Ron made a fast, deliberate and steady trip straight to the gate and opened it, stepping out of it with Jake not far behind, his hands in his short’s pockets.

He stopped next to the driver’s door as the driver’s window rolled down. He got a glimpse of the driver and he rolled his eyes mentally. Perhaps it showed because the man behind the wheel of the Cavalier flinched slightly. The driver was a tall man, maybe six foot three, with blonde hair and the blue eyes of those of Norse decent but he had none of the power or presence of his Viking ancestors. Rather, he was skinny, with a pointed nose and watery eyes. He wore numerous rings on his fingers and was dressed in a tie-die shirt and bell-bottoms that had went out of fashion thirty years ago.

“Look mister, you need to turn around and just go back where you came from. We don’t want to do any more interviews, we sure as hell don’t want any documentaries and don’t offer me a theme park. We aren’t interested.” Ron summarily and gruffly told him.

The man shook his head and held up his hands in supplication.

“No, man you got it wrong. I don’t want anything from you. I just want to meditate here, to connect to the energy of our mother earth and nature. That’s all man…to commune, man. I drove a long way just to be here. I can feel the energy right now….come on man…just a few minutes…where it’s all happened at…I have to see.”

He sounded and looked like a damn hippy and though Ron couldn’t smell any drugs on him, Ron still felt his eyebrow reach for the brim of his hat. He surreptitiously looked at Jake in disbelief. Jake shrugged. The guy was obviously nuts.

“Just ten minutes man…that’s all and I’ll go. Swear, man. No photos, no video, nothing.”

Ron considered.

The man wasn’t asking for money, he had no cameras or recording equipment that Ron could see. He was one man not ten and if he got out of hand, the gun was in the back of the truck, Ron though dryly. What the hell…this could be interesting if nothing else than for a laugh and God knows we need it around here.

Sighing in resignation, Ron threw up his hands.

“Fine. Park next to the house. We’ll take my truck to the fields.”

Ron nodded to Jake and Jake quickly pushed the long metal gate all the way open, swinging it wide to allow the car to pass through. They both stood and watched the man park the dusty coupe next to the flowerbeds on the outside edge of the path. Ron cringed. Becca was going to be furious because he could have sworn he saw the left front tire crush some flowers to a mushy pulp. The man oblivious, shut down the engine and leaped out, practically jumping in place with excite as he looked around him, as if he had never seen a house before.

Jake dutifully closed and locked the gate behind him and followed his father to Ron’s truck that was parked just outside of the garage. The truck was a 1989 Dodge Ram, and still kept in cherry condition. Its skin was normally a deep red and the grill and headlights were gleaming squares of chrome and glass. Right now, the big truck was covered in mud and dirt and was in bad need of a wash.

Jake waited patiently by the truck while Ron quickly stepped inside the house to grab the truck keys from the key holder next to the door, letting the screen door slam behind him as he exited, keys in hand, jangling as he walked. Seeing his father with the keys and realizing he did not want to be sitting in the truck cab with this lunatic, Jake bounded up into the truck bed, using the rear tire as a boost.

Unlocking the truck, Ron didn’t even look back at the hippie.

“Get in. We don’t have all day.” He barked and without further prompting, the strange tall blonde man practically tripped over himself to jump into the passenger seat, slamming the heavy metal door in his excitement hard enough to rattle the glass. Ron growled in irritation but said nothing. Revving the powerful engine, Ron shifted the big truck into gear and pulled out of the driveway and started out across the yard and to the fence line gate.

Jake quickly leaped down and opened the gate while his father drove through. Closing it behind the truck, he leaped back up in the truck bed as the vehicle began its journey in earnest to the north-eastern fields, bouncing and jumping over the ruts in the ground, the open fields sprawling out around them as the ranch house slowly faded from view.

As the minutes ticked by and they drew closer to where the weirdness seemed to be centered at, the blonde man grew more and more excited, like he was going to see some kind of park ride or amusement show. Ron’s aggravation with the idiot grew. If only the man understood how this thing, whatever it was, had terrified his family, plagued them with fear, butchered their animals…it was like living in hell.

Fifteen minutes later and now well away from the ranch house, they were in the center of the grazing pastures with forests on either side of the wide-open field. The grass came half way up to the truck tires and every so often cow dung piles sat dryly in the earth. Rocks poked up occasionally with their dull gray faces silent and somber. A dry wind blew and the sky was still cloudless. Throwing the car in park, Ron killed the motor.

“This is it. This is where most of the weirdest shit happens. Lights, animals dying. Weird looking flying things. You have ten minutes.” He said bluntly, and got out of the truck, slamming the door behind him. The blonde hippie had already bounded out of the truck and bolted off to about fifty feet from the truck. He stood there for a moment, and closed his eyes and began to breathe slowly and deeply before finally tossing his head back and spreading his arms out like wings, like Christ on the cross and stood that way. Ron leaned up against the passenger side of the truck and looked from the crazy man up at Jake who watched silently but was barely holding back a laugh.

The sun shone and the scene was almost idyllic, a strange sort of natural beauty to it and for about five minutes everything was normal.

Until Ron realized that all the birds had stopped singing.

In fact, he couldn’t hear anything at all now almost as if the world had been shut off from all sound, like in the dead of winter when there is a deep snow on the ground. It was that same pressing heavy silence.

Somewhere, there was a noise, high-pitched and slightly metallic, almost like a cowbell.

It rang twice and then stopped.

None of his cows had bells. The man didn’t seem to hear the noise.

Suddenly, Jake stiffened, as if something had poked him in the ribs. Ron caught he movement out of the corner of his eye and looked at his son. The boy was facing forward, his eyes wide and his face had drained of color.

“Jake? What’s wrong?” he asked, the blonde man paying them no mind.

“Dad…look.” Jake pointed, his hand shaking in growing fear.

Ron whirled and looked, following his son’s gaze, his eyes tracing the ground all the way back to the far tree line, about a eighty yards from where they stood. At first he saw nothing but dark trees and cool shade, dark and impenetrable. There was nothing there—

Then he saw it.

He felt his blood run cold and his heart begin to speed up as every hair on his body stood up. His flesh broke out in goose bumps.

There, running through the trees, was…something. It was huge, at least a good six feet high, maybe ten to fifteen feet long…but there was no form…only a strange transparent heat-shimmer like mirage that distorted the world as it passed through it briefly, like clear water given form. The trees parted around, the grass bent and swayed as it ran through them, stalking quickly, like a predator…but there was nothing there other than that strange heat-mirage.

It came to the edge of the tree line, slowed down and seemed to slink out of the bushes, pausing at the edge of the field. With a growing sense of horror and realization, Ron realized it was hunting them, looking at them…whatever this thing was. This was new. A whole new damn ball game. Ron couldn’t see a head or body but he knew…he had seen big cats hunt and kill their prey…this heat shimmer behaved just the same.

It seemed to lock on to the blonde man like a homing missile.

“Oh shit…”

The shimmering field of waving transparent lines moved faster than his eye could track and instantly it charged, rocketing across the open field at sixty miles an hour, the ground thumping beneath its invisible feet as dirt clods flew up from a body that didn’t seem to exist.

The blonde man still stood there, his eyes closed his head thrown back, and humming to himself, his arms wide as the invisible horror bore down upon like a locomotive. Ron moved to shout a warning and the beast was upon the man, coming to an immediate and impossible stop without warning right before him in a giant shimmering shifting heat haze.

Whatever the monstrosity was seem to pull in on itself and then the air was split by an ungodly roar, a bellow from another time and place, half a scream, half a bear’s roar with the deep resonance of a lion that shook the world. At last the hippie man opened his eyes in terror as the force of the beast’s scream blew his clothes backward like a hurricane, throwing him to the ground, a good ten feet back, head over heels. The heat haze seemed to look up at Ron and a low growl came from the empty air as the haze itself turned and bolted back melting and vanishing into the tree line as if it had never existed.

His brow covered in a cold stick sweat, Ron finally shook himself out of his fear and went to check on the hippie, kneeling down beside the man. All he need, Ron thought darkly, was for some New Age ■■■■ to get on his property and have a heart attack. The second Ron got within grabbing distance, the blonde lanky fellow latched onto him in a death grip, weeping in sheer terror, his grip strong with the power of a man in the throes of unparalleled fear. Ron struggled to extricate himself and the man simply would not let go. Jake looked on helpless.

Exasperated, Ron finally told the man bluntly. “If you do not let go, I am going to hit you.”

In a shivering voice, the man did not look up, but replied.

“I’ll let go…just get me out of here…promise you’ll get me out of here….”

Ron nodded and the man finally let go and quickly, Ron helped him into the truck.

Fifteen minutes later, Ron and Jake, back at the house, watched as the strange and now very scared blonde man leaped into his car and spun gravel he peeled out of the driveway so fast.

As the Cavalier practically flew over the ruts and bumps in the long driveway, Ron made a decision immediately.

For the last six months since they had moved in, they had been terrorized by strange lights, orbs, things moving on their own, weird noises and strange and often horrendous animal deaths. Today, the …stuff…whatever it was…had taken on a new deadly turn…for the first time, it had showed a clear and present threat to a human being directly.

His family wasn’t safe. He wasn’t safe. His livelihood was being destroyed.

Enough was enough.

It was time to call in some help

The only question was who he was going to reach out to? Who in the hell do I call?

Suddenly a dim memory came to mind, a memory he would’ve have thought twice about being the practical man that he was. Now that memory came to light and so did a phone number.

He knew who to call.

He went inside the house as Jake stood behind him in the living room, the cool air conditioning feeling fantastic compared to the sweltering heat outside. He dialed the number and lifted the handset to his ear as the number began to ring. A moment later, a woman’s voice answered.

“Yes…my name is Ron Emerson…and I have a problem.”

                                                                                                     <B>**GHOST

                                                                                                     BUSTERS**</B>

                                                                                                       <B>**“Mutes”.**</B>

**Long Island, New York

April 1993**

The house was beautiful. It stood three stories tall, with light colored beige and white trim. Carefully arranged flower gardens lined the front end of the property, brilliantly colored in the spring air. The house was too large for the fifty-foot lot so it sat facing sideways, with the front entrance door facing the asphalt driveway.

Houses, big and old, lined streets on either side of the affluent neighborhood and all told, it was quite a stunning sight to see, the old streets right next to the flowing river that any day now as the temperatures warmed up would be full of boating families. The side of the house that faced the road was unique in that, thanks in part to the Dutch gambrel roof and the quarter moon attic windows, it possessed sort of strange barn-like face with the sunroom below making up a mouth that if one looked at it just right, seemed to sneer like someone who knows a secret they won’t tell you.

The streets were silent as the rest of the idyllic small town went about its business. In fact, even the birds were singing this afternoon as a school bus hissed by its air breaks groaning once as it chugged by and faded away down the street, taking a slow lumbering curve onto South Ireland Place. On the street, Norma Jenkins was walked briskly along the sidewalk of Ocean Avenue, admiring her neighbor’s homes. What a lovely place to live, she remarked to herself, reaching up to steady her shawl as a light spring breeze threatened to expose her eighty year old head. A noise got her attention and she turned as–

……the peace was shattered instantly as a surging yellow-orange undulating beam of pure energy exploded out of the right attic window, punching through the window like paper, sending glass and wood cascading down like a rain of crystal stars, bouncing off of the sun room and into the grass of the yard below. The energy beam roared and hissed, a sharp deep humming blazing snarl that made your ears rattle, spitting sparks as blue ionizing lighting crawled and snaked along its length, wrapping around it like a wild snake.

The beam kept coming, about as wide as half a man’s wrist, as white energy blobs traveled up the yellow beam. It slammed sideways, snaking, cutting into the wood, burning it to ash with explosive force. The beam finally shut off and a man ran by the window, a man dressed in a khaki colored jumpsuit uniform that was covered from head to toe in a glowing blue substance with the consistence of snot.

His wild brown hair stuck up all over his head as if he had spent the day in a wind tunnel and his eyes were livid. On his back, he wore a jet-black backpack made of metal, covered in tubing and cables and a round lower section with four red lights that chased each other in a circle. The backpack was steaming slightly as he adjusted the strange looking rifle he held in his black gloved hands. The rifle was connected to the strange black pack via a long hose sheathed in tough black plastic.

He stopped, seeming to need to catch his breath, panting and looking for the entire world like man possessed. He reached around to the rifle’s stock and flipped a switch. With a hiss, the back pack’s lower pie-plate like bottom split from the main body and stood out, exposing four miniature nuclear fuel rods (not that Norma knew what they were) each burning a brilliant scarlet as a sudden rush of steam jetted out of a vent nozzle near the top of the pack. Within seconds, the rods spun and withdrew back into the pack as the steam vanished and the pack began to hum with a brief high-pitched thrum.

“COME BACK HERE YOU LITTLE ECTOPLASMIC PARASITE!!!” she heard the man scream in a challenge as he vanished back into the upper floors of the Dutch colonial.

Strange sounds came from the big old house, sounds of heavy boots as people ran about madly and Norma screamed a bit in fright as more of the bright energy streams exploded out of the house, burning out windows, cutting through the walls and even, to her shock, up the chimney!

She thought about calling the police! This was madness!! Unable to move she watched the spectacle unfold as the front door exploded off of its hinges trailing smoke and flew across the drive, only to slam into the owner’s car broadside, crumpling the sheet metal of the doors in a horrific crunch that made her wince knowing the cost of insurance. What happened next, she would never understand as she watched in absolute amazement and shock as a blue shape the size and general shape of human being flew out of the front door. It was transparent, had no legs and had twin long hanging arms and hell fire filled eyes….or would have. It couldn’t have had eyes.

It had no head.

Or rather, its head was floating behind it, like a sickening kind of skull turned into the ■■■■■■■ love child of a tracer round and a comet. Its body was dripping some type of glowing blue ooze and it seemed for all intents and purposes to be running for its life. It wasn’t breathing but it gave the impression of panting as it whirled left and right, seeming to look for a way out.

“THERE!” another voice called from inside the house and that strange whine began again, like some kind of machine firing up. The blue thing looked behind it and shrieked in rage and terror and bolted towards the street just as four separate strings of glowing green slime shot out behind it, splattering wetly against the Mercedes that was parked in the drive way. The strings snapped to the ground, anchoring the car in place as well as if they had been made by iron. The monster stopped at the curb.

It seemed to see her. The skull smiled, exposing black rotted teeth as its eyes began to burn a hellish red.

A deep growl came from its chest and Norma realized two things in quick succession.

One, she couldn’t move because her legs refused to listen to her.

Two, she was going to die.

With an ear splitting roar, the beast charged faster than a cheetah, diving for her, its arms outstretched, claws wide, laughing grinning skull sneering. Norma prayed it would be quick and brought up her white pocket book and cowered behind it as if it were a shield.

“HIT IT!”

There was a new sound, totally alien to this world, like sound that was being pulled into itself, a deeper high-pitched noise as the world turned a shimmering blue black, flashing like lightning. Unable to keep her eyes shut, Norma opened her eyes and felt her mouth drop open in shock.

The monster before her was totally stopped in mid-air, hovering, unmoving. She looked behind it and saw the reason why. There was a man, a younger man with light colored close-cropped hair and brown eyes. He was dressed similar to the man she had seen earlier, in a khaki colored flight suit and he wore a strange backpack but it was different. His pack, while at first looked similar to the man from the attic, had three sets of fins that extended from the top and sides, each one flashed with blue lights that cycled in pulses. The air seemed to shimmer around the fins but just barely. In his hands was the same kind of rifle the man upstairs had with the long black hose and clear nozzle on the end. This one looked different too; it had attachments on it, add-ons that looked honestly quite jury-rigged.

A shimmering blue-black energy beam, far more stable than the yellow and orange one that had taken out the upstairs of the old colonial was flashing and strobing from the rifle’s barrel. Seconds later, the blue monster’s form began to change, turning black and shiny as a crystal like coating began to form over it almost like volcanic obsidian. With a groan, the beast finally fell from the air and crashed to the ground, its crystal coating splitting off a bit with the force of the impact. The crystal plating began to crack as the entity began to wake up, growling.

“Trap out!” a black man dressed like the two other wackos barked and he knelt low and tossed out a rectangular box about two feet long with silver plates on the side, a handle on top and twin hinged yellow and black caution striped doors. A long cable ran out behind as he rolled it forward, the cable running out just as the box on nearly invisible wheels jerked to a stop.

Shaking off the last of the crystal shards, the demonic form reared back and threw off its glass like prison and it rose in air, its skull like face contorting and shifting, flowing into that of a monstrous pig.

“FIRE!” an auburn haired pudgy man wearing weird looking goggles commanded and suddenly five of the same yellow orange beams exploded from the tips of their other-worldly looking rifles, burning the air as they snaked across the open street faster than light, snaking and dancing in the air.

The creature raised its talons, going straight for the kill and Norma knew there wouldn’t be any chances this time and her third realization came then and there was a strange kind of peace in it that she was about to meet her maker. Its claws swiped down just as the five beams converged upon it explosively, the proton streams snarling and hissing as they wrapped around the beast, snaring it in a web of coursing shifting sparkling energy that rivaled the sun. The shadows from the streams turned the world inside and out as her eyes hurt from the light. The heat was searing, like standing in front of an open oven but the beast was trapped, unable to escape the streams as the men shorted the beams by just a few feet, pulling the raging entity away from her, well out of harm’s way, positioning it just above the strange caution stripe box.

The black man stomped down on something attached to the end of the box’s cable and the twin split hinge caution striped doors on the box opened, releasing a bright white light in the shape of an inverted cone. The light had no heat but was at the same token hotter than the sun itself as arcs of blue lighting shot up into a double helix, wrapping around the beast as sparks flew like a welder’s nightmare. The men held the thing there, in the swirling energy cage, and despite its best efforts, Norma could see its time was up.

With triumphant smugness that some would say bordered on cocky, the black man brought his foot down again, and the box on the ground began to hum and with a sharp snap of energy, the double helix of blue lightening began to pull the being down, lowering it. Struggling with every ounce of power it had, the thing gave a horrendous scream as its tail end finally touched the inside of the box’s white light. The reaction was instant. Its body began to warp and distort, lengthening, flattening as it was yanked down inexorably towards the box.

The beams vanished as the men killed the power to their rifles; the beast finally was up to chest high in the box, using its arms as braces on the outside of the box, burning holes in the asphalt before it finally vanished, sucked into the box, the skull flowing right in with it as the twin caution striped doors slammed shut behind with a finality that spoke volumes. For a moment, the box flexed and jumped on the ground as if the thing inside was not giving up yet. Then, in a strange twist of technological irony, a yellow status indicator bar light on the front of the box’s cassette filled with yellow as a red light on the back of the box began to blink regularly. Steam and smoke poured from the box and it seemed like the world had sound again as the birds began to tweet and the air no longer smelled like ozone.

The men holstered the rifles on the sides of the packs, and to Norma, they looked tired and haggard but nonetheless each one of them had a grin on their face that said they were proud of what they had done. The younger lighter haired man walked out, wrapping the trap cable around his hand as he did, like a garden hose before he finally picked up the box from the ground and held it arms length by the cable attached.

“Hmm. I guess it wasn’t a hoax after all,” he mumbled to himself, staring at the trap with a mix of fascination and disgust. Norma saw that he too was covered in the blue snot. Wiping some of the gunk off of his face, the man walked back across the street and as if he were loading groceries, opened the hatchback on a wild looking car that Norma just now noticed had parked in the driveway of the old colonial. It was a 1959 Cadillac ambulance, long and white, with sharp red tail fins and pointed taillights. Its roof was covered in an assortment of blue police lights and its driver and passenger doors were both adorned with the international symbol for “NO”, a red circle with a diagonal line through it. In the middle of this circle was a cartoon figure, that of a white ghost.

The men had this same logo on their right shoulders.

Tossing the smoking box into the back, he pulled out a modified metal gurney and shed his backpack, fastening it down into the gurney, the fins no longer visible, as if they had retracted back into the pack. The others copied his action and with a tired slam, the snot covered man shut the rear door, following the others as they made their way up the driveway and back to the owner who had finally stepped out, his mouth agape, his face ashen gray as he finally saw the scope of the damage.

Every window on the upper floor was gone, smoke poured thickly out of the burned and singed holes that had once held them and deep burned black gouges ran up the sides of the house. The entire side of the Mercedes was crushed like a tin can.

The man with the wild hair straightened it and wiping away the gunk on his uniform, reached into his pocket and pulled out a pen and pad. A tall lanky man with a large amount of dark hair in the rough shape of a pompadour adjusted his round black glasses as the one with the pad began to speak to the shocked homeowner.

“….for the entrapment, since this is a multi-story residence, the price is normally three big ones for a property of this size but given its distinctive history and historic nature, we think a discount is in order, to the tune of twenty eight…”

“…dollars?” the homeowner mouthed.

“..hundred.”

“…but the damages….this house was built in 1927! Its….Its…”

“….a qualifiable antique really, I understand which is why, sir, we had to rid the premises of such a threatening and dangerous Class 4—“

“Class 6 anchored ambusher with material warping—“the one with the glasses spoke up pointedly.

“Thanks, Egon. I got this.” the wild haired one shot back quickly. “…as I was saying, this Class 6 anchored ambusher with material warping abilities. Given its past activities, I think it would be safe to say, sir that its removal was in the best interests of the family you understand.”

Norma heard the words of comfort being spoken but he delivered them with all the panache of car sales man going in for the kill.

“Proton charging will be half off this time but I’m afraid we will have to charge you an extra two hundred for ionic dry cleaning. Terribly expensive—“

“…but the damages…the house is ruined…”

“Nothing a little spit and polish won’t fix sir. The city will be sending you insurance paperwork in about seven days. I imagine in a few years time, you’ll be able to sell it for a million bucks. Imagine the movie rights.” he waggled his eyebrows at the homeowner who looked like he was about to pass out. Writing furiously on the pad, the man finally put away the pen in his pocket and ripped off the top sheet, passing it to the homeowner who, if it was possible, blanched at the number on the sheet, followed by all those zeros.

“Thank you for your business sir, have a great day!”

With that, the five men turned and made for the odd-looking old ambulance, disappearing into it quickly and closing the doors with loud thunks. With a roar, the old engine came to life and with a backfire, the Cadillac backed out of the driveway and pulled away, turning down South Ireland.

Norma stood in stunned silence as the homeowner surveyed his property in dismay. She heard him muttering to himself.

“….I should’a listened to the realtor…place is ruined…I’m moving back to Deer Park…..”

Norma didn’t even noticed as her white pocket book, now scored and charred black, collapsed from its metal handles, disintegrating into crispy black ash.

In the car, Peter Venkman handled the old ambulance like a professional, navigating the small town streets with ease as Egon and Ray next to him on the bench seat looked about ready to drop from exhaustion. In the back, Winston and relative new employee Ryan Luke Johnson, aka Rookie, Hoss, Cool Breeze or whatever nickname Peter could think up at the given moment, were tired but satisfied plus six thousand dollars richer as soon as the payment cleared from the government…not to mention the three grand he had personally charged the homeowner.

Normally, the government now covered the bill for all captures and eliminations since the Ghostbusters had become a branch of the city sanitation services last year but Peter felt, given the amount of slime dripping from his uniform, and the hours he would need scrubbing it from places he didn’t even know he had, that the double billing was justified. Walter Pack, the Paranormal Contracts Oversight Commission, (P.C.O.C) administrator —essentially now their boss—was going to be livid. He’d probably turn that wonderful shade of red that Peter thoroughly enjoyed inducing whenever the pencil necked bureaucrat stopped by the office for his weekly inspection detail. And Mayor Mulligan would need to be appropriately appeased…

Politics. Now that was supernaturally dangerous.

“Who’s up for fish and chips?” Peter asked as they made it out of town and headed back towards Manhattan passing the town’s ornate welcome sign. It sat in a copse of green well-manicured grass and was surrounded by happy white picket fencing. It stood made of wood and was carved in a flowing script. Ryan looked it out of the rear window and shrugged.

Never in a million years did I think I would be here…

The sign read:

***Welcome to the village of

Amityville

Incorporated 1894

“The Friendly Village.”***

Nice work TAPS. Do you use Final Draft at all? It might help with the formatting on some of your stories, especially being that they’re so short they’d work really well as little mini episodes or 30-minute scripts. I have written several screenplays with FD and though the program lengthens the amount of pages it definitely helps with structure, pacing, and also helps in a sense that it forces you to convey the whole story with… less words. I tend to overwrite things, so… Anyway… good work and thanks for sharign!

Thank you for reading so far. I use Word and never used Final Draft. I’ll look into it however. I just noticed that I made a serious typo near the end with Peck’s last name. I caught the error but couldn’t correct it just yet.

This story will be a shorter one as I hope to have it done by Halloween. Its not finished yet but I expect it to be about 90 to 100 pages if that. Hope you had a good time reading it as I have so far writing it. :slight_smile:

Hmm. Speaking for formatting, perhaps it would be best if you could see the actual format I have it in, as opposed to how it is here. If you would like to see the full project (the cover, title page, the actual text formatting as its meant to appear) then you can click here and get the PDF of what I have done so far, which is what you see here but formatted as I intended to be.

http://www.ssprstn.com/id107.html

Just click the file link that reads “Ghostbusters: Mutes ROUGH DRAFT” and it should open. Bear in mind, for some reason, Google Chrome will not open that file right and it comes out like a bunch of crazy coding. Use Internet Explorer.

Look forward to your thoughts!

**14 North Moore Street

New York, NY 10013

April 1993**

Ray Stantz was excited.

They had just solved the biggest haunting this century short of the Winchester Mystery house. Unfortunately, they would never be investigating the Winchester Mystery house as they had been banned from the property in California after the accident at the movie studios a few years back when they were called in as consultants on the first Ghostbusters movie. It wasn’t their fault that the studio had been haunted by a sleeper ghost. It hadn’t been a total waste he supposed; not only did they catch the ghost and get more data for the electronic version of Tobin’s spirit guide he had been working on improving but he also got to see one of his childhood favorite’s, the set of the Evil Dr. Crowley movies…all sixteen of them. Sure, they were cheesy and predicable, but hey, they were fun.

The drive back to headquarters was uneventful unless you counted the Spring Day parade that held them up for over two hours this morning. Peter’s nerves were less than settled by the time they finally got out of it and the run in with Officer Frump (Captain Frump now, Ray reminded himself) had not helped any. Despite the fact that the large law officer had been promoted last year for his dogged pursuit of the Masked ■■■■■ bandit. Which needless to say saved fraternity girls in the greater Tri-State area from suffering indecent wardrobe malfunctions; he still kept a close eye on the Ghostbusters both as people and as a company. He wasn’t as bad as he used to be but they had not yet managed to win his trust. Can’t win ‘em all.

The Ecto-1 slowed as they reached the station and Ray looked at the trap that sat in the rack holder in the rear of the ambulance, its status light blinking a steady red. The battery on the traps had a twelve-hour charge so there was no risk of the entity inside breaking free unless there was a mass loss of containment. No use taking chances, though and it would be best to get this particular specimen into the grid as soon as possible. It had caused six people to die, possessed another, and drove more than one family out of the property it had once called home.

However, it was a fascinating ectoplasmic study. Its ability to electro-kinetically influence the brain’s neural pathways was unprecedented, especially with the remote nature in which it operated. It also had the amazing ability to alter reality and like all sub-poltergeists, move objects. Egon triggered the door opener and the great dark double doors on the fire hall clicked once and swung wide, slowly, stopping as they hit the stops on either side. With a bump and a squeal of brakes, the old ambulance pulled into the massive garage, the engine falling silent as the doors closed behind them, shutting out the outside world.

Exiting the car, Ray looked up to see Janine at her desk, typing away furiously at the computer terminal, her keys clacking and clicking at blinding speed. She never once looked at the keyboard. How she did that always amazed him.

“Hey, who wants to help me dump this creep into the grid? I want to take some more readings and do a PKE valance frequency analysis. See where its numbers fall.” Ray said, dusting his hands off on his jumpsuit as he went around to the back of the car, opening the hatch back. Peter groaned.

“I don’t know about you but I fully intend to get some chow and hit the sack. You can go and stick your probes in the ghosts all you want Ray, but I’m tired.”

“But Peter! This is a first! A ghost that is directly responsible for human fatalities! It’s been spoken of in the literature and even in Tobin’s, but no one’s ever been able to prove it. Scientific opportunity is knocking!” Ray protested, pulling out the smoking trap and slamming the hatchback in his excitement, drawing a silent but deadly glare from Winston who had spent last week tuning the car.

“That’s great that opportunity is knocking, Ray, and here is my answer: No sales calls.”

With that, Peter drug himself up the stairs and vanished into the bunk area, not even pausing to insult Slimer who floated in his containment tank next to Janine’s desk, like some kind of demented dripping fish, though Slimer did taunt him, laughing like a loon.

“Hey, Hoss! Help me get this guy in. Then we can run those tests.” Ray said enthusiastically, while Egon and Winston began to unload the proton packs and PKE meters for cleaning and charging. Ryan was about to protest as he wanted nothing to do with the spook in the trap as it had nearly took his head off with an energy blast but before he could, Ray was pushing him towards the basement.

“ …I mean can you think of it. How many times in history has someone been convicted of a murder and it’s really been a ghost that’s responsible? We could really bust some heads with this. We might even get acquittals! This could be big in the legal department.”

Ryan shook his head. “Ray…what if it’s just bad people? Ghosts can’t be to blame for all of them.”

Ray shook his head. He had an idea and had to chase it like a pit-bull after a treat.

“Well yeah but then what about the Adams haunting…that one was a wild one! Lasted from 1817 and had occurrences all the way up to 1932! At least one person died during that one!”

Ray took the stairs leading down to the grid two at a time with Ryan in tow, with Ryan keeping a healthy distance between himself and the smoking trap that was now spitting sparks, although Ray failed to notice. “The what?” he asked as they entered the basement lab, which contained the containment unit itself.

The basement lab had been greatly enlarged through expansions and additions over the years and besides containing the spare equipment, parts and Ray’s personal workbench, it also contained a sub-basement which was the training area (Ryan remembered that one all too well, having had to chase a fat disgusting vomiting specter that for all the world looked like Mr. Creosote from Monty Python’s The Meaning of Life.)

The containment unit itself was a massive construction, taking up one whole wall to the left of the stairway. It was gleaming red and silver metal. The unit itself, once square, was now a circular shape with tubes, hoses and piping running into it. The inner circle was a pure titanium casing, and was ringed by flashing lights and caution stripe markings. In the center of the circle was a single metal door with a locking handle on it the same shape and size as a trap cassette. Ray walked up to the unit without hesitation, and opened the front lid.

He worked quickly, having done this more than once. He disconnected the trap cable and slid the steaming trap into the front loading slot, hitting the disengage button on the back of the trap battery, releasing the trap cassette, the middle part of the trap with the doors, into the now open trap lock gate. Shutting the front loading door, Ray quickly set the entry grid, neutralized the field with the control panel on the front of the unit, reached over, and pulled a lever. Instantly, the containment unit began to flash as an alarm sounded.

Ray didn’t bother to panic and neither did anyone else. This was perfectly normal.

A moment later, there was an odd noise, likes something, energy perhaps, behind sucked into the unit and them with a sigh, everything with silent with a final machine like clunk and the status light on the front of the unit turned green. Satisfied, Ray retrieved the now empty trap cassette and put it back into the trap, tossing both into the cleaning bin for re-charge later.

He went over to the equipment boxes and rummaged around while Ryan stood by watching in amazed silence. How the man found anything in the disorganized chaos that was the basement lab, he had no idea. Ray came over a second later, his arms full of instrumentation, including one that looked like a mutant eggbeater.

“Here. Let’s get these measurements done. I can’t wait to see what the valances run like on the Wright-Chonsey scale!”


“Any more calls, Janine?” Winston asked, setting the last proton pack down on the worktable to the right of the garage, slipping in the specially modified power cable into the cyclotron’s N-filter receptacle. With a small whine, the proton pack fell silent as the power cell light began to scroll a steady healthy blue.

Excellent. When equipment worked right, it was satisfying.

The redheaded secretary looked over at him quickly with her sharp blue eyes behind her rounded glasses, her earrings dangling, and her thick Brooklyn accent still painful at times but none of the Ghostbusters would trade her in a second. She was the best damn secretary and she had saved their ■■■■■ more than once, Winston recalled.

“No, Dr. Zeddemore. They stopped about an hour after you left for Amityville this morning.”

Nodding, Winston unzipped his flight suit and stepped out of it, revealing his standard issue black t-shirt and khaki pants. Kicking aside his combat boots, he wadded up the suit. They needed to get the uniforms cleaned as soon as possible. They had taken no chances since the appearance of the anti-Ghostbusters nine years ago from Peter not burning their first uniforms as he was told to. That had a helluva ride…

“Yo, Egon. Gimme your uniform. I’ll go grab the others and give them a good ion scrubbing.”

Egon quickly got out of his uniform, passed it over. He stood looking rather odd in a t-shirt and khakis as he was more commonly found in a cardigan, his old school tie and his dress pants. The man had brains of ten Einsteins but no sense of fashion or even what was social acceptable and was either purposefully neglectful of such things or as Winston and the others often believed, totally unawares. Winston made off laundry room upstairs while Egon moved across the garage, stopping just in front of Slimer’s tank. Slimer’s containment tank was a large square structure, covered in computers and sensors with a large open space with a specially treated glass on the front, lined with ectoplasmic replant fields, made with weak proton field emitters, the same kind that the Ghostbusters now wore sewn into their uniforms as a means of emergency field resuscitation.

He studied the field read outs and was satisfied. They indicated no field breaches and that Slimer, as best as the ghost could be, in a state of homeostasis. Egon and the other’s did not like containing him in this manner as he had become sort of a pet over the years but a court ruling brought on by the city and the owners of the Empire State building had imposed a sanction against Slimer in a case that had drawn on for years and despite Louis’s best attempts, failed miserably to excuse Slimer from the time that he was mutated and split into thousands of tiny Slimers and upon collecting himself, had temporarily grown to a giant size and of course, had slimed the Empire State building which took weeks to scrub clean. Slimer wasn’t happy when the final ruling was passed by the court and had initially resisted and seemed to hold what was his equivalent to a grudge. He frequently escaped and every time he did, there was always trouble.

“So it wasn’t a hoax after all?” a voice asked from behind him.

“Hmm?” he said, turning to face the source. Janine sat at her desk, looking up at him, twirling her pen between her fingers, her wireless head set around her ears.

“The Amityville case…after all those movies and books…it was real after all?”

Egon nodded. “ Absolutely. It was a manifestation of untold paranormal force in the land itself.”

“So what caused it? I mean, I couldn’t have been those people…right?”

“No. It wasn’t. It seems as if an Indian chief was buried on the land the house now stands on and later in the late 1800’s a farmer’s son had found the grave and had taken to playing kickball with the chief’s skull. He wasn’t too happy about it and took to ruining people’s lives.”

“Talk about losing your head.” she mumbled to herself as Egon turned to go upstairs and find something to eat. He wondered if the box of Twinkies was still in the cabinet or if Slimer had snagged it on his last escape.

“Before I forget, we did get one call while you were out. Some rancher in Utah. Wants you guys to come out and look at the place. Something about dead cows and weird lights.”

“Dead cows?” Egon asked incredulously, stopping about half way up the stairs, his hand on the rail, looking back down into the garage.

“Yeah, I know how it sounds but those are the orders. I put the worksheet on the kitchen table. Dr. Jones called twice about …him.” Janine nodded at the life size painting of Prince Vigo Von Homborg Deutschdorf, a 16th century tyrant, sorcerer, and genocidal madman. He stood, his arms on his waist, dressed in ancient armor with brown leathers, metal shoulder shields, spiked knuckles and a skull for a belt buckle.

He leaned against an altar and beneath him were the corpses of a thousand of his victims. Behind him in the same strange faded sepia tones of the painting were broken burning castles, and a river of what looked like pink-red water. The man’s face, framed by shoulder length brown-blonde hair and cruel blue eyes stared relentlessly.

The painting leaned up against the wall opposite of Janine’s desk and had done so since October 1992, when Vigo seemed to return to his painting after being defeated in 1989 by the Ghostbusters. He wasn’t happy about it and took to taunting the team and Janine whenever possible. Dr. Jones had been trying to recover the painting for at least a year, and so far, unsuccessfully because Mayor Mulligan thought that the firehouse was the best place for the painting.

“Right. Just keep sending him to Mulligan.”

Egon turned to go and Janine stopped him again.

“Oh! Egon! Don’t forget our date this Saturday. You promised, remember?”

Egon cringed. He had hoped she wouldn’t remember. It wasn’t that he didn’t like Janine. He did, very much but the feelings she raised within him were not the feelings of a scientist. It was hard to remain objective around her and he didn’t like that feeling. It wasn’t something that he could control.

“Right. Saturday.” he replied and quickly moved before she could pin him with more conversation. Janine smiled. She knew she had him whether he knew it or not.

“How sickeningly sweet…this human affection you have for your superiors. You women are weak. How far the world has sunk since. In my day, if—“

“Oh stick a can in it, would you? You’ve been stuck in a painting for what, four hundred years? What would you know about women?” Janine snapped at Vigo whose face contorted in rage.

“HOW DARE YOU MOCK PRINCE VIGO! I SHALL USE YOUR INTESTINES FOR ROPES! MAY THE STEEDS OF A THOUSAND OF MY KNIGHTS TRAMPLE YOU BENEATH THEIR HOOVES! YOU WILL ROT—“

Janine looked at the painting calmly as he raged, powerless, unable to do anything but rant. She simply reached into her drawer, pulled out a large silver container with a screw top lid, and set it down hard on her desk, making her papers and pen cup rattle. Vigo took one look at the can and shut up immediately.

“Good. You still now whose boss around here.” Janine said and went back to work.

The can was labeled with two words in bold black.

Paint Thinner.


Three hours later, the Ghostbusters were all around the dining table in the upstairs kitchen. They had eaten dinner and had thankfully, had no more calls since they had came back this morning. The class six had been dumped into the containment grid and for now, everything was surprisingly peaceful. Ray had been in the lab most of the day working up numbers and writing up the new entry in Tobin’s Spirit Guide. Egon had found the worksheet Janine had told him about buried under a pile of pizza boxes and had promptly called up Ray to go over it with him.

Ray had taken charge because this type of thing was more his expertise…if one could call it that. Right now, none of the Ghostbusters was too enthusiastic about another trip out west…that is except for Ray who was bubbling over with his usual enthusiasm for all things lethal and ectoplasmic.

“Come on guys. It will be fun! We’ll get out of the city for a few days. I mean listen to this…” he looked down at the work sheet and read off from the complaints section.

“ …flying ■■■■■ of light that killed three dogs via incineration of some kind. Strange things in the skies…not to mention the cattle being ripped up like that. Not a drop of blood anywhere on them!”

Peter scowled at Ray. It was his divine duty at times, he thought, his curse, to keep Raymond Stantz grounded to the here and now.

“Ray…for a moment…what if the cows are just being killed by scavengers?”

“But what about the flying things! And the dogs!”

“What about ‘em? Everyone sees a UFO once in a while. Probably swamp gas.” Venkman said, sipping his Coke.

“Peter, the dogs were incinerated.” Ray reminded him.

“I know. I read the worksheet. It specifically says liquidated. Ray, do you honestly buy into this UFO nut job stuff?” Venkman said, leaning back in his chair, the legs creaking as he did. Winston was leaning against the fridge sipping on a beer.

“Well, whether or not there are UFOs or monsters, Peter, a man’s livestock is being butchered by something he can’t explain and as of right now, neither can we. I say we be fair and check it out at least. Rule out the possibilities.” he said, moving over to the table and standing next to Egon who was tinkering with a PKE meter. The meter’s faceplate was off and Egon was adjusting the rhodium plates inside , his finger tips stained a deep purple from the metal’s reaction with human skin.

“We’ve never encountered or investigated cases of UFO’s directly before,” Egon stated, not looking up from the table.

“The data we could collect could prove invaluable to MUFON.” Ray added nodding.

“MUFON?” Ryan asked, crossing his arms.

“Mutual UFO Network. The world’s largest scientific organization dedicated solely to the purpose of studying and understand aerial and close encounter types one through five.” Ray advised him smartly as if he ate and breathed MUFON journals, which of course, he did.

“Oh.”

“I just don’t want to head out west again. Remember the last time we did? We almost got ourselves shot to death by a bunch of dead lawmen.” Peter sniped back lucidly.

“Peter, the Erp brothers were just defending Tombstone. They’re all down in the grid right now. That won’t happen again because no one is building any theme parks over Boot Hill. You used to love westerns. What happened?” said Ray pleading with his old friend.

“My tastes have shifted as a result of almost being killed by them. Same goes for trains.”

“You just don’t want to go because you have a date with Illyssa on Friday night.” Ray sniped expertly. “…and your afraid that you might be wrong.”

Sitting forward, Peter sighed. That did it. Yes, he had a date with the beautiful Dr. Illyssa Selwyn who was soon considering a permanent New York residency and no, he was not afraid. No one called Dr. Peter Venkman a coward. Not even Stantz himself.

“I bet you ten to one this is a load of bullshit. Mark my words. Ray, your gonna owe me BIG time for dragging me out into the desert again…You explain it to Illyssa. We’ll take it. Cool Breeze, go tell Janine to give Farmer John a ring and set an appointment.”

Ryan nodded and stood up, crossing the room to the fire pole and straddling it, vanished from sight as he slid down to the lower floors. “You won’t regret this Peter! I swear!” Ray said, giddy with the excitement of the chase. Peter thought to himself darkly, I admire the boy’s spirit but I still wanna clock him at times.

And as an add on thought, Yes, Ray, I have the terrible feeling that I am going to totally regret this.

Winston sat down his beer and made off for the dorms. “I’ll start packing. We flying or driving?”

Almost a unanimous chorus responded. “Flying!”

Roger that. Winston got started and while he was dragging out the suitcases from the storage racks in the rear hallway, he heard Egon mumble.

“…here’s hoping they don’t ship our gear to Hawaii again. “

Winston frowned and remembered the last time that happened. He made it a priority to see if he could secure first-class cargo options for the proton packs and gear. He did NOT feel like having another supernatural battle of the bands with any more rag time blue’s artists that had been dead fifty years.

Within four hours, everything was packed into the Ecto-1 and they were ready to head out the airport where Janine had somehow managed to score them all last minute second-class flights to Utah, round-trip no less plus a rental car when they touched down. The woman was a miracle. She was busy running around the office making sure everything was set for when they left. She would be staying over night in the station to field the calls and in case they needed support for the next few days.

She had walked back to her apartment and gotten her car, a yellow Volkswagen Beatle that had been rebuilt enough times to scare the German automaker out of the market for good. She had purposefully hidden the keys for it because the boys tended to take her car when the Ecto-1 went on the fritz and that never boded well for the poor automobile. She had parked it on the street and would pull it into the garage as soon as the Ghostbusters left.

Ray slammed the rear hatchback satisfied with a job well done.

“Did you pack the ectoplasmic scanning buffers and tuning capacitors?” Egon asked, consulting his checklist.

Ray nodded. “ Yup. All there. I also brought the field charger for the proton packs and spare batteries for the traps.”

“Good. “ Egon tossed the checklist into the back of the car. “Let’s move out.”

Ryan and Ray took the front seat with Winston while Peter grudgingly took the rear driver’s jump seat, slamming the back door hard enough to rattle the glass.

Egon nodded a goodbye to Slimer who flipped him off through the glass, much to Egon’s displeasure. With that, he turned to join the others. He was tired, but they could sleep on the flight over to Utah. He was about to reach the passenger rear door of Ecto-1 when a voice called him back, stopping him in his tracks instantly.

“Egon?”

He turned and saw Janine behind him. He felt his face flush warm and his ears burn as she closed the space between them, placing her arms around his waist.

“That’s a long trip. You all….you especially…be careful. I got a bad feeling about this one.” she sealed her words with a sudden and unexpected kiss. For half a second, Egon returned it, unable to help himself, before his comfort level evaporated and he pulled back as gently as he could, trembling slightly.

“I’m sorry…we need to go if we are going catch the plane in time. We’ll be careful.”

He turned and jumped into the car, shutting the door behind him, doing his best not to look back and almost failing even as his hands went to the lucky coin Janine had given him when they had went up to fight Gozer. It had hung around his neck on a thin chain since that day. She had one just like it. With a steady grumbling roar, the Ecto-1 pulled out of the station and Janine stood in the streets watching it vanish into the evening sunlight, its gleaming red tail lights shimmering like rocket exhaust before they too were gone.

Hitting the switch, she let the double garage doors close behind her and made sure the smaller side door was shut and locked tight as well. The sunlight was already starting to fade and she hit the lights, lighting up the garage and her office space with warmth from the hanging lamps above. She sat down and flipped on her desk light and settled in for a long night, sliding her wireless headset on.

Turning to her computer, she began to fill out the various forms associated with the credit card payment from the Amityville house and setting out appointments for the other calls that had came in. In the silence, her keys clacking as she typed was loud as she worked, trying not to think about her feelings, soon losing herself in her work, comforting herself with the thought of the massive amount of over time Dr. Venkman was going to owe her for this.

There was movement just above the computer monitor and she knew that Vigo was stirring about again. She saw his face turn to look down on her and saw his cruel mouth move to make a comment and before he could utter a sound she glared at him with a death glare.

He grumbled but said nothing and went back to being still.

In his tank Slimer floated lazily, probably meaning he was asleep. She missed the days when he was allowed to be out and free. They would spend the nights then playing cards and snacking on doughnuts. Egon had been trying to test Slimer’s ESP ability so far unsuccessfully, sliding the Zener cards into an ectoplasmically sealed drawer on the containment unit on the tank so that Slimer could get them but not escape.

Hmm. That means she could also slide in a normal deck of cards.

In the throes of an idea, she dragged her chair over to Slimer’s tank and returned to rummage into her purse, digging out their old deck of cards. Sitting down, she tapped three times on the glass, her fingers tingling slightly from the proton emitter field that protected it.

Slimer cracked an eye open and saw it was her before jumping totally awake. He seemed for a moment to hold her in contempt, his yellow orange eyes narrowing but softening as she held up the deck of cards.

“For old times sake?” she asked and Slimer nodded. She smiled and slid open the drawer on the front of the tank, neutralizing the grid. Slimer did not make a move which surprised her. Even if he did, Janine knew exactly where the spare proton packs and traps were and she knew how to use them. She shuffled the cards and set half of the deck inside the drawer, shutting it and resetting the grid.

“Let’s do poker…you still owe me five bucks and change.” she said smiling and the game began.

Emerson Ranch, Uintah Basin, Utah…

Ron shuffled in his sleep, turning over under the thick soft blankets and the comforter on the bed he shared with Becca. He

reached out for her and felt her bare shoulder. He woke up instantly. Her skin was as cold as ice. Opening his eyes in the dark, through the moonlight, he saw her breath freezing in the air, fogging up in puffs of white steam. He saw his own breath condense as well. The cold he had been immune to in his sleep suddenly hit him like a train, biting him, stabbing him to his core. His body began to shiver violently and he pulled the blankets and sheets up closer around Becca and wrapped his body around hers, his bare chest resting against her soft nightdress. Even with their combined warmth, the room was still freezing cold.

Ron looked around the room and saw nothing out of place, nothing odd out of the shadows of the nightstand, the dresser, the television, the dark open closet that hung silvery in the light of the full moon that streamed through the window facing the grazing pastures. Through the window glass, he saw the cows far off, barely discernable as they grazed and slept and a million stars studding the skies. Something caught his attention.

There. In the north east corner of the farthest field. A shimmering red-blue light, pulsing like a strobe light. It was joined by one, two, three, no four more! All of them were in formation, like a delta wing. They were connected by something, something huge and black, triangle shaped as whatever it was hovered in the air, as silent as death’s whisper. He watched, in amazement, unable to move, unable to wake Becca, as the craft moved lazily and then seemed to stop at a strange formation in the air itself, like an orange slit or rip. The rip began to spit sparks and lightning, soundless this far away as the craft nosed up against the rip.

To his shock, Ron watched as the entire craft vanished into the rip and for a split second, he could see into the rip, like a window to some other world. The sky beyond inside the tunnel was orange-hellish red, with a strange and surreal unearthly landscape of yellow grass and twisted black plants and trees as strange animals flew through the sky. Slowly, the rip began to close and finally it winked out of existence, leaving the night just as peaceful as before. Ron was about to close his eyes and try to keep his wife warm and hopefully get back to sleep when a new sound grabbed his attention.

A snuffling sound, like heavy deep breathing.

The breathing of a large animal.

He heard the floorboards creak and felt himself begin to shake as the fear came back. He turned slowly to face the darkened space at the foot of the bed where the room opened up. He could see nothing but he could hear something heavy walking around, snorting like a horse or a bull. The cold was most intense there and even through the blankets his feet went numb.

The closet door jumped as whatever it was in the room with them nudged it, as if testing an opponent.

The footsteps came closer, the wooden floors screaming under the invisible threats weight.

It was then that Ron had a horrifying realization. He realized that he could in fact see something. A barely visible heat mirage like shimmer. The second thing he realized made his stomach flip and leap into the area of his heart as it began to thud and pound, the sweat popping up on his forehead.

The thing from the clearing…the invisible beast that had charged the blonde hippie….it was here. In the house…in the room..at the foot of the bed.

The footsteps stopped at the foot of the bed and without warning two immense weights suddenly dropped on the bottom of the bed, right near his and Becca’s feet. He felt the sharp indent of claws and felt the unholy power of the thing as it climbed onto the bed bottom, the bed frame cracking loudly like a gunshot.

He felt the nose of the thing, hot and wet, flaring as it began to nose around in the covers. He could see the indents it made but not see it. He felt something hot and wet snake around his ankle as its invisible teeth raked his skin, shredding the covers.

Unable to take anymore, he reached over and flipped on the bed side light.

The reaction was instant.

The beast screamed in fury, jarring Becca awake. The bed thumped up loudly and crashed back down as the beast retreated. For a terrible second, Ron and Becca got a flash of the beast’s true form. A ghastly long distended set of reptile jaws, lined with razor sharp yellow teeth, huge red and black eyes, a long panther like body and thick neck.

It vanished with barely audible bamph of air and left behind the stench of sulfur and the smallest flash of orange light. Without even waiting, Becca leaped out of the bed and ran for Jake’s room. A few seconds later, Ron heard their son stir as his mother woke him up saying he was okay. Ron’s heart began to slow. This was all new and far too close. The lights, the strange animal killings, the UFOs…those were all somehow remote. This was the first time anything major had happened inside the house…something more than misplaced objects and the occasional weird sound. He thought back to the snuffling he had heard before in the house as he walked down the dark hall ways at night to use the bathroom or make breakfast. Had that been what he had been hearing? Had that monster been in the house the whole time?

Sick with terror, he found the strength to get out of bed and go to his family.

They huddled together in the living room the rest of the night and none of them slept until the sun rose the next morning.

Vernal Utah, Uintah Basin

Ray Stantz was awake, wide-eyed and, much to his friends annoyance, showed no sign of slowing down. He was in full investigation mode and nothing short of a full dimensional cross-rip would slow him down. He had spent the entire first leg of the flight from New York to Utah theorizing. First, his main idea was that the aliens were using the cows to study human hemoglobin phenotypes. Then a new one had struck him, that it may have been Satanic cults looking to practice some kind of weird sex rites but then why leave the cow behind?

He had been extremely vocal about these theories, often expounding on them much to the disgust of his fellow passengers and more than a few withering stares from the pretty blonde flight attendant especially after he and Egon had gotten into a debate on how exactly in the thousands of mutilation cases had the cow’s rectums been totally cored out. Egon thought it was trans-dimensional beaming while Ray was thinking more along the lines of mechanical, something like a large coffee-can sized saw vacuum.

It was at this point that the other Ghostbusters had woken up and he and Egon had found themselves at the center of very irate stares that spoke volumes. Egon had wisely shut up after Peter reminded him that he knew where the spare key to his apartment was and Janine was well over due for some vacation time. Ray had simply shrugged and went back to reading over the case file. Some hours later, they had landed at Vernal Regional Airport and had to wait until nine in the morning to pick up their rental car from Avis. He glanced over at the darkened Avis vendor booth in the air port main thoroughfare. At this hour, it along with several shops behind it were closed.

The Vernal Regional Airport was relatively small and was serviced only by one major commercial carrier and mostly used for general purpose aviation. It covered two hundred and fifty four acres and was equipped with a whopping two asphalt runways. It was situated out in the middle of no where among the red deserts and scrub of Utah. The others, jet-lagged, were not exactly thrilled with being so far from the city and back in the West. Ray thought of it as an adventure while the others, particularly Peter, acted as if it was kryptonite.

Looking over at his friends, Ray smiled, a smirk of recognition and of old times. Peter had passed out with his head hanging over the back of the chair, snoring loudly, his luggage on the ground sprawled around him. Winston had curled up on a bench opposite them, his six foot plus frame stretched out as he slept, an airport brochure open on his chest. Egon had fallen into perfect serenity sitting straight up. He was probably doing the lucid dream experiment again, Ray supposed, judging by the rapid eye movement behind the man’s glasses. Ryan had just given up and sat sideways, his arms making a pillow as he rested his head there. Looking back to the task at hand, Ray yawned and tried to focus. He had one of the Mark 2 PKE meters out and was reading through the electronic version of Tobin’s Spirit Guide version 2.0.

The meter, the shape and size of an Iona shoe polisher was black and well worn. A data port was hidden near the back so that they could download all readings taken from the field for later analysis and a belt D-ring clip ran around the base of the handle. The face of the meter was a large flat screen that was actually touch sensitive.

Twin wing-like antennae were housed in the side of the meter and would raise or lower to indicate the level of PKE activity along with a series of lights along the wings and the screen would correspondingly give a valance read out. If the scan mode was activated, the readings were cross referenced instantly with known PKE pulse scans as each paranormal entity or class of entities had their own unique paraphysical PKE valance frequency signature like an ectoplasmic fingerprint) in the onboard memory of the meter; this pulled up the corresponding entry to Tobin’s Spirit Guide, the newest version that Ray and Egon themselves had been adding to continuously with paranormal subjects and entities.

The new version of the meter had proven invaluable to data collection and as a field assistance guide. Ray almost missed carrying around his old worn version of Tobin’s and kept it in the chest at the foot of his bed. Besides being more functional, the Mark 2 was far less prone to exploding when it encountered extreme PKE fields, something that the Mark 1 had been especially prone to. The meter beeped a his fingers traced the edge of the screen, scrolling slowly as the entry on cattle mutilations moved by in white simple text:

*“…Bovine excision, colliliquolly known as cattle mutilations or “mutes” in the vernacular, is the killing of farm livestock, particularly cows under unusual or suspicious circumstances that often precludes a rational explanation. Other animals besides cows have been thuse perversely mutilated, including sheep, horses, bison, dogs and at least one report of a human being in 1954 in Brazil during the flag of UFO sightings that claimed several lives.

Contextual evidence of a standard mutilation is that the animal is often found dead without any cause of physical death being apparent or the death occurring with such speed as to be impossible. Also present are extreme wounds with often eerie surgical presicion. Often, the sexual organs are removed, as are the tongue, eyes, usually one of the ears and the body has been completely exsanguinated with no external blood spatter or leakage. Often the fur of some animals has swirl patterns in it, as if spun a high rate of speed while others show incredible force injuries as if dropped from a great height. At rare mute sites, high levels of a strange ionizing radiation have been found, consistent with a nucleic electron field which in theory should not be possible. Also of interest in some cases has been the discovery of a strange semi-fluid dark colored substances that fades in a matter of hours.

Various theories have been put forth as to what could be the cause of the grisly attacks including extra-terrestrials, Satanic cults, natural predators and even cryptoozological beasts such as the Chupacabra. At least two separate Federal investigations have tried to understand the phenomenon in the United States. Charles Fort recorded cases dating back to the early 19th and 20th centuries but the phenomenon did not get wide spread attention until September 9th, 1967 when a saddle pony named Lady was found mutilated beyond recognition in Alamosa, Colorado. On September 7 1967, Agnes King and her son Harry noted that Lady had not returned to the ranch at the usual time for her water. Harry found Lady on September 9. The horse’s head and neck had been skinned and de-fleshed to the bare bone. The bones were white and clean. The cuts were utterly precise, as if performed with a razor scalpel. There was no blood at the scene and there was a strong medicinal odor in the air. The next day, Harry and Agnes returned to the scene with Agnes’ brother and sister-in-law, Mr. and Mrs. Berle Lewis.

They found a lump of skin and horse flesh; when Mrs. Lewis touched it, the flesh oozed a greenish fluid which burned her hand. Mrs. Lewis contacted the United States Forest Service, and Ranger Duane Martin was sent to investigate. Among other tasks, Martin "checked the area with a civil defense Geiger counter. He reported finding a considerable increase in radioactivity about two city blocks from the body. Later, Martin would state, “The death of this saddle pony is one of the most mysterious sights I’ve ever witnessed … I’ve seen stock killed by lightning, but it was never like this…”*

Ray’s face was furrowed in concentration as he read the entry, remembering that he himself had written it years ago as part of a paper for the Journal of Parapsychology. Seeing the familiar dates and names brought back images of Lady, the horrific wounds and the terrifying combination of raw power and grace that the mutilations seem to entail. The sun had finally began to warm up the airport as the late night arrivals, pilots and crew moved about, sipping cups of coffee. Outside the streetlights finally died and the sky began to turn blue. He looked at his watch.

8:58 AM which meant it was really 7:58 AM. Timezones, he sighed. He suddenly felt how tired he was and decided, that, in order to pursue this case, the guys had the right idea after all. He shut off the meter, tucked it under his arm and set the alarm on his watch. Reaching into his suitcase he dragged out his uniform and balled it up under his head and laid back for at least an hour of sleep. He probably wouldn’t even sleep, he reasoned. There was so much going on in his mind. So many possibilities and connections.

He was asleep the second his closed his eyes and didn’t wake up until an hour and ten minutes later to his watch beeping at him vehemently. He quickly woke up, nearly dropped the PKE meter and stood up, letting his uniform fall into the seat behind him. His hair was rumpled and he blinked owlishly. The others were still snoring loudly and he looked behind them over the AVIS counter.

It was lit up brightly and he shrugged. Time to get rolling.

He crossed the tile floor, his tennis shoes echoing loudly in the large space as the drone of early morning planes outside began to pick up. The AVIS booth was actually rather plain, Ray saw and not exactly what he had in mind for a national corporation that had outlets in every air port from Chicago to San Juan. The reception desk came up to his belly and was the color of an off white yellowed curtain. On it sat an aging computer terminal and a single line phone. Behind the counter against the wall was a large set of cubby holes and shelves, each numbered with a set of keys. Plastered around it and the computer monitor were yellow sticky notes.

The attendant was a young man, maybe in his early twenties that was covered in enough acne to make Ray wonder if he had gotten too close to a Class five dermitite inducer. He wore the standard red AVIS vest with a white name tag on it that red “Eugene”.

“Can I help you?” he asked sleepily as Ray approached the counter, looking about as enthusiastic as someone who has to get a tooth filled.

“Hi there, Ray Stantz. Here to pick up a rental.” said Ray, leaning on the counter.

“Name and major credit card please.” Eugene parroted with a smile so large and fake it would have sent Jaws packing. Ray fished out his wallet, dug around past all the doughnut and fast food receipts from Burger King and the Tai Chicken, found the company credit card and handed it to the boy. “Ghostbusters, Inc. Name is Melnitz, Janine.”

Eugene’s eyes widened a bit as he took the black credit card with the red and white “No-Ghost” logo that Janine herself had designed. Running the card and the information, he clumsily typed in the information and a moment later he turned around and grabbed a set of keys out of a top left cubby. Attached was a set of keys with black rubber hard plastic grips and a tag that read AVEXPLR-90.

“It’s aisle 8, row ten. It’s new so you had to have the insurance added.”

“Gotcha. We’ll take care of it. The Ghostbusters are professional in every regard sir and motor vehicle care and safety are top priorities.” Ray informed him and went to wake up the others.

“This is it!” Ray said as he lead the others outside into the early morning air, air that already smelled crisply of desert sun, dirt and sand. As they walked through the parking lot, a small commuter plane touched down on the runway, it’s wheels throwing up puffs of blue-grey smoke as they squealed and squawked, the rubber catching and the plane rolling to a slow smooth stop. In the distance, the Uintah Mountains rose in sharp contrast to the land around them, towering and majestic, their snow capped peaks and steel gray rock faces looking deadly and mysterious as the legends that permeated the very land around them.

They were walking through the parking lot, passing row after row of AVIS rental cars, mostly sedans of varying makes and models. Ray stopped behind an SUV and Peter felt his heart sink.

It was a new sport utility vehicle, one of the new 1993 Ford Explorers. It was a deep candy red with black leather upholstery, large Dueler tires, a set of black trimmed running boards and gleaming chrome bumpers. Black luggage racks lined the roof and the silver XLT badge winked in the early morning sun. The truck was beautiful and Peter knew it was probably not going to end well for the truck and that they would be footing the bill for God knew how much. Every time they had a rental car it happened.

Ray hit the release button on the key fob and with a low thunking, all the doors and the trunk unlatched. Setting down his suitcases, Ray twisted the rear hatch release and with a click, the rear glass and lift gate come up. The rear was compact, more so than he thought it would be, but it would do.

“Here, hand me the proton packs and gear cases first. I want them secured.” he said as he picked up the first proton pack case and hefted it into the rear of the truck.

“Good idea. A mass loss of containment in an enclosed space would be detrimental.” Egon agreed, handing him the next one. Winston came up and took the keys from Ray’s hands and opened the driver’s door. The inside of the car smelled like leather and car polish, a bright fruity smell. He adjusted the seat and slid his six foot plus frame behind the black wheel. Inserting the key, he turned the engine over and it came to life instantly, a steady clean rumble. It was a V6 from the sound of it. At least they wouldn’t be so hard on gas. He checked the dashboard and saw it also had electronic four wheel drive.

Good. That meant none of that changing lugs business and it would be nice to have a truck for a change that could go off road.

“Define detrimental, Egon in words of two syllables or less.” Peter snarked, half seriously worried about the possibility bad things when Egon mentioned anything that was “detrimental.”

Peter grabbed the other proton pack case and lifted it up onto the bumper, the weight caused the car to sag slightly. He let Ray arrange the other gear cases while Egon explained.

“Try to imagine all sound and light in the world as you know it ceasing instantly, reversing order as a radioactive fireball the size of two of these trucks erupts from behind your seat, incinerating you so fast that it would leave blast burn shadow on the rocks around you and you wouldn’t be able to find the smallest piece with you with an electron microscope.”

*Oh. Detrimental. Right. That explained it. *

Peter looked at the proton pack cases and decided it was better to be elsewhere. He shoved it back as far as it would go and quickly claimed the passenger seat next to Winston, his door shutting behind him with a solid thunk.

The packing finished, Egon and Ray jumped into the rear, pulling on seat belts as Winston put the truck in gear and pulled out of the parking lot, stopping at the exit to the main road as morning traffic sped by. Through the windshield, the wind swept rocky ground and mesas were all that ruled the view for miles around. In the distance, the small town of Vernal sparkled, like an oasis.

“Which way are we headed, Ray?” Winston asked, easing out into traffic.

Ray fished out the map he had bought and double checked it, tracing his finger along the inked routes and roads.

“Take a left here and its practically a straight shot for the next twenty miles.”

“Great..” Winston grumbled, throwing the truck into reverse and pulling about an astounding maneuver with the bulky truck by whipping around to the left and squirming through traffic and finally pulling out onto the highway. The heat was already starting to rise and Peter reached down and flipped on the air-conditioner. The temperature guage on the overhead information center next to the sunvisor displayed in green LCD font: 86 F.

“Twenty miles? We’re gonna need some tunes. Let’s see what passes for music in double nits ville.” said Peter as he reached over and cut on the radio. Instantly a deep sonoarous radio DJ came on welcoming the soon to be blistering morning sun.

“Good morning, Vernal! It is 9:30 AM and the forecast is looking great! We have a record low set for yesterday at 105 degrees and today is promising to break new high records. We could see a chance for heavy thunderstorm activity later tonight but otherwise, looking great so listen with me to Ain’t Goin Down Till The Sun Comes Up by the one and only Garth Brooks, only here on KLCY Eagle Country 105.5 FM!”

Peter rolled his eyes. He was NOT going to survive this trip, he could feel it in his bones as Garth Brooks belted out the song, stabbing his ears with needles of white hot musical pain.

*….Six o’clock on Friday evening

Momma doesn’ t know she’s leaving

'Til she hears the screen door slamming

Rubber squealin’, gears a-jamming

Local country station just a blaring on the radio….*

The sun finally exploded over the sun baked cliffs and the day began as the world woke up and time began to move forward in its ever steady unending march towards the unknown and the strange.

Emerson Ranch, Uintah Basin, Utah….

Over an hour later, two missed turns and what had to be the longest god forsaken road on the planet earth, the Ghostbusters finally saw the entrance gate to the Emerson Ranch. The landscape had changed drastically. They were now twenty miles from any kind of civilization in any direction with wind swept plains, red and brown earth, rocks and scrub stretching out like a desert carpet juxtaposed with the dark forests and green pastures of the ranch with the cliffs and rock faces of the snow capped Uintah range in the distance. Canyons and rivers reached out like elemental fingers and the heat was sweltering.

Ray’s forehead sparkled with sweat as the Explorer’s air conditioning struggled to keep up with the temperatures outside the truck. Winston slowed and they turned, making a graceful left onto the mile long driveway that led back to the Emerson ranch. The road turned from asphalt to well worn gravel. The truck bounced along the ruts painfully and one particularly rough jolt sent Peter’s head cracking into the roof. Ray winced at the sound his skull made.

“You know…Winston, I’d admire your driving skills and I really mean that…however…the idea is to get there without a concussion.” Peter growled rubbing his head, feeling the knot already form.

“Sorry, Venkman. We’re running late already. Remember the thirty minute discount rule?” Winston replied not even taking his eyes off the road, deftly avoiding a larger dip.

“The what?” Venkman grimaced, biting back tears as his head hit the roof again thanks a well placed crater in the road. Behind the Explorer, gravel dust filled the air, billowed up and finally began to fade as it reached for heaven.

“The thirty minute discount is our answer to customer demands for punctuality. Every thirty minutes we are late, we knock a thousand off of the bill. You came up with it I think after Mrs. Peddlemyer’s case with the singing toilet, remember? You really do care about the customer, Pete!” Ray said digging around in his knap sack behind the seat.

For half a split second, Peter wanted to throttle him. Just enough until he almost passes out. Just a little.

He settled for a scowl and went back to rubbing his head. A thousand off? No way in hell after this little sojourn.

“There’s the house. Looks normal enough.” Egon said, whipping out his PKE meter, flipping it on, adjusting his glasses on his nose.

“Yeah well, we’ve seen that before.” Zeddemore replied, adjusting the rear-view mirror, meeting eyes with Ray who had turned back around, water bottle in hand. Unscrewing the cap and taking a long gulp of now semi-warm water, Ray agreed.

“Oh yeah, Z. Ms. Rogers. That was more normal that I can care to go through again.”

“Come on guys; I saw through that a million miles away. Little old lady and a perfect little gingerbread house. It screamed trap.”

“Then how come you played body host for lizard lips and her fireball canary?” Winston cracked laughing as he pulled to a stop in front of the ranch house, killing the engine. Peter shook his head. “No idea what you’re talking about and no jokes about Slimer’s hair care product line. You guys wore that out for weeks afterward.”

“End of the line,” Egon noted, and reached for the door, eager to stretch his legs.

Never a good turn of phrase, Ray thought as he opened his door and set foot on the gravel driveway. The house itself was modest, single story, with a basement, ranch style, very common to ranches and farms. It was light in color with a single plate glass window that looked out of the living room. A large wraparound porch extended from the front door and went around back. Deck chairs sat arranged around it and everything looked perfectly normal. A Dodge truck sat outside the two- car garage and car tire imprints where another car had sat next to it were evident. Ray wondered where the other car had gone. Everything seemed…

Then he saw Ron Emerson on the porch and he froze where he stood.

Ron Emerson, stood on the porch, his tall powerful frame looking like it was about to collapse. His skin was drawn and his mouth set like a line in stone. His eyes were large and dark and beneath them were dark circles as if he had not slept in days. His hands trembled but being the man that he was, Ray thought that he was doing a hell of a good job trying to appear normal and not worried at all.

The man is terrified out of his wits.

Suddenly it became apparent to Ray that he couldn’t hear any birds. No chirps, grunts, squeals…nothing. Not a single animal sound. The wind blew here eerily and it was colder than it was in town. In the distance, the trees of the dark forest swayed like snakes. The green pasture grasses, beautiful, flowed in the breeze like green ocean waves and somewhere, a cow finally called out, a long deep mournful call. Ray snapped out of his moment and followed Winston around the truck. Venkman had slid on his sunglasses and stood his hands across his chest surveying the house and yard, his eyebrows reaching for his hairline. Ray could tell he wasn’t impressed.

Winston made the first move, stepping up to Ron and extending his hand.

“Good morning, Mr. Emerson. We’re the Ghostbusters. I’m Dr. Winston Zeddemore,” he said , indicating himself and then to each of the Ghostbusters in turn. “Dr. Egon Spengler,” Egon nodded and grunted. He was eye ball deep in his PKE meter which was disturbingly going off steadily, its wings sticking almost straight around, the lights going rapidly to and fro. “Dr. Peter Venkman, our chairman, Dr. Ray Stantz, our engineer and Ryan Johnson, our experimental equipment technician.”

Ryan was about to say hello, going so far as to open his mouth when Venkman stepped in front of him and removed his sunglasses.

“So what’s the story with this place? I don’t see any little green men.” he said, and Ray flinched as Winston and Egon and Ryan all three gave Peter the stares of death.

Ron paused for a moment and pinned Peter with a look that had the weight of the world in it, the weight of a man who has been beaten into submission and is hanging on by the skin of his teeth to survive, if only to add hubris to his tormentors. He stepped down the two steps to the ground and stood nose to nose with Peter and put a finger on his chest.

“Listen here, Mr. Venkman,” Ron began and Peter almost corrected him to doctor, but the look on the man’s face shut him instantly. “ I don’t care about paying you. I’m an honest man. I’ll do that. I can’t fire you because I need your help…all of you. But around here…Around here its what you don’t see that will kill you. Little green men? Tell that to my dogs and my cows…Tell that to my family who is being tormented by a thing the size of a horse running around my land and sneaking into our bedrooms at night. Yeah, little green men. I wish.”

Peter swallowed and felt he was lucky to have his front teeth. While still not buying into the man’s stories, he knew as a psychologist what people behaved like when they lied. He had seen some schizophrenics and nutballs during his summer internship in his last year in college, the one that Egon had practically got him through. This man was not lying. He was on the verge of a breakdown.

A cold feeling began to grow just a bit in his core and Peter looked over at Egon who had wondered off. Egon was deeply into his measurements, as he took readings from ambient PKE fields and by the look on his face, something was definitely not right. The meter was beeping and flashing, whirring like it had gone bad.

“Egon, what do we got?” he asked as the others watched the brilliant genius keep going, his head down, face focused on the screen of the meter.

“I’m not entirely sure yet. I’d like to get some more readings before I make a call but there is definitely something very strong here…”

“So what do we do?” Ryan asked, looking from the home owner to Egon who had now doubled back, shutting off his meter and sliding it into his chest pocket. “Right now, based on these readings, I think we should create a secure perimeter and then we can explore the property and investigate the scene of the incidents. We need more data.”

“Right. I’ll get the PKE disruptors. Z, help us out. You too, Hoss. It will take a good twenty minutes to get them all set and charged.” Ray motioned Ryan and Winston to follow him.

“I’ll interview the witness.” Peter said and turned to look at the homeowner who narrowed his eyes dangerously.

“How about you and me head out of the heat and let these boys do their…work. Some personal background would be nice so we could know a bit more about what we ‘re up against.” he said and Ron nodded, though reluctantly. As Egon and Peter went into the house to interview Ron, Winston and Ray and Ryan were hauling strange looking devices out of the back of the explorer in pieces and began setting up at the corners of the house.

The first of the disruptors was assembled fairly quickly. Fully assembled it, it looked like a tall metal and transparent cylinder with three steel legs that held the unit to the ground. The central shaft seemed to telescope into itself and was made of a reflective almost clear material that ended in a porcelain cap that had four metal wings hinged around the edges that for the time being were pointed down. A dark red light sat on top of the capacitor tip and a cable about four feet in lenth stretched away from the thick base to a pedal, not unlike those used on the ghost traps with twin red lights, also dark on it. The pedal in turn led to a large round battery sink that was about the size of a propane tank.

“Go set up those other three. One at each corner. Remember, we need the fields to converge in order to provide an adequate shield. Don’t jostle the batteries too much. The urananium core still has a few kinks.” Ray instructed and Ryan nearly dropped the battery he was holding.

“Thanks Ray. You make this job so safe I could cry.” He commented under his breath as he went to set up another disruptor.

Sliding out his PKE meter from his pocket, Ray took a valence. The air was hot with PKE energy and the meter was ■■■■■■■ solidly into the upper scales.

“Hmm.”

Kneeling, he adjusted the frequency variation matrix on the disruptor’s base, twisting the dial to the right. Satisfied, he hit the power switch and stood back, stepping on the pedal once, making it click loudly. The second the click sounded, he pulled his foot off. A loud electrical sigh came from the disruptor was the generator fired and the red light on the top of the capacitor began to flash as a strange white energy began to pulse back and forth along the main shaft humming as it did and as the main shaft and capacitor began to rise as it began to rise.

“Be sure to set the disruptors on 595 megajoules, with a PKE flux of point three four!” Ray shouted out as Winston and Ryan finished assembling the last three disruptors and activated them. Twenty minutes later, the PKE disruptors had risen to their full six foot heights, the shafts locking and clicking into place, the red light on top swirling faster just as the white proton pulses moved up and down the central core. At the peak of their extension, the disruptors wings extended, all four at once, opening like the petals of a strange alien flower. At their apex, the wings locked and the air shimmered. There was a strange metallic clang and for a split second blue-white ripples came off of the wings and then were gone, leaving the air around the disruptors feeling electric and charged, almost thicker than normal.

Ray stood back and checked. All four disruptors seemed to be working because the atmosphere around the house had already lifted and felt almost normal.

“Let’s head back in and get the full scoop.” he said as he mounted the steps and stepped inside. Winston and Ryan followed, closing the door behind them. The living room Ray noticed was peaceful and spacious, with ceilings a good ten feet high and plenty of space. The open floor plan of the house made it much more inviting and seemingly larger inside that it appeared. The floors were polished hardwood and covered by a thick red and white Persian rug. It smelled of leather and the slight tang of apples.

The sofa and chairs were all dark brown soft leather and between them sat a glass coffee table on top of which were the usual magazines and a collection of family portraits. In them, Ray saw a boy, probably the son, smiling and laughing with his friends and a pretty blonde girl that he took to be the girlfriend. A simple yet beautiful dark haired woman stood arm in arm with Ron in riding gear next to a huge prize Angus bull. That had to be Rebecca, his wife. So where were they now?

Ron looked up from where he sat in the arm chair and nodded for them to sit down on the couch next to Peter while Egon stood behind the couch, his arms crossed, his long face deep in thought. The couch was just as comfortable as it looked, Ray thought and it felt good to not be in a hard car seat.

Ron took a sip from a tall glass of what appeared to be tea, the dark amber liquid so cold that the glass had water droplets running down the side.

“Help yourself to the fridge….Now…where was I?” Ron asked. Apparently, they had interrupted Peter’s interview.

“The cattle mutilations I believe, sir.” Egon reminded him.

“Right…those. Lost a few head of cattle in the last few months. Eight total. All prize animals. Each one worth thousands of dollars. Its breaking me. My wife and son and I..we can’t sleep. I’ll never forget the bodies…nothing natural could do that.”

“What about what your neighbors say?” Peter asked, watching the man’s ticks intently.

“What about em? It’s got them too. They have a word for it around here…all the killings.”

“What word?” Ray asked, leaning forward. Ron turned to look at him.

“Mutes.”

Ray frowned. “This is Ute land, right? Do they have any stories about the area that might help us?”

Ron shook his head. “Only one and that is that they won’t come near my land…been a rule for at least fifty years.”

“Why?” Winston probed, crossing his legs.

“Because, Dr. Zeddemore…they say my ranch is cursed…that it’s damned…that the yee naaldlooshii haunts this place.” Ray blanched and felt a cold wave run through him despite himself.

“Come again tongue twister?” Venkman frowned.

“It means ‘he who goes on all fours’, Dr. Venkman.” Ron told him and with that looked up at Ray. “You know the word, don’t you?”

Nodding, Ray silently affirmed that yes, he was familiar with it, the dark worry clouding his face looking like a storm swirling.

“What? What does that mean?” Egon looked down at Ray and suddenly Ray felt everyone’s eyes on him. He swallowed once, knowing that to even speak the name could supposedly bring down the creatures wrath but the word left his lips in a hushed whisper.

“It’s a Navajo word but the Utes know it as well…..Skinwalker.”

Looking out the window at the PKE disruptors, he hoped to whatever God Winston believed in, that Ray himself wondered about, that they would be enough to keep it out. On the edge of the blue morning sky, strange storm clouds had begun to build and in the distance, thunder rumbled ominously.

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Emerson Ranch, Uintah Basin, Utah…

“Skinwalkers?” Winston asked, his brows furrowing as he looked from Ron to Ray in confusion. Since all eyes were on him, Ray decided the ball was in his court. Sitting forward, he explained.

“The skinwalker is a type of witch or shaman who is seen by his tribe to be a nexus of evil power. They have the ability to shape-shift into animals or creatures. They can travel huge distances in minutes and have a taste for violence and blood. Most people are familiar with the Navajo, the Dine version, but what they don’t know is that many Native American cultures have stories of skinwalkers and all are equally feared. Most people won’t even mention its name for fear that the skinwalker will sense that its being talked about and come to claim the speaker.”

“You’re talking witch doctors and he is talking dead cows. Whats the connection?” Venkman asked , throwing his hands up in surrender.

“I don’t think it’s the skinwalker though,” Ron said, setting his glass down on the table, the ice cubes inside it clinking softly.

“Why do you think that?” Egon asked, taking out his PKE meter again, switching it on.

“ Don’t know but something tells me it doesn’t belong in this world…even Skinwalkers are part of this world if you believe in those damn things. I’ve almost seen it..its huge…big eyes…teeth…but its almost like you can’t see it…like its camouflaged or something.”

“How so?” asked Ray standing up from the couch and stretching his back, casting a wary eye out the window at the shimmering PKE disruptors.

“You ever seen a heat mirage? Same thing.”

Nodding, Ray looked over at the others.

“I have an idea. We should try to lure it out, see if we can get a look at it. Mr. Emerson?”

Looking up at the auburn haired Ghostbuster, Ron raised a skeptical eyebrow.

“I’m going to need a cow. I can’t promise its going to come back alive..but I need one. Egon? Did you bring your diagnostics kit? You need to do a necropsy on that cow that Ron found. Maybe there are trace contaminants that can help us figure out what we are dealing with. Winston, Ryan and I will stake out the fields tonight. Peter will stay here with Egon. We good with the plan?” Ray asked, rubbing his hands together, already deep in the throes of the thrill of the chase.

“I’ll get the diagnostic kits and the packs. Let’ gear up and get started. There’s a storm coming and I get the feeling its going to be a wild night.” Winston said, moving towards the front door. Peter and Ryan hung back watching as everyone began to hurry about in a flurry of activity.

They looked at each other with raised eyebrows.

“So, here we go again.” Ryan commented, shrugging. Peter nodded. “Yup. Same old same old. Something new in the woods and we just have to go after it. Typical.” he muttered darkly.

Ron just tried to stay out of the way as the Ghostbusters began to set up a command post, hauling gear in and out of the house, making the kitchen home base. When Ryan passed by him carrying in the Mark 2 proton pack, his personal pack as the equipment technician, Ron reached out and stopped him.

“What should I do?”

Ryan considered, looked down at the proton pack and gave the best advice that he could think of.

“Duck and cover.”

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**Emerson Ranch, Uintah Basin….

…later that night….**

The night sky was dark and the stars above were hidden behind a now invisible layer of clouds that were thick, pendulous with moisture. The rain had not yet come and the heat of the day was still strong though it was cooling considerably. Thunder grumbled almost constantly now, vibrating the air as it trucked through the ebony skies. Lightning flashed in the clouds but had not yet descended to kiss the earth and the hot electrically charged wind blew in from the west, ruffling the grass in shadowy waves as the fields moved in tandem to a ghost dance that only they could hear. Ray, Winston and Ryan had driven into the eastern pastures in Ron’s truck and had been out in the fields for several hours, starting their vigil at twilight.

The truck sat about a hundred yards to the west of the Ghostbusters, dark and silent as they lay on a slight rise, a bit of a small hill from which they could see most of the fields and pastures stretching away to the eastern most border as well as see the woods that surrounded the property fairly well. In this direction, the headlights from passing cars never pierced the night and the house and the glowing PKE disruptors were impossible to see. It was like being put out at sea, a sea of shadows with no land in sight, only endless night.

The ground was hard beneath his belly and the rocks of the outcrop were poking up through the fabric of his uniform as Ray lay there, on his stomach, watching the darkness through a pair of ecto-goggles, which resembled night vision goggles. They were heavy on his face and he could feel the sweat under the rubber gasket seal around the edges. The straps on the side and the top were digging into his scalp and the bridge of his nose was burning. He blinked and looked out once again at the rolling plains.

The goggles sensors whirred and clicked as he adjusted the focus and the lenses spun. Inside the goggles, the visual read out red zero psychokinetic readouts, negative on the KEV scale…nothing. The PKE meters had also been reading nothing for the last four hours. The proton pack was heavy like one ton weight on his back and he felt his legs going to sleep as the wind blew through his auburn hair.

Next to him, Winston was also scanning with a set of ecto-goggles while Ryan was running periodic sweeps with the giga-meter, the twin antenna’s on top dark and unmoving.

Ray checked his watch.

11:30 PM.

Sighing, he pushed up the ecto-goggles and sat up, sitting back on his butt as he cracked his back as best as he could, the hose that connected the particle thrower to the pack making it difficult but he managed regardless. He reached up and keyed up on the headset he wore.

“Team one to Home Base. Do you read?”

With a hiss of radio static, Peter’s voice came back a few seconds delayed and sounded oddly tinny. Stupid radios.

“Roger that and I think a 10-4. House is quiet and Egon is still playing doctor in the barn.”

“Same here, “ Ray said, glaring out over the darkened fields as a cow let out a low soft mooing. “ It’s deader than that time you ran your underwear up the flagpole on campus.”

A crackle of radio noise later. “Hey, I don’t recall it being that dead. The ladies loved it.”

“Peter,” Winston said, loud enough for the mike to pick up his voice, “ you told us there was one chubby lady who had a crush on you since high school. I don’t think she counts as a crowd going wild.”

“Come on Winston…I took her out on ONE date…just one. That doesn’t make me a chubby chaser.”

“If I recall,” Ryan piped up with a grin on his face, “ when we busted those opera ghosts in Times Square last year, that one dead fat lady was chasing after you like a hotdog cart in a desert.”

“Yo..cool breeze. Do the words ‘pay cut’ mean anything to you?” sniped Peter. All three of them laughed so hard that they didn’t notice the first strange orange flash in the middle of the field. It was small, flickering in and out, like a wire with a short in it. The cows in the field stopped eating and raised their heads to look at it, their eyes wide and staring. If Ray could have seen them, he would have recognized the expression that took root there immediately.

Fear.

Thunder growled and the lightning became more intense. Ray wiped his brow.

“You know, I don’t think we are gonna get anything. Maybe we can try again tomorrow night.” he let off the mike key and Peter’s reply was instant.

“Oh no, we solve this one tonight, buddy boy. I am not staying more than a day out in double knitsville. We’ve done that too many times and it always leads to trouble.”

“The Poconos?” Winston asked, raising his eyebrow which Ray saw by the glow of the PKE meter’s screen.

“Probably. Wasn’t my fault the shower spat tomato soup all over him.”

“Pete, I’m serious there’s nothing—“

“Hey…Ray…Winston…what is that?” Ryan asked, squinting at something in the distance out in the fields.

“Hello…” Ray said as he turned to follow his equipment technician’s lead. At first he didn’t see it and then …there it was.

of a man’s head off of the ground.

“Guys? Hello?!” Peter yelled but Ray reached up to the radio.

“Sorry, Peter. Gotta run. Something’s peeking out here.” With a quick snap, he turned off the radio. “Wow…look at that.” he said, his voice an enthralled whisper as three of them watched the light dance and shift, flowing and ebbing. Taking a rough guess, Ray put the light at about fifty yards due east, right in the middle of the field itself, exactly where Ron had said it would most often appear. It was so bright that he could now see the cows huddled and grouped into a tight shaking heard about ten yards from the light itself. Blue lightning bolts and purplish energy began to snake across the light, sparking and hissing. Suddenly the light flexed and began to stretch, growing taller and wider.

“Oh my God…” Winston breathed as he realized what he was seeing.

“That looks like…” Ryan began and Ray finished, now understanding perhaps more than he wanted to. “A tunnel.”

Suddenly all three PKE meters exploded with electronic fury, their wings fully extending, the warning lights flashing and the screen flashing red as the readings pegged out the top of the charts, the buzzing signal almost painful to hear. Ray and Winston’s ecto-goggles also began to beep loudly, whirring as their sensors tripped as well. Instantly, Winston flipped his goggles down.

“PKE valances are over a hundred and twenty two, KEV readings are at pulsing level 6, full red…and there is some kind of radiation coming off of that thing…200 millisieverts and rising! Ray we need to haul ass back from that thing now!”

Unable to look away, Ray was entranced by the strange blue glow that now pulsed out of the orange-yellow light tunnel. He could see inside it now, and the core was brilliant white with lines of the blue energy flowing back and forth. It was amazing…from the side, it was invisible except for a faint red-orange shimmer but from the front, it was like looking down the mouth of a hole. The cows had scattered back and were now stamping and calling, frightened, their tails swishing and their eyes rolling as they foamed at the mouth.

“Jesus! Look at that!” Ryan said, standing up, after he had flipped down his ecto-goggles as well.

“Look at the size of it!” Winston added, his mouth dropping open in shock as he too got up and started backing away.

Confused, Ray didn’t see anything but the tunnel and then realized he had not put his goggles back on. Flipping them down, he jumped to his feet in terror as he saw what the others were seeing.

There, in the tunnel was another sky, deep red and purple, streaked with fire and smoke. The land was charred and black, like a volcano and rivers of red ran like white rapids. But it was what was in the middle of the tunnel that grabbed all of their attentions. It was huge, the size of a pony, with a long snout filled with giant razor fangs and teeth. It had huge cold staring eyes that had an intelligence behind them that was inhumanly calculating. Its long snake like neck was attached to a dark gray green body that was built like a dinosaur with a long whipping tail, hulking muscular shoulders and a flicking black tongue.

It raised up a huge fore-paw, with four long fingers on it and a grasping thumb and pushed up on the edge of the tunnel, like it was solid and began to haul itself out of the light. The beast put one foot on the ground and snarled at the cows, its eyes burning with hell fire. Dragging its body forward, it pulled out one leg after the other before finally standing on all fours, whipping its tail free of the light.

“MOVE IT! 300 mSvs!” Winston barked, backpeddling quickly, stumbling over unseen rocks. “Why is that bad?” Ryan asked, doing the same, his face wrinkled in worry.

“You remember Chernobyl?” Winston asked as he did his best to keep the thing in sight and stay on his feet, never turning his back to it. “Yeah, why?”

“It took 350 mSv’s to evacuate Pripyat!”

“Oh shit….” Ryan gulped and began to move much faster as the belt radiation detector, a strange looking circuit board like read out with eight nixie tube lights on the top of it began to scream and flash. Normally it was used to warn a Ghostbuster of a containment breach of the proton pack and connected to a smaller daughter board with a coil of electric cable that attached to the utility belt.

The pack’s weren’t breaching; the radiation levels from that tunnel had just gotten so high as to set them off.

The tunnel swelled and for a moment, the Ghostbusters thought it was going to explode like a bomb as the radiation levels now neared lethal levels. If it hit 350, there would be no protection adequate enough to save their lives. No suits, no barriers. They would be dead in days of a slow painful death of radiation poisoning at such close exposed range and Ray suddenly wished he had listened to Peter and not taken this case. As suddenly as it appeared, the tunnel without preamble sucked into itself, like a black hole, and vanished with a snap flash of white light and the whoomph of an air implosion and the sky was dark again. To Ray’s horror, the beast did not go with it but the radiation levels began to drop immediately.

It had lowered its head and bared its teeth, its dark tongue lashing as it targeted its victim…a lone cow at the edge of the herd who had frozen in a panic.

The monster threw back its head and let out an otherworldly scream, shaking the air with its terrifying lion like pitch which ended in a high demonic razor edged scream. Lightning cracked in the distance and for the first time all night, the bolt struck the ground exploding in a violence of sparks and smoke.

“It’s going for the cow! We have to stop it!” Ray ordered and reached behind his right shoulder, his hand grasping the thrower’s handgrip and with a single pull, he tugged the particle thrower rifle free of its metal slide clip and brought it around, its hose dangling down his knees as he activated it, the sharp whine of the particle accelerator comforting him. Holding the thrower like an assault rifle, he extended the barrel with a flick of the green safety switch.

Without another word, he charged into the field. Not having any choice, Winston and Ryan joined him, drawing their throwers.

The cow saw the beast and bellowed once and bolted like it had been struck by a hot iron and with that the beast gave chase. It was so fast…it went from absolutely being still to running faster than a cheetah in the span of two seconds!

Taking rough aim and trying to steer clear of the remaining cows, Ray opened fire, depressing the trigger stud.

The particle thrower bucked in his hands but practice had made it easy to hold on to even as the violently twisting and looping particle stream exploded from the tip in a long wave like beam of pure energy, brilliantly bright red-orange, snake like as blue snarls of electron lightning crawled up and down its length. The flashpoint at the barrel strobed and pulsed , spitting sparks as the beam fired, continuous, snarling and roaring with that deep rumbling electronic growl that was the signature sound of a proton pack being fired.

The proton beam slammed into the ground at the creatures feet, missing its rear legs by a fraction of an inch, sending dirt and rock into the air in an explosion of sparks.

The cows having had frankly enough excitement, did what they did best in moments of stress or panic.

“STAMPEDE!” Winston bellowed as the cows began to run in all directions, thundering hooves filled the air and the field became a chaotic nightmare from hell.

“DAMN IT!” Ryan cried as a cow blasted past him, nearly taking his arm off as he twisted to the side to avoid being run over, trying to aim at the running creature.

Finally lining up, he took a shot, his beam going wide, missing the running beast, singing the back fur of the nearest cow who trumpeted in alarm and bolted for the treeline, its fur smoking from the tiny flames that had sprouted up.

“Easy, Hoss. We’re supposed to protect them, not grill em!” Winston yelled, dropping to one knee, as he took aim. The beast was chasing the cow and paid them no mind and it was hard to see through the ecto-goggles, the powerful lenses intensifying every blast of the streams until they were as bright as a thousand suns. Ray took another running blast and missed, the beam going over the monsters back.

The cows were thundering round him, on all sides, black blurs in the night and Winston could feel their bodies tear the air as they hoofed past him in a panic, many dodging and weaving to avoid smashing into him, bellowing, their eyes rolling in fear. He felt their weight and sharp hooves come within inches of his legs and the stench was awful, like musk and shit mixed together.

“Almost…almost..” Winston said under his breath, moving his rifle to line up the perfect shot…if he could lead it, then he could hit the damn thing.

Suddenly he felt an explosion of pain as the wind was knocked out of him and the sky and the ground switched places as he flew backwards in a violent roll, the thrower knocked out of his hands, letting off a stray blast. A pained animal cry screamed out as the cow that had ran into him was hit by the beam, the particle stream searing deeply into its shoulder, burning tissue, muscle and bone to ash, sending the cow crashing head first to the ground, tumbling head over tail before coming to rest with a sickening crunch.

The smell of burnt hair was horrific and Winston spat blood of his mouth from his bleeding nose.

Seeing stars, he looked through the cracked lenses of his ecto-goggles and saw that Ray was pinned down by the cows who has stampeded in his direction. The beast finally closed on the cow and leapt into the air, claws wide, mouth ready for the kill. The cow had stopped, frozen in terror as it gazed into the eyes of its killer.

“Kid, nail it!” Ray shouted ducking a bull with horns as it drove itself past him, snapping the mirror off of the passenger side of Ron’s truck.

The next fifteen seconds passed as slow as any Ray had ever known as Ryan took aim and fired.

His particle beam screamed across the darkened field, lighting up the grass below it in yellow orange light as the electron arcs cascaded down the core beam, their blue flashes strobing like police lights at the speed of light. The beast seemed to inhale and then thrust its head forward, releasing a blinding jet of blue-white light from its mouth like a pulsar. The cow was struck by the beast’s pulse and it froze, as if electrified and then dropped to the ground in an unmoving heap before rising up into the air, its legs dangling like a dead marionettes. A rain of red fell as unseen forces sliced open the cow’s rear end and its entrails flew out of their own accord through the perfectly circular hole that had been telekinetically burned into it by the beast who now seemed to drink and absorb the viscera.

The cow’s body jerked spasmodically and an ear went next, then the eyes in a flash of red light…the tongue…all consumed by the beast’s open mouth.

Ryan’s proton beam chose that moment to explode with deadly force, the beam’s business end slamming into the beast’s jaw with the force of a semi-truck. In a violent cascade of sparks and spitting flames, the beast’s mouth was snapped shut and it’s head was knocked backward with the force of the blow, throwing the entire creature to the ground with a thump that seemed to shake the world.

Smiling wickedly, Ryan took aim again as the beast got to its feet next to the corpse of the cow and finally seemed to acknowledge the Ghostbusters presence. Roaring, it charged Ryan full speed, its legs and feet propelling it to sixty miles an hour instantly. Not hesitating, Ryan opened fire again, the pulsing coiling roping proton stream rocketing out. Seeing the beam, the beast didn’t stop but opened its maw again releasing the strange blue white energy.

The proton beam met the energy field head on and both collided like planets. Lightning spat and snarled with sparks and brilliant strobing lights flashed but neither force was able to over power the other. Ryan adjusted the intensity and opened up to full stream.

The proton beam widened and the electron pulses began to move faster and faster as the thrower began to get hot and looking down, he saw the heat gauge begin to inch towards red.

In a few seconds, the pack would overheat and reset itself. He would be dead long before it cycled back on, Ryan realized and didn’t let up. Surrounded by panicked cattle in every direction, Ray and Winston could only watch in horror as the beast closed the distance and leaped for Ryan’s throat. In mid air, its body began to glow bright blue, and the PKE meter’s began to scream even more, as the radiation sensors went off again.

Cutting his stream off, Ryan crossed his arms in front of his face to shield himself as his life flashed before his eyes.

Turning its head, the beast directed its energy field into mid air just in front of Ryan and instantly a new tunnel opened, a smaller one, sparking and gleaming orange and red. The monster never touched Ryan as it dived head first into the tunnel , its long terrifying body vanishing into the strange hole in space before it was finally gone and the tunnel shut down and was gone with a violent implosion of air that sent Ryan flatly back on his ass.

The cows continued to run for a few moments but finally settled down far behind the truck and they huddled under a tree, shaking, scared, eyes wide, looking towards their fallen herd-mate. Winston wiped his nose and he and Ray moved quickly to check on their friend.

Reaching him, Ray saw that Ryan had been knocked unconscious by the implosion.

“Is he?” Winston asked. “No, he’s alive.” Ray remarked pointing at the slow rise and fall of the younger man’s chest. “Step back.” he said and Winston stood back as Ray flipped a switch on the containment field breach warning unit and the lights flared white. Reaching down with a gloved hand, he completed the circuit to Ryan’s shoulder and with a single tap, sent a low-level proton pulse through him leaving the air smelling of ozone with a slight hiss-crackle-pop.

Ryan woke up instantly and shook his head and got to his feet.

He quickly checked to make sure all of his parts were accounted for and looked at Ray.

“God I’m glad you and Egon came up with those proton field emitters…if we didn’t have those things built into our uniforms we’d be up the shit creek without a paddle.”

“You’re welcome. Everyone okay?”

Satisfied with everyone’s silent nods, Ray checked his PKE meter.

“Levels of radiation are back down to acceptable levels. Residual PKE is still off the charts but its fading fast. Let’s go check out the damage…” he said, dreading the task at hand as he moved off into the field, flicking on his flash light towards the now drained dead cow.

Snapping back on the radio, Ray called back to the house.

“Pete, get Egon on the horn. We just had a run in with whatever it was. Some kind of portal and something that crawled out of it. We have readings on the meter’s to download. It almost ate junior here. We lost two of the cows though.”

For a moment, there was no reply and Ray’s heart began to speed up.

Then, thankfully, Egon’s voice came over the radio.

“I copy. I finished the necropsy. What was it?”

“I have no idea what the hell this thing was…it wasn’t anything I’ve ever seen. We can cross reference it in Tobin’s when we get back to the house and are inside the PKE disruptor field range. I don’t feel safe out here after seeing what it can do.” Ray advised his friend.

“We’re heading over to check out the corpse. We’ll be back in twenty minutes.” Winston added, keying up.

“Right. Don’t take any chances until we know what we’re dealing with. Get back here ASAP.” and then Egon’s voice was gone, leaving the three of them in the dark surrounded by whispering trees and strange animal sounds as the thunder grew louder and the lightning more frequent.

Upon reaching the cow, Ray’s stomach flipped on itself as he saw the carnage the creature had inflicted.

Just like Ron had said, the ■■■■■■ had been cored out completely, the edges of the gaping hole clean and smooth. Ray could see into the hole and saw strings of tissue, ropes of sinew that were raw and pink but no organs at all. Moving up to the cow’s head he saw that its eyes were missing, the sockets burned black from the energy discharge and its tongue was gone as well, snipped out as clean as you please.

The entire side of the cow’s head had been flayed down to the bone without a single drop of blood, the cuts so neat it could have been by surgery. The grass around the corpse was spun in a circular pattern and scanning with his PKE meter, he found low levels of radiation and PKE as well. No matter where he looked, he could not see any blood. The animal had been totally exsanguinated. There were small piles of blackish red good that was not blood but some type of thicker material.

Curious, Ray pulled out a glass sample vial and carefully, using his gloved fingers, slid some of the goop into the container, sealing it.

He looked at the sad remains of what had been a few minutes ago, a cow, healthy and alive, worth several thousand dollars.

He hoped to God the cow had died quickly.

He looked around him and saw the trees move and somewhere, something made a low ungodly growl, unseen but it made the hair on the back of his neck stand up and sent a cold feeling through his body like an electric jolt.

“Okay guys lets head back to base…regroup…plan something…see if we an find some answers in this data. Hopefully one of us got a scan of that thing.”

“I sure as hell am not complaining. Smartest thing you’ve said all night, Ray.” Winston agreed and the three of them made it back to the truck and were bouncing through the field much faster out than they had gone in, headlights flashing. They soon reached the house and with a wave of gratitude, parked and entered the safety net of the PKE disruptors, closing the house door behind them just as the first rain drops began to fall and the storm finally let loose.

Ray decided that he felt something as he entered the house and shut the door on the fields and dark woods.

He knew what it was immediately.

Relief

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Emerson Ranch, Uintah Basin...

The first thing Ray noticed in the barn was the stench. Not the normal scent of cow dung, or even the semi-sweet herbal scent of hay or grass. The hint of motor oil and gasoline was there of course but so was the dripping heavy torpid sickly sweet odor of decay and rot. Around him the barn itself was dark except for the middle of the structure which had been turned into a make shift lab. Egon had managed to string up several work lights and jury rigged them into the few power sockets that he had been able to find. The lights provided a bright unfeeling cold white light, shedding its warm glow around the work area. Egon, with the help of Peter and Ron, had hung up large sheets of old plastic and tarp, forming a make shift room.

Inside the make shift room was a large metal table that Egon had dragged out from the loft. It was supported on four legs made up of cinder blocks. On a pile of tires four high, sat Egon’s diagnostic tools and his proton pack sat on the floor, its straps and belt unclasped, leaning against a barn pillar. Ray noticed that even though Egon wasn’t wearing it, he had left it active and the four lights on the cyclotron circled each other clock wise steadily and strong. The Ghostbusters and Ron stood around the table, cramped in the small space, all except for Egon trying to keep as much distance between themselves and the stinking corpse of the cow on the table that lay beneath the white tarp that was drenched in scarlet stains.

Peter had his nose covered behind his hand and Winston looked about ready to vomit but Ray gave him credit; he didn’t flinch otherwise. Ryan was wide eyed having never seen anything like it and Ray himself was fighting to hold down his lunch but his scientific curiosity was getting the better of him he had to admit. Ron stood back watching them all, his eyes cold and hard, anger set deeply into his face as he looked at his once prize animal now reduced to a pile of bleeding flesh.

Egon had his uniform top unzipped and tied around his waist and was walking around in his black undershirt such was the heat in the barn area, and sweat beaded his high forehead. He had slipped on a pair of fresh latex gloves. His combat boots crunched on the hay strewn floor as he inventoried all of his equipment, the blood knives and tools he had brought with him for analysis looked like something out of a horror movie. Egon had been going over his findings with the team and together they were trying to figure out what the hell they were dealing with.

Egon moved forward and put a hand on the tarp, curling his fingers around the edges carefully, almost repulsed by what he was about to do.

“Okay, now I want you to bear in mind that the animal was practically eviscerated long before we got here so there wasn’t much of a specimen to work with, so my analysis at this point should be strictly theoretical in any case.” he said, his deep voice the only sound besides the humming of the proton pack and the sizzle of bugs that flew too close to the work light bulbs.

Muffled, Peter replied from behind his hand.

“Everything is theory for you, Egon. Let’s skip theory and get right to experimentation before I lose what little I managed to scarf down for dinner last night on the plane.”

“Right.” Egon said. Without further preamble he whipped back the tarp and let it fall to the ground like a sheet of cascading white used up skin.

The effect was instant as nearly everyone recoiled and sounds of disgust filled the room. Ron’s anger grew deeper.

On the table lay the corpse of the cow that he and Jake had pulled from the river. Its body was horrifically swollen and bloated, its skin had turned a dark wet gray color. To study the corpse, Egon had to use a Y-incision from the base of the neck down to between its rear legs, splitting the animal open. It had been pulled open, its ribs, what was left of them, jutted out in the air like broken spikes, ■■■■■■ yellow. The first thing that Ray noticed was that it was as Ron had said; there were no internal organs left. Instead, there were shredded pink and red tendrils and bits of flesh where the organs had been, as if they had been suddenly and violently vacuumed out.

The six inch coffee can shaped hole where the ■■■■■■ had been cored out was now terribly plain. The animals head was worse; de-fleshed straight down the bone, revealing the red stained white jaw bones and square teeth and empty eye sockets. The flesh was pinkish gray where the ears had once been but now were only supplanted by strange neat cuts.

“The first thing I noticed when I took a PKE scan of the animal, “ Egon dictated, consulting his clipboard and shuffling the papers on it, “ was an abnormally high level of PKE residue that had odd characteristics, almost radioactive characteristics. Its like a hybrid of PKE and nuclear radiation. I’ve never seen any entity like that before.”

“We got super high readings of Cherenkov radiation when that tunnel we told you about opened up…buried the needle.” Winston theorized out loud. Egon thought about that for a few moments and Ray could practically see the many complex and complicated gears in the mad scientists mind turning. “Good point. The PKE hybridization could be caused by the entity’s native environment but if so, it would be unlike any earth or dimension we’ve ever been to or studied.”

“ We saw it for a few seconds…it wasn’t the ghost world…or maybe it was…it was so strange…twisted black trees, lava flows, a red sky…spooky stuff.” Ryan said, craning his neck to see what Egon was pointing at.

“These cuts on the ear and the ■■■■■■ as well as those on the jaw…they appear to be surgical but only because of the nature of the instrument used to do them which wasn’t steel or even a laser so extra-terrestrials.” Egon said, looking up at Ray over his glasses.

Peter scoffed. “ Told you so. E.T isn’t phoning home on this one. No greenies.”

“Gray, Pete. Most people report encounters with grays not greenies.” Ray responded without batting an eye lash.

“Moving on, “ Winston cut in pointedly glaring at his friends motioning for Egon to continue. “If it wasn’t steel or lasers…what the hell was it?” he asked.

“That’s the scary part. It appears to have been done by telekinetic burning.”

“What? That’s only been theorized to occur. It’s never been documented, not even in Rhine’s studies at Duke. Not even the Kulagina experiments yielded data to suggest that could happen.” Ray said, stepping forward, sticking his nose inches away from the fly covered carcass of the dead cow, the smell overpowering as Peter and Winston retched silently, unmoving.

“I thought the same thing but remember, what is the most common pattern that psychokinetic energy takes given free rein in the natural world?” Egon asked.

“A spiral.” Ryan interjected. Nodding, Egon continued.

“Right. Look at the fur.”

Everyone, despite their inclinations leaned forward and a collective gasp went through them all, a gasp of recognition and shock.

“Well goddamn…look at that…” Ron said, even his deeply furrowed brows reaching for his forehead.

The cows fur was twisted in dozens of places into tight spiral shapes and forms.

“The entity apparently uses a powerful form of psychokinesis to manipulate its prey and make its kills meaning it never has to physically touch them but rather just be within a few feet of them. It also apparently uses up a lot of power to make those gates you mentioned,” Egon said, turning around to a laptop computer that he had sat on a shaky wooden make-shift table. He began tapping keys rapidly as the others looked over his shoulder.

On the tiny screen, graphs and charts began to flip up in windows and different screens. To Ron it looked like Greek but to Ray it was perfectly logical.

His face lit up with understanding.

“Those are the scans we took when it first came out of the portal…” he said, tracing a sharp rep spike in the graph that raced up towards to the top of the screen, “ …and this…is the reading Ryan’s meter registered on his belt when the thing opened up the gate and made trails….when it left?” he finished, tracing the blue line that dropped precipitously towards the bottom of the screen.

“Precisely. Opening and closing those gates seems to take a lot out of it. Whatever its doing in our world, when it leaves and enters it uses a massive amount of energy resulting in an weakened state meaning it should have to consume energy again to be able to leave or enter our world.”

Confused, Winston looked at Egon. “Consume? Consume what? It left most of the cow behind.”

Egon pushed his glasses up again and stood back up straight and looked his friend in the eyes and Winston knew he wasn’t going to like what he heard next thanks to the expression on Egon’s face.

“Blood, Winston. The entity actually feeds on the psychic energy on the cells in the blood. The amount per cell is minimal but if it draws off every drop of blood from its prey, then it gets a massive collective boost to its reserves. The process of taking that energy however…as you can see…results in the death of the prey and total exsanguination.”

“Great so it’s a blood drinker. Nothing we haven’t dealt with before. We fixed that town of vampires.” Peter said shrugging. Ron looked up at Peter in shock.

“We did have help, Pete. The if it hadn’t have been for the werewolves and that other vampire clan we wouldn’ t have made it out a alive.”

“Gregor sure didn’t. Remember they torched him by sunlight. Lita sent you the pictures.” Peter finished and he saw the look of astonishment on Ron’s face. “Hey, you work in this line of business, you get all kinds.”

“It’s bigger than that, Venkman. Animals only provide a low level of psychic energy…humans on the other…provide a much higher boost. If this thing can open dimensional gates at will, then it could go anywhere it wanted to go.”

“Oh my God…if it got into a populated area…” Ray said finally grasping the situation .

“New York…Chicago…Nashville…San Diego…Pittsburgh…the loss of life would be catastrophic and who knows what it could do with all that power. It would be like have an h-bomb with a mind of its own.” Egon finished. “Another issue is that radiation. Cherenkov radiation, that blue glow, results when an emitted charged particle phases through a dielectric medium at a speed greater than the phase velocity of light in that medium..in our case, our atmosphere…ergo…when it creates a gate way into our world or out of it, the psychic energy it releases to create the portal rips into the atmosphere are near the speed of light causing an increase in local radiation levels…which can be deadly if you are in the epicenter. We are going to have to tackle this thing after or before it can create one of those worm holes.”

“We’ve seen that before, on our camping trip. Bigfoot..remember? The Cherenkov radiation in the sky because of the stress on the space time continuum because of the open portal…since this thing isn’t from the ghost world…do you think its from the same …place?” Ray postulated, studying the readings on the laptop, his face furrowed in thought.

“Possibly an annex dimension. Its hard to say.”

Winston, frustrated with the science talk, stepped forward and closed the laptop screen despite a fleeting glare from Egon.

“Look fellas. We know what it can do and we have a decent idea of where its from…now…the million dollar question…what is it? Why did it choose this spot?”

“Well,” Egon said, flipping up some pages on his clipboard, “After I did the necropsy, I dug around in the deed and the land paperwork and pulled a few references from the remote Occult Reference net by tapping into the phone modem…the connection wasn’t good so I was only able to find a little bit of information from the alt.occultreference.net site before the storm hit.” Egon told him, as Ron looked on eager to hear what had been found.

“The Utes only feared this land to about fifty or sixty years back. Apparently, there was a land dispute between a local shaman and a white hunter who wanted to turn what would later become the ranch into his private trapping grounds. The shaman caught him on the land and since it considered a sacred power spot, a fight ensued and it went to court and the white man won the trial and was awarded the land…the shaman, angry, was said to have cursed the land with the skinwalker or what they thought was the skinwalker. The white hunter was Erik Talbot…his son later went on to build the ranch. Jesse Talbot died of unknown causes about ten years after he finished the ranch …apparently the doctors didn’t find any blood in his body. The next couple lived here up until the Emerson’s bought the place…they tried to deal with the activity but couldn’t and sold it…and here we are.”

“Jesus Christ…you mean it was brought here because the ranch is built on hallowed ground…God almighty…that explains a lot of shit. How did the thing get here though?” Ron asked, scratching his head. “The localized surge in PKE energy by the minor spirits and lower earth current probably weakened the natural space time continuum in the immediate area.” Egon said covering up the cow’s corpse, having seen quite enough it and Ray found that he was intensely grateful for it.

“As for what it is…the PKE readings you three took at the first encounter seem to indicate it’s a class six trans-dimensional psychokinetic entity from outside our plane of existence. It is PKE based but its not a ghost. It’s not corporeal and has the ability to camouflage itself based upon your descriptions only being fully visible in the polarized lenses of the ecto-goggles…there’s nothing quite like it in Tobin’s or any of Ray’s or my own research.”

“Meaning…” Ray said realization spreading across his face. “ That it’s a totally new paranatural entity. This is outstanding! The data we could get from capturing it would be unprecedented. We could even name it!”

“ Forgot the name, Ray. We need to stop that thing now.” Ryan over shot him.

“ Agreed.”

“So how do we capture something we can only see with ecto-goggles that can psychically rip out your guts, move faster than a cheetah and give Carrie a run for her money?” Peter asked throwing up his hands.

“It’s already fed on animal blood and its obviously shown an interest in humans. I’d say we give it some bait and lay a trap inside the PKE disruptors so that it can’t fire up those portals it uses…the PKE disruptor fields will de-harmonize its projections…then we can trap it.”

“Right…who’s going to be stupid enough to put themselves out as a midnight snack?” Winston asked crossing his arms and daring anyone to ask him.

Everyone looked at Peter. He scowled. This happened every time for him and every time it ended messily with him covered in slime and gunk. The non-amalgamated shape changer from the Poconos that turned into giant cockroach was still a nasty memory.

“Oh no. Not this time. Absolutely not. I refuse. Not my plan, not my risk.”

One by one the eyes of his friends turned to Ryan and Ryan felt his shoulders sink somewhere into the vicinity of South America. He knew what was coming.

“Hey…I’m not a rookie anymore. I’m the experimental equipment technichian.” he tried but the glares did not go away and he realized he was not getting out of it.

Grumbling under his breath he thrust out his fist and held it in front of him.

“You know the drill.”

Ron realized they were playing rock paper and scissors and rolled his eyes.

The other Ghostbusters held out their hands.

“On three. No cheating Venkman.” Ryan said.

“Three!” they all chanted at once.

Ryan saw that every single one of them had used ‘paper’ and sighing, he looked down to see that he had chosen ‘rock’. Typical.

“Fine…what do I have to do?” he asked and Egon smiled a bit and Ray raised his eyebrows.

“Okay…here’s what we do.” Egon began and explained his plan.

When he was finished, Ryan glared at him. “This is the worst plan we’ve ever had, you realize that right?”

Outside the storm lashed the barn and thunder slammed hard enough to shake the structure.

Ryan watched the lightening flare through the spaces between the boards and tightening the straps on his proton pack, began to hike for the door, wondering in the back of his mind, if he had made the right choice in answering the ad a year ago for an experimental equipment technichian for a leading parapsychical research center with excellent pay.

Job was definitely not worth 18 grand a year.

Sighing, he opened the barn doors and stepped out into the night.

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**Emerson Ranch, Uintah Basin, Utah…

…3 hours later…**

The rain was coming down so hard it hurt. It slapped his skin wetly, leaving cold damp streaks as it ran from his hair down his face before finally dripping off of the end of his nose. Ray, along with the other Ghostbusters, was hunkered down behind a wall of tires and two over turned feeding troughs, making a make-shift hill. His proton pack was digging its straps painfully into his clavicles and he hoped they were as water proof as Egon said they were. They had gotten wet before and even rained on and each time it was a waiting game to see when or if they would kill out. It was raining harder that it had been in the Central Park cemetery when Ivo Shandor assumed his Destructor Form. Burning or tissue damage to a minimum. Cute, Egon, real cute.

To his left, Egon had his nose buried deep in his PKE meter’s screen, his Ecto-goggles shoved up above his glasses as he tried to keep the meter dry. Peter sat next to him and was casting worried glances at the shadows and the open fields behind them, and had more than once reminded them that they had no cover. Winston had his particle thrower drawn and aimed over the rim of their junk fort, its safety off and the pack humming steadily. He hadn’t moved in those three hours and Ray thought that if was still in the Marines, he would have been a formidable sniper. Keeping his own goggles down, Ray adjusted the power intensity setting, the lenses whirring as they extended slightly. He wanted to be ready to end this nightmare before it hurt anyone else.

He peeked out over the edge again and saw Ryan standing, proton pack disarmed and in stand-by mode but his modified particle thrower within easy reach, not moving but violent shivering from the cold as the storm lashed around as if nature herself were throwing a tantrum. On his head he wore a strange metal helmet with an antenna on the top, covered in wires and diodes. A small readout on the front beeped as a scrolling green bar graph moved and spiked steadily. It was the psychogram booster that Egon had built back in 1985 to capture the Headless Horseman ghost that almost killed an insurance salesman. The helmet boosted and then broadcasted the psychic waves in a person’s brain in a passive emission field.

Meaning that right now Ryan’s own innate natural psychic bio-rythms were being practically screamed out to the thing that hunted creatures and animals using that signal. He was like a psychic search light in the dark. Ron had parked his old truck and the rental Explorer, one to each side, to give Ryan some cover and Ron himself had taken refuge up in the loft of the barn. Ray had loaned the rancher a spare set of ecto-goggles, and Ron had quickly learned to use them. When the lightening would flash, it would glint off of the polarized lenses in winking snaps of light.

His radio crackled on his shoulder strap and all eyes suddenly went to him.

“Ray..come in..I’ve been out here for three hours….we’ve had the disruptors off since then…not a single thing. This thing isn’t taking the bait.”

Ray looked at Egon who consulted his meter.

“The readings have increased with the severity of the storm, Raymond. It could be just residual interference from the lightning but I definitely think the negative PKE valances are spiking by point three.” he said in a hushed whisper, looking around him as if he was going to be jumped for just saying it, nodding.

Ray sighed. Point three was barely anything but to Egon only would that be a significant jump. He relayed the message. “Hold in there tiger. Egon said he got a big reading.”

Ryan came back instantly, less than thrilled.

“What’s with the names, guys? I thought we were past that. I’m not a rookie anymore. I even have my own name badge now and my own locker.”

“The big blood thirsty inter-dimensional nasty aside, I think the most important thing to do right now is debate the qualities and value of inter-team bonding and social structure.” Peter sniped, looking out over the edge, his own radio squawk loudly.

“Guys…” Winston said, pointedly, never looking over at his team mates.

“ I mean, its not like a little name calling hasn’t came our way. Back in the day, names were all we used to communicate—“ continued Venkman without stopping.

“Pete, calling the president of Generous Motors a blood sucking con artist vivisectionist is not communication. That’s venting.” Ray added. Peter shook his head at him. “Ray, we have got to get you some healthy coping strategies.”

“Having your new car explode was a coping strategy?”

“Guys….” Winston asked again, more emphatically this time.

“No, that was a mild catharsis of will imposed on the improper machinations of society’s economical gremlin induced woes.”

“Venkman self diagnosis is never safe.” Egon told him flatly, wiping water off of his meter’s screen. Venkman looked at Egon. “ I never once practiced in a clinical setting. I took the challenging road and chose the experimental path. Psychology is a rough science. I’m allowed to take chances.”

Ray was about to keep the fire going when Winston cut them all off with a barely concealed snarl of irritation.

“ Will you three shut up and listen to me?!”

Instantly all three of the Ghostbusters fell silent. Winston sighed. “Thank you. Look.”

He pointed out over his rifle. At the same time, Ryan made a transmission over the radio.

“Something is popping out here…I don’t know how to describe it..”

His voice was lost in the thunder as they looked over the edge of the make-shift fort.

Beyond the two trucks, the now deactivated and dark PKE disruptors, beyond the house and in the darkened fields, were twin pin ■■■■■■ of light, as blue as burning sapphires had winked into existence and were now dancing in complex and interconnected swirls and circles as if seeking something. They were beautiful, enchanting and devastatingly hauntingly beautiful. They flew low to the ground, illuminating the grass and rocks, speeding towards the house like a dog that has a scent. The crackled around them and as they got closer, they could all hear it.

Ron shouted down from the barn, his voice almost lost in the rain.

“That’s them! Those are those lights! They aren’t really lights but something else…no idea what! That’s what killed my dogs!”

As the orbs advanced closer, Ray began to get an uneasy feeling in his gut. Their movements, their motions….it was like watching a big cat slink and hunt, perfectly efficient.

“Hoss, watch it! Those things are dangerous!” he yelled, drawing his own thrower, priming it with a flick of the switch.

Ryan didn’t have time to flinch because at the sound of Ray’s voice, the orbs instantly closed the remaining few hundred yards and were suddenly there, unnaturally fast. Ryan froze in fear as the orbs were now less than a foot from his face, their blue light lighting up his face in strange swirling blue white light. The hair on the back of his neck stood up as the spheres moved, the air snapping and crackling in their light filled wake. They were strange up close, made up of some kind of glass like material, perfectly transparent yet separate from the swirling blue-white smoky light that swam inside them. Watching them this close, it was like something from the movie Tron that came out a few years ago, those light cycle trails were like the trails these things left in the air, and they faded just as fast. They were hot, he could tell that much. It like being circled by miniature suns. The rain sizzled as it hit them.

Ryan’s radio crackled. “Be careful…massive readings from those things. No radiation though. They are pure concentrated PKE. We can trap them.” Egon’s voice was muffled and somehow unnatural given the situation as he was always so calm and detached.

The orbs were still circling, as if they were sharks, looking for blood. Suddenly one of the orbs began to emit a strange sound. It was high pitched, whimpering almost like…

Dogs. It was making the sounds like a dog whimpering.

The whimpering escalated into snarling and finally, into a high pitched screaming.

Ryan realized they were replaying the sounds of the dog they had killed, trying to elicit some kind of movement out of him. They were trying to scare him into motion. He felt he weight of his modified Mark 2 thrower in his hands and wondered if he could reach the switch that activated the secondary fire modes. The spheres were getting bolder he noticed, glowing brighter, sizzling as they buzzed by him.

“We can’t risk a shot without hitting you, kid. Think of something!”

Egon’s words kept going through his mind. These things were pure PKE energy. Thinking of all the weapons of the Mark 2 pack, the Meson collider, the slime blower, the particle stream, only one came to mind. The Dark Matter generator. He had used it in Amityville to slow down and freeze that ghost with the stasis stream but perhaps the other half of the dark matter generator could be used here…if he could just reach the mode selector. Without moving the rest of his body, he moved his thumb, twisting his hand around the grip, moving it towards the center control panel on the thrower, inching towards the middle switch that was unique to his pack.

He was centimeters away, his thick glove making it hard to move that slightly.

The orbs continued to move, faster and faster, the air getting hotter by the second. Ryan felt a burning pain in his right arm and saw that in places, his uniform was starting to smoke.

There. He felt it. The selector switch. The hard metal was comforting beneath his thumb but if moved the wrong way in the next three seconds, he was going to get fried. His thrower was already aimed up in the general direction of the orbs where he had held it at his side one handed. It wouldn’t need to be exact.

Inhaling, he moved, flicking the switch.

Instantly, the familiar fins opened and stood up on the proton pack, one on both sides and one on the top, the ribs of the pack expanding like clam shells to reveal the shimmering blue-white dark matter collector core strips, the sound of metal scraping against metal loud and immediate.

At the sound the orbs stopped circling as if they had been stung and hung in front of him, as if studying this new change. Both orbs turned a blazing scarlet, and the heat began to intensify as tiny crackles of electricity began to crawl up and down his arms and legs and small sparks began to dance in the air.

Ryan closed his eyes and depressed the firing stud. The sound was just like the stasis stream only sharper, brutal and more clipped.

The particle thrower’s barrel lit up like the sun, spitting forth a cone of blue white and black energy particles. The particles slammed into the orbs like shot gun buckshot, smacking into the glass-like spheres with a cascade of sparks. With a howl from another world, they flew back, screaming into the sky, chasing each other as the tiny fires on their outside edges burned before fading away. Looking up, Ryan saw that one of the orbs had recovered and was now glowing brighter than ever as if it were—

It discharged a screaming bolt of energy that looked like scarlet lightening, cooking the very air as it cut through the atmosphere. With a yelp, Ryan dove and rolled, coming up on his knees a few feet from where the bolt slammed down, shaking the ground, leaving behind a basketball sized crater that glowed red from melted earth and smoked like a volcano before finally dimming.

Dirt filled the air and he spit out the funk, taking aim at the orbs, switching back to the proton stream, the barn rising behind them, giving them no way to escape.

“DON”T FIRE!”

It was Egon. His order made no sense. It was a perfect shot. Then he saw it at the same time that Ray followed up with a “LOOK!” that made his blood run cold.

Ryan moved his eyes to the left and felt his mouth drop open in shock.

There, levitating a solid twenty feet off of the ground, surrounded in a cage of crackling red energy was Ron Emerson, his feet and shoulders spread wide as if shackled, his eyes wide with terror. Behind him, in the dark shadows of the loft were twin shimmering eyes that blazed like suns and as he looked, Ryan heard the deep unearthly sub-human growl come from the shadows and finally the beast itself stepped out in to the night and threw its head back, howling at the storm like a demented hound of hell.

…as if the orbs were screaming for help, his mind finished disjointedly.

“This is not good…” he heard himself say as the beast pinned him with its glare, its lips raising to expose its lethal fangs and the glowing light, its dead-light, in its throat began to brighten.