Ghostbusters Reboot Script

Ok so my girlfriend, best director in the world/ in the making, is entering this contest where we reboot one of our favorite films in 10 minutes. Naturally, our Choice was Ghostbusters. I’ve written up a short script for the reboot. Don’t expect a 1:1 match to the original though since this is a reboot I need to take some liberties and since this can only be 10minutes long I had to cut out some story / character.

Right now the script is 19 pages. Ideally I’d like it to be 12 - 13 pages.

If you can think of how I can improve it or what can be cut out lemme know

Thanks ghostheads :cool:

The link is the First post is the script there in pdf form so it’s all formated propoerly and capitalized etc.

I’ll post the script here also for those of you that don’t trust download sites.

Int. NYU SCHOOL library - daytime

The Camera opens on 2 college student sitting at a table. RAY and PETER are working on writing their Thesis papers for their PhD’s. RAY is writing frantically and PETER is acting more nonchalant on the topic and flipping pages back and forth in a book.

peter

You know what really gets me, Ray?

Ray

(without looking up from his paper)

huh?..

peter

Out of everyone that’s completing their PhD’s, I thought it would be Spengler and not us.

ray

(without looking up)

huh…

peter

well I mean he’s been far more serious on this science ■■■■ than we have right?

INT. bathroom - flashback

EGON is looking at himself in the mirror in his hand we see that he’s holding a Drill and on his right temple we see that he’s drawn on a Black X. EGON studies the X in the mirror and then looks down at the sink counter in front of him. He has a book open about medieval surgery with an image of brain surgery. EGON pulls the trigger on the drill and we hear it start whirling. He looks back up into the mirror and we see PETER, on his way past the bathroom. Stopped, shocked and looking in at him. EGON, likewise, is paused in shock with the drill still whirling in his hand looking back at PETER.

INT. NYU SCHOOL LIBRARY - DAYTIME

Peter

You know most guys do other things when in the bathroom alone instead of trying to drill holes through their heads.

ray

(without looking up)

uh huh…

PETER leans in close to see if Ray will react. PETER looks down at RAY’s book and then back up at him. RAY does not respond. PETER raises his hands up slowly without Ray noticing and Slams them on either side of RAY’s book frightening him. PETER falls back into his chair laughing.

Ray

Ah! What!? What do you want? You realize that these final thesis papers are due in. (looks at his watch) Oh god, 3 Hours.

RAY Goes back to his book.

peter

Yeah yeah (he looks back into his book.)

In the background we here a woman’s scream a woman comes from the basement holding her heart and in obvious fear. A campus officer rushes to her side. PETER and RAY look up at her.

Librarian

(in the distance)

…I don’t know if it had legs but if defiantly had arms because it reached for me!

PETER and RAY look at each other, then slam their books shut and get up and head in her direction. the CAMERA stays on the cover of the book which we can now see is called “Paranormal Investigation and Elimination” with a GHOSTBUSTERS symbol on the cover. MUSIC: The Ghostbusters theme slowly fades in, but does not overpower the talking in the background.

officer

You can’t go down there!

peter

Back off, pal. We’re scient…scienti.

We here the roar from the Librarian Ghost and the Scream from PETER and RAY. Fade to just the Ghostbusters Symbol.

ext. Steps in front of nyu - daytime - 3 years later

EGON, RAY, and PETER are being forced out of the building by the OFFICER. Each of them carry a box of their personal items. They’ve just been fired from their jobs as professors of the University. They yell back and forth with the OFFICER before accepting their fate and sit at the base of the steps. the OFFICER goes back inside the building.

PETER

(yelling at the OFFICER)

Yeah!? Well who needs ya! Dirty Rotten… (He turns to EGON and RAY) So we’re screwed.

RAY

Tell me about it. No Jobs. No Income. The University was great. They gave up money and resources for our research and we never had to produce anything. You guys have never worked outside of college. They expect results.

RAY and PETER sit on the steps in despair. Peter reaches into his box and pulls out a bottle of whiskey and takes a drink. Hands it to RAY and he drinks as well. The CAMERA shows EGON with a laptop running calculations.

PETER

Hey Egon! You want some of this?

EGON

Unlike you, two. I’ve thought ahead and made a plan just in case of such an emergency.

PETER

Plan? What Plan?

EGON reaches into his box and pulls out a few pieces of paper and hands them to RAY and PETER. They look it over and see plans for Proton pack and Ghost Traps.

RAY

Actual Ecto-Capture and Containment Units? You perfected this?

PETER

Paranormal Investigation and Elimination. That would be the business of the century! The Franchise rights alone could make us rich beyond our wildest dreams.

RAY

Egon, These plans would take an incredible amount of money to build where are we going to find that?

EGON

The school already provided it. I built these weeks ago. Technically, though, they belong to the school.

The three exchange glances with a mutual understanding of what must be done.

INT. NYU science lab - night

All three of the members are dressed in black and slowly picking up the Proton packs when the Lights are switched on.

OFFICER

Hey! What are you doing!?

RAY

Scatter!

The three run in all different directions and off Camera.

INt. Ghostbusters HQ - daytime

Montage Begins.

We see EGON making modifications to the Proton Packs.

Ray drives up the White Car.

RAY and PETER make modifications to it turning it into the ECTO-1.

RAY is trying on the Proton Pack with sensors on his head and EGON’s is at his laptop taking Reading. RAY fires a stream and the Proton pack knocks him off his feet. EGON looks up and back down to type in notes.

Finally we see PETER sitting with JANINE and asking her questions as she nonchalantly does her nails. PETER looks wide eyed at her and then down at her resume and stands up and offers to shake her hand to say she hired. She stops filing and looks up at him.

Montage Ends.

int. Ghostbusters HQ - nighttime

PETER walks in and up to JANINE who is sitting at her desk and reading a magazine.

PETER

Hey JANINE. Any Calls?

JANINE

(without looking up)

No…

PETER

Any Messages?

JANINE

(without looking up)

No…

PETER

Any Jobs?

JANINE

(looks up for a second and then back down at her Magazine)

No…

PETER

Something about this seems familiar…

The phone rings. JANINE sits there reading her magazine. PETER looks at JANINE and then at the phone. Then back at JANINE. The phone continues to Ring.

PETER

(failing to hide his words while coughing)

You’re so fired.

JANINE picks up the line and give PETER an annoyed look.

JANINE

Ghostbusters, what do you want?.. (Her Expression turns to shock)You what?.. You have?.. No kidding?.. Well give me the address… (She reaches for a pen and pad)

PETER

(excited)

Boys! Boys! We’ve got one!

INT. Dana Barrett’s apartment building - FRONT DOOR - night

EGON, PETER, and RAY enter the apartment building. RAY and PETER are dressed in flight suits with the Proton packs strapped to their backs and Egon is carrying backs full of computer equipment.

PETER

Hey! Anybody seen ghosts!?

The Apartment MANAGER walks up to them.

MANAGER

Thank you for coming so quickly, the tenants are starting to ask questions and I’m running out of answers. I have to ask are you.. for real?

PETER looks back at EGON and RAY. EGON and RAY shrug. PETER looks back at the MANAGER

PETER

Yes?

MANAGER

(exhales)

Well It’s the 13th Floor. There have always been stories but it’s never ever been this bad.

PETER becomes distracted and looks off at DANA BARRETT. A Woman that’s frantically talking on her phone to her mother.

MANAGER

uh… Sir?.. Sir? Mister uh. (He looks at the name tag) Mr. Venkman?

PETER

Actually that’s Dr. Venkman. will you excuse me just a moment. (He looks back at EGON and RAY) Boys?

PETER walks off in DANA’s direction The MANAGER continues talking to RAY and EGON.

INT. DANA BARRETT’S APARTMENT BUILDING - LOBBY - NIGHT

PETER walks up to DANA.

PETER

Excuse me, miss. I can’t help but notice that you in some kind of distress. May I be of assistance?

DANA looks at PETER and pauses for a minute.

DANA

Mom can I call you back? (She hangs up the phone) What? What are you supposed to be some kind of Cosmonaut?

PETER

No. Ghostbuster actually.

DANA

Are you for real?

PETER

wha..? Of course. Why does everyone ask that? (Peter motions back toward the MANAGER)

We see that RAY and EGON are now awkwardly scanning the MANAGER with PKEs and sensors.

DANA

Oh. I’m sorry it’s just.. I’m Dana Barrett. So you can get rid of ghosts? I’ve had this problem in my kitchen. In the fridge there’s this voice I swear it says Zuul.

PETER

(Not really paying attention)

Wow. That is weird. I’d love to go your apartment and check you out.

DANA

I..

PETER

(Hits himself in the head)

I mean go back to your apartment and check IT out. Cool?

DANA

Well, I guess… OK.

EGON and RAY are now standing next to the elevators and call over to PETER

RAY

Hey Pete! Come on we’re going up to the 13th floor

DANA

  1. That’s my floor

PETER

Well then it all works out. Come on.

PETER and DANA walk over to the elevators to meet EGON and RAY.

INT. DANA BARRETT’S APARTMENT BUILDING - LOBBY ELEVATORS - NIGHT

DANA and PETER walk up to the EGON and RAY who have already pressed the button and are waiting on the elevators.

EGON

Keep your Ear Pieces in. I’ll monitor you from down here. If I notice and fluctuation in PKE activity I’ll keep you updated.

The doors to the elevator open and everyone walks in. As the doors close PETER throws EGON something. EGON catches it and hold it up to show that PETER thew him a Crunch bar. EGON smiles and then walks towards a corner of the lobby.

INT. Dana Barrett’s apartment building - INSIDE ELEVATOR - night

Everyone stands a little awkwardly crowded. DANA stands behind RAY and PETER who are in the front t part of the elevator.

RAY

Well this is it. You know I just realized that we’ve never really had a proper test for this equipment.

DANA

So you’ve never done this before?

PETER

What? No. Ray’s kidding here aren’t you Ray? (punches RAY in the arm.)

RAY

Oh. Oh Right. This has to got to be what? our 30th job?.. I mean why worry? we’re just wearing unlicensed nuclear accelerators on our backs. Switch me on?

PETER reach over and we hear the Proton Pack power up. DANA and PETER both scoot slowly to press against the other side of the elevator.

INT. DANA BARRETT’S APARTMENT BUILDING - 13th Floor hallway - NIGHT

PETER, DANA and RAY walk out of the elevator and into the hallway.

PETER

OK I’m going to Take Dana here back to her apartment and check her out.

Everyone awkwardly looks at PETER.

PETER

(laughing)

Why does that keep happening?

ray

OK. Stay in Contact I’m going to be on the look out for the ghost.

RAY walks away being overly cautious, clinging to walls and jumping out mission impossible style.

PETER

You know his mother dropped him when he was little. Tragedy.

PETER and DANA walk in the opposite direction towards DANA’s apartment.

INT. DANA BARRETT’S APARTMENT BUILDING - int front of dana’s apartment - NIGHT

PETER and DANA approach her door. PETER does a quick look in either direction pointing his proton wand.

PETER

OK The Area’s secured. Shall we?

A squealing noise comes over the ear piece.

PETER

ah! Egon! What the hell was that?

Egon

(Over the Ear Piece)

A Psychokinetic interference. I think Ray found it.

DANA goes to unlock her door.

peter

great great. I’ll be right there.

PETER makes a motion to walk into the room and DANA hold out a hand to stop him.

DANA

I’ve left a few things out give me just a second before you come in.

PETER

sure I - (He’s cut off when she slams the door shut.)

PETER waits outside the apartment impatiently. A Green glow building just off camera. PETER doesn’t notice it at first but slowly turns toward the glow. His Eyes grow wide but other than that shows no signs of panic. He raises a hand and touches his ear piece.

PETER

Calling Ray. Come in, Ray.

RAY

(Over the Ear Piece)

Venkman! I saw it! I saw it!

PETER

It’s Right here, Ray. It’s looking at me.

RAY

(Over the Ear Piece)

Ugly little spud isn’t it?

We hear a small growl.

PETER

I think he can hear you, Ray.

RAY

Stay calm. He can’t hurt you.

The growl turns into a Roar and Venkman starts to scream. DANA pokes her head out of the door and sees the green glow then slams the door closed again.

INT. DANA BARRETT’S APARTMENT BUILDING - 13TH FLOOR HALLWAY - NIGHT

RAY is holding his hand to his Ear Piece.

RAY

Venkman! Hold on!

RAY runs down the hall towards DANA’s Apartment.

INT. DANA BARRETT’S APARTMENT BUILDING - in front of dana’s apartment - NIGHT

PETER is on the ground and tossing from side to side. He’s covered in Slime. RAY runs to his side.

PETER

He slimed me.

RAY

That’s Great! Actual Physical Contact!

EGON

(Over the Ear Pieces)

Save some for me, Ray. But it looks like it’s not gone.

RAY Stands up and turn toward the Green light. We see Slimer floating before Ray sticking his tongue out.

RAY

Why you little. Take this!

RAY fires a Proton Stream at Slimer grabbing him. PETER gets up and fires as well

EGON

(Over the Ear Pieces)

Whoa! Careful! Don’t cross the streams!

PETER

What? Why!?

EGON

(Over the Ear Pieces)

Imagine the entire planet stopping and every molecule in your body exploding instantaneously.

PETER

That bad huh?

Ray

OK Hold him Pete. I’m gonna put the Trap Down. Don’t look at the trap.

RAY throws the trap onto the floor below Slimer

PETER

I looked at the trap, Ray…

RAY

Hold it!

A beam of light shoots form the trap and Slimer is pulled him. RAY and PETER shut off their Proton Streams.

PETER

Did we do it?

RAY

It’s in there!.. We did it!

DANA is peaking her head out from her door.

DANA

Is it gone?

PETER

Is it gone? Of course it is ma’am because we (PETER motions toward Ray and himself as RAY picks up the trap) are professionals.

DANA lets out a sigh of relief and slowly opens the door fully.We cannot see into her apartment it’s totally black inside.

DANA

you know, it’s weird. I don’t remember anything green in my fridge it looks like this dog that was just saying Zu-

DANA is cut off with Demon Arms Grab her over the mouth and body and pull her into the darkness. The Door slams shut on it’s own. We hear a small scream from her before the door loudly slams.

PETER

(simultaneously with RAY)

DANA!

PETER and RAY rush to the door and pull it open. Inside we don’t see black nor an apartment. It leads to the roof.

RAY

Uh… Egon?

EGON

It looks like some sort of. Temporal Rift? A Tear in the Fabric of Space maybe.

PETER and RAY walk through.

EXt. dana’s apartment building - roof - night

PETER and RAY walk cautiously onto the Roof. They both look around for DANA.

RAY

This is a huge apartment

PETER

Yeah her rent must be killer.

Thunder is heard behind them and DANA is on top of the roof. Lightning hits her and she begins to glow.

EGON

(Over the Ear Piece)

You know I’ve done some searching, and I think I know what this Zuul entity is.

INT. DANA BARRETT’S APARTMENT BUILDING - LOBBY - NIGHT

EGON is on his computer console and on the screen we see a picture of an ancient drawing of Gozer.

EGON

(Reading form the Screen)

It looks like Zuul was the gatekeeper to a Sumerian Deity call Gozer.

PETER

(Over the Ear Piece)

Deity… like a god?

Egon

More like a demon. Looks like he would demand sacrifices of blood on spires just like this apartment building we’re on now.

EXT. DANA’S APARTMENT BUILDING - ROOF - NIGHT

RAY

In other words, Peter, your girlfriend lives in the middle of spookcentral.

The Glowing DANA gives off a Roar and then transforms into the Woman form of GOZER.

PETER

No Problem. We just took down a ghost! We got this! A Demon isn’t too much different right?

RAY

Yeah!

PETER

(pushing Ray)

Yeah! Get her Ray!

RAY now looks unsure and panicky as he looks back at PETER. RAY takes a few steps forward. GOZER takes a step close to RAY looking intently at him.

GOZER

Are You a God?

RAY looks back at PETER. PETER shrugs. Ray looks back at GOZER.

RAY

No?

GOZER

Then Die!

EXT. DANA’S APARTMENT BUILDING - STREET LEVEL - NIGHT

We see a massive explosion when looking up at roof of the building.

EXT. DANA’S APARTMENT BUILDING - ROOF - NIGHT

We see the edge of the building for a moment before a hand comes up. PETER pulls himself back onto the roof form the edge and RAY does so next to him.

PETER

(out of breath from pulling himself up)

Ray… If someone asks you if you’re a god, you say Yes!

RAY

(Also out of breath)

OK.. This chick is toast!

RAY and PETER stand up and look around.

RAY

Where’d she go?

GOZER

(A disembodied voice form the sky)

SUBCREATURES!GOZER THE GOZERIAN, GOZER THE DESTRUCTOR, VOLGUUS ZILDROHAR, THE TRAVELER HAS COME. CHOOSE AND PERISH.

RAY

What!?

PETER

I don’t know, Egon?

EGON

(Over the Ear Piece)

If I understand correctly, she’s saying that since you’re going to be sacrificed anyway. You choose the form of your destructor.

PETER

Oh Cute. Ray clear your head! Don’t think of anything. Then we’ll see what she’s -

The ground below them shakes.

EGON

(Over the Ear Piece)

What happened? I thought you weren’t thinking of anything

PETER

I didn’t think of anything!

EGON

(Over the Earpiece)

Nor did I.

PETER slowly turns to RAY. RAY looks back frightened and ashamed.

RAY

I-I’m sorry I tried to think. I tried to think of something that could never hurt us.

PETER

What!? What did you think of?

The Ground shakes again.

EGON

(Other the Ear Piece)

Oh.. Oh no this is bad.

EXT. new york cityscape - night

We see the STAYPUFT MARSHMALLOWMAN stomping through the streets of New York.

EXT. DANA’S APARTMENT BUILDING - ROOF - NIGHT

PETER and RAY are staring off toward the STAY PUFT MARSHMALLOWMAN.

PETER

Huh… There’s something you don’t see everyday.

Ray

Oh my God. How in the world are we supposed to stop that thing!? It’s huge!

INT. DANA BARRETT’S APARTMENT BUILDING - LOBBY - NIGHT

EGON is frantically searching over his computer and books that he has with him.

EGON

Just a second. I’m thinking! I’m thinking!

EXT. DANA’S APARTMENT BUILDING - ROOF - NIGHT

The Roof shakes again.

RAY

Think faster, Egon. He’s getting closer…

Egon

(Over the Ear Piece)

I’ve got it. Cross the Streams!

PETER

Whoa whoa! Egon, you said Crossing the Streams was bad.

EGON

(Over the Ear Piece)

If we can pack enough power into the Rift that allowed Gozer through then it should force her back. It’s the only chance we’ve got.

PETER

You’re going to kill us, Egon, and you’re going to kill that nice lady, Dana Barrett, that was going to hire us.

RAY

What choice do we have, Peter?

The Roof Shakes again. PETER and RAY look at each other and exchange worried glances. PETER takes a deep breath and points his proton wand at the door.

PETER

See you on the other side, Ray.

Ray Points his Proton Wand at the Door as well.

RAY

It’s been a pleasure, Dr. Venkman.

Both RAY and PETER fire at the same time at the door. We see the face of the STAYPUFT MARSHMALLOWMAN peek over the edge of the roof and Roar. PETER and RAY nearly touch the tips of the proton wands together as the cross the proton streams.

EXT. DANA’S APARTMENT BUILDING - STREET LEVEL - NIGHT

A Large Explosion is seen from the top of the building. Rubble begins to fall to the Street Below.

EXT. DANA’S APARTMENT BUILDING - ROOF - NIGHT

PETER and RAY lay motionless on the Roof. The CAMERA zooms in close on PETER’s face. He takes a sudden deep breath and sits up coughing.

PETER

(Coughing)

Woo! Now that was something. Ray! You OK?

PETER swings an arm at RAY punching him in the side. RAY sits up coughing as well.

RAY

(coughing)

Are we dead?

EGON

(Over the Ear Piece)

Far from it Ray. It looks like we did it. Gozer is gone.

RAY

All Right!

RAY and PETER exchange a high five. The CAMERA pulls back and we see a woman’s hand poking up form the rubble.

RAY

(despaired)

Oh… Oh Pete I’m so sorry.

RAY puts a consoling hand on PETER’s Shoulder. The woman’s hand starts to wave.

PETER

Hey! HEY!

PETER and RAY rush over the the Rubble and pull it to the side. pull DANA out of the rubble

DANA

What happened?

PETER

Do I have a story for you!

PETER and DANA walk off the roof together. RAY looks out on the roof at the city scape and raises his hands above his head.

RAY

I LOVE THIS TOWN!

Fade to Black and Fade in Ghostbusters Theme.

EGON

It looks like some sort of. Temporal Rift? A Tear in the Fabric of Space maybe.

How does egon know this? No one describes it to him and he can’t see.

An interesting way to shorten the movie. I understand what was needed to be cut, but still. Obviously Winston wasn’t needed, but we knew that. :whatever: Its interesting you kept a lot of the same lines. While you do “update” the script, there isn’t really much update in the tech, which is one of the reasons I love the movie. Other than the walkie-talkies, its all the same.

Good point on Egon. Thanks friend. What I was trying to do was have him monitor them from his computer schematics but I totally forgot to add that to the script so I the audeicne and director knows what Egon is looking at. Thanks for the help and the compliments.

I like it! The whole “Egon monitoring from a distance” thing is something I’ve thought would work out well if they do the 3rd movie where the original GBs are training some rookies; have Winston and/or Ray accompany them as more of a supervisor, and have Egon monitor readings from the firehouse and feed the team tactical info.

So are you going to make this or is it just a writing exercise?

Hopefully it will be made. There’s a film contest that my girlfriend is entering to reboot your favorite movie form the 80s or later in 10minutes or less. so We’re doing some major cutting to this script but hopesfully it’ll still stay true to source material

I dunno, I mean, if you’re gonna reboot, you should go for new jokes, don’t you think?

true. I think I just came across those fears that if I change too much then it will no longer be ghostbusters.

I understand your fears. But really, you have to take chances.

Since no one else noticed, I really like the tip of the hat to ‘Pi’ during the Egon temple drilling scene.