The Real Ghostbusters: "Canis Mors."--Updated! 07/15/2010

The brilliant beams, all four, met their targets in mid air, creating an explosion of sparks and lightning, slamming the four beasts backwards, as if they had been hit under the chest with a sledgehammer. Careening backwards, the hellish hounds crashed onto the table, smashing it, sending cups and food everywhere, landing in a twisted heap of tangled legs and snouts.

Bassle felt her eyes go wide behind her glasses, shocked at the violence of the attack, and the surprising speed the four men that seemed like over done exterminators responded with. She could only hope that these guys had kept the backpacks their wore, and the rifles they fought with contained.

The sheer power screaming from those barrels was enough to make her think of the implications of what would happen should someone less than savory get a hold of them.

“Don’t just stand there! Get the lady out of here!” Peter yelled, taking aim again, the lightning from the storm and the strange blue glow from the demons giving him more than enough light to see by.

“Come on! Let’s get out of here!” Ray returned, grabbing Bassle by the arm, not roughly, but firmly enough for her to understand that this was their element and for the time being, she would best be served, and survive, by doing as she was told. Moving quickly, Ray, guiding Bassle, followed by Winston and Egon, ran for the door, ducking quickly past the still stunned ghosts.

One of the hounds had worked its long neck loose and reached out, faster than a rattler, and snapped at Bassle, snarling wickedly, its horrid eyes flashing, its fangs coming within centimeters of her right hand. Screaming, she leaped back, falling into Ray.

“MOVE!” Winston barked, shoving them out the door. Behind him, he heard Peter make for the door and the familiar growl of a proton pack seconds before he saw out of the corner of his eye the sun-bright yellow orange light of a proton stream being fired, followed by a screaming yelp.

“I’m with you!” Peter yelled back, diving past the hounds, letting up with his fire just as they untangled themselves, scrambling to their feet, jaws hanging hungrily, their eyes filled with murder. Quickly, Peter reached around, grabbed the door and slammed it shut. *At least they don’t have thumbs! *He thought, panting.

“AGHHHH!”

He leapt nearly a foot off the floor and away from the door as one of the hounds slammed into it from the other side, the wood giving off a distressing groan.

“I think that’s our cue to exit.” Egon said, already moving towards the lobby.

Bassle no longer needing to be prodded, ran as well. “What are those things?!” she panted, trying to keep up with the Ghostbusters. Behind her, Ray, Winston and Peter ducked around a corner. Further back down the hall, the door sagged in the middle, splintering as the hounds threw more force into their ramming, snarling and snorting like hogs.

“Class Six corporeal canine manifestations…looks like hellhounds of some kind!” Ray responded, nearly tripping over a piece of carpet. He quickly regained his balance, following the others out past Bassle’s office and back into the lobby.

“JOHNNY!” Bassle screamed. She moved away from the Ghostbusters, and dove behind the desk, where the lone officer, the younger man that had shown them in, lay on the floor, unconscious.

His skin was ashen gray, his eyes rolled back into their sockets, his body limp and his uniform ripped open at the right shoulder, exposing what looked like a puckered burn; it was is he had been branded with acid and the underlying bone was clear to be seen. “My God what the—Johnny!” Bassle shook him and checked for a pulse. She felt nothing and felt her heart sink. No. Not yet—

Suddenly Egon was beside her, his meter out, scanning Johnny’s inert form.

“He’s alive. He’s in a state of ectoplasmically induced catatonia. Let’s get him out of here. That door won’t hold much longer.”

As if in response to his words, the lounge door splintered further, this time down the middle, the wood screaming like a living thing as it began to smolder.

“Ecto-1. Let’s him and us out. We can think on the road.” Winston said, moving Egon aside, reaching down and picking up the fallen officer, holstering his thrower and throwing him over his shoulder in a fire man’s carry. “Good idea, now let’s move it!” Peter agreed. “Who has the keys?” Peter asked running to the front door.

Egon looked to Ray. Ray looked to Egon. Winston rolled his eyes. “Egon, YOU have the keys. You were driving. Come on man, snap out of it. What is with you tonight?”

Egon looked taken aback. “It’s been a long drive and nearly getting killed will do that to you.” He snapped back and reached in his pocket and felt the familiar edges of the car keys.

With a scream of tortured wood, the lounge door finally splintered, exploding into pieces, throwing jagged wooden chunks into the opposite wall as the hounds spilled out into the hallway. Egon realized they wouldn’t make it to the door if those things pounced again.

There was a type of emission on the proton pack he had wanted to test. He had not told Ray about it yet because it was utterly dangerous and could level a 3 square mile area. Desperate times called for desperate measures.

“I have a radical idea. Get her and him out of here. I’ll be right behind you,” he said, tossing the keys to Ray who protested immediately. “Oh no you don’t. Those things will rip you apart, let’s go—“

Egon cut him off. “I’m about to do something incredibly explosive and very dangerous, untested and possibly lethal. Raymond, I suggest you do as I said and run like hell.”

Ray took the point and bolted out into the storm, followed by the others, leaving Egon behind.

Outside, the storm lashed the building, and thunder roared. Egon looked back down the hall and made eye contact with the snarling beasts who had inched closer. This had better work or he wasn’t going to have to worry about any more board meetings with the American Science Board.

What the hell, they were boring anyway.

Twisting a knob on the stock of the particle thrower, throwing it’s dial into in the red, Egon felt the proton pack begin to vibrate and the thrower itself began to shudder in his hands. Sparkling electricity began to crawl over the black metal of the pack shell, arcing, like a Jacob’s Ladder. Every readout on the gun’s displays flashed red and a warning alarm began to pulsate, shrieking in protest.

Outside, Ray heard it. Was that the overload—

“NO!” he cried and began to move as fast as he could to reach the building.

“Oh boy…” Winston said, freezing in this tracks.

“What?!” Peter panicked, looking from each man hoping for an explanation.

Ray ran towards the glass doors of the building. “He’s removed the bosonic over-load inhibitor!”

Inside, Egon took aim and realized at that moment, he had absolutely no idea if this was going to work or not. He also found himself oddly thinking about Janine. What if this didn’t work? He would be incinerated instantly…or he would survive. Those were the only two possible scientific outcomes.

Swallowing, he depressed the trigger.

Outside, Ray mounted the steps.

“We’ve got to stop him that will create a blast big enough to—“

The explosion rocked the air, the ground shook and a fireball erupted out of through the walls, blowing out every window on the first floor, sending glass and brick raining like hailstones.

Throwing up his hands, Ray felt himself get flung backwards by the shockwave and after what seemed like an eternity, he slammed butt first onto the asphalt, the impact jarring his teeth, the heat from the blast warming him through his uniform. It was hot, like an oven, a deep sickening heat.

“EGON!”

Ray and Winston, unable to move to help, Winston still carrying the unconscious Johnny on his back, the heat pushing them back.

Peter threw himself over Bassle, knocking her to the ground, shielding her from the blast as best as he could.

Around him, Ray heard the sound of tinkling glass raining down like chimes, felt the rain slap into his exposed skin, saw the lighting and heard the thunder but felt nothing.

Nothing at all.

Inside, time seemed to slow as Egon depressed the trigger. The instant he did, the reaction occurred; a super charged bolt of boson particles erupted from the barrel of the particle thrower, like a teardrop shaped ball of plasma. It screamed through the air, crackling with heat. Nearly as soon as it left the barrel, the ball of energy smacked headfirst into the hounds.

Egon watched with a detached scientific eye as the dart exploded, seemingly to collapse in on itself and then out again. He didn’t stand up to watch the rest, but dove to the floor, throwing his arms over his head and turning his face to the floor.

At that second, the explosion intensified tenfold, erupting through the office with a massive fireball, ripping through the walls, burning wallpaper and paint instantly, sending a colossal shockwave of fire, pressure and heat through the lobby, blowing out walls and windows. Egon thought he heard the metal doors fly open and their hinges implode, sending their now empty frames crashing to the pavement.

His eardrums throbbed and the heat was almost unbearable, like the surface of the sun. He heard four screams of pain and a satisfying thunk as the hounds were sent clear through the armory wall and through the rear offices, and finally slamming to a halt against the brick wall that formed the west side of the building. Outside, the wall cracked, brick split and the outlines of the four dogs became instantly visible even as they slumped to the floor, temporarily stunned.

He knew the blast was powerful, but didn’t know how powerful. He wasn’t taking any chances of those things jumping up and ripping out his neck from behind so Egon quickly found his feet (thankfully his legs were working and he seemed to be alright), grabbed his meter which was lying three feet from him where it had been thrown during the blast. It was still going off. Egon quickly switched it off and clamped it to his belt and moved out the demolished doors and out into the storm.

Ray got to his feet and was about to rush into the now smoking building since the original fireball had abated when suddenly a smoking figure came, somewhat wobbly, running out of the destruction. When he realized who it was, he felt his heart soar.

“EGON!”

Coughing, Egon moved quickly to join the others next to the Ecto-1..

“What happened?” Winston demanded, grabbing Spengler by his shoulders.

Peter meanwhile hadn’t moved. Bassle was struggling to free herself from him.

“Dr. Venkman…If you could please move..I think I can—“

“It’s standard protocol to shield women first in the event of a large explosion, miss.” He said a grin crossing his face as he realized they weren’t short a team mate.

Bassle rolled her eyes and shoved Peter off of her, throwing him into a puddle that had formed next to Ecto-1’s running board.

Sopping wet, muddy, and half terrified, she got to her feet with Peter not far behind her.

“Oh my God…the station…” she said, her voice nearly robbed from her in her shock.

The entire facade of the building was gone, ripped open, blasted to pieces, smoking. It no longer resembled a police headquarters as much as a building that a bomb had hit.

“I experimented with a compacted boson charge. Was very explosive but it might be useful in the future if we can control the blast radius.” Egon said, his breathing now nearly normal, despite the fact that his glasses were cracked and his hair and uniform was smoking.

The proton pack on his back had stopped sparking but was now steaming steadily. He pulled the particle thrower off its secondary hook on his belt and looked at the status meter. It was solid red. Overheated. It would take several minutes for the excess heat to vent. That would be a problem as well that would need to be looked into if they wanted to be able to use such weapons on combat.

“Oh.” Was all Ray could say. Then as the idea hit him, “ You mean you fired a boson charge? An actual boson dart? Wow. I mean, those were only theoretical. We could seriously use that on more powerful entities—“

Egon waved him silent. “ Yes, but let’s not work with it for now. I’d rather work out a heat venting system and find out how to refine the dart itself before I fire another one. That one…was just a little bit dangerous.”

“I agree. When we get back to the fire house we’ll work up some specs but—“

Peter rolled his eyes. “Guys, I hate to break up the science talk but we need to get out of here. Those things in there probably aren’t going to be too thrilled with us now we’ve blown them up. Always works wonders for my temper so can we please GO.”

“Yeah, let’s burn some rubber and we can think about more powerful ways to do stupid things later. Right now we need to get Mr. Johnny here somewhere safe and find out what’s wrong with him…” Winston said, opening the rear hatch, and laying Johnny as gently as he could down on the space that in Ecto-1’s heyday would have held a stretcher.

Ironic how she was now serving as an ambulance again. Peter opened the rear driver’s side door, letting Bassle in. Peter dove in behind her too quickly for Winston stop him, shutting the door behind him. Rolling his eyes, he made sure Johnny was as secure as he could be and shut the rear hatch.

In the car, Peter looked over at Bassle who was giving him a look that spoke volumes.

Unfortunately, they weren’t going to be good reads, Peter could see.

“It’s just for your protection, Mrs. Bassle. Things could get nasty.”

Winston took the keys from Ray and jumped into the driver’s seat, while Egon and Ray squeezed into the front passenger seat next to him, slamming the doors shut against the rain. In her seat, Bassle looked behind her, to Johnny’s body laying on the floorboards, unmoving, except for his breathing which was so shallow she could barely see it.

Worry crossed her features and something else Peter instantly identified.

Fear.

Fear for a loved one.

He frowned at that and decided right now would not be the best time to be a hero. “We’ll make sure he’s ok.” He said. Bassle said nothing in reply.

As he started the engine and hit the headlights, Winston continued.

“ You know, if you guys really do start jury rigging the packs to do that stuff, you can find someone else to test it, ‘cause I’m out. I’d rather be able to have kids in a few years and be alive to see em.”

“Don’t worry. When the time comes, we will hire someone.” Ray said, looking over to Egon as the Ecto-1 pulled out of the parking lot, fishtailing and then straightening itself out as the rear tires grabbed onto the asphalt.

“Where we headed?” Winston asked, flicking on the wipers in the driving sheets of rain that slashed from the sky.

Egon spoke up. “ I’ve been thinking about my earlier theory—“

“You mean the one you have yet to tell us?” Peter quipped.

“Yes the one I have yet to tell you because I’m still working out the details,” Egon glared at him in the rearview mirror. “Ray, check Tobin’s for those dogs. See what you come up with. We also need a place to get our friend here some help,” he finished, nodding towards Johnny.

Reaching into his back pocket, Ray pulled out an old worn book, that had seen better days. Its many pages were dog-eared and yellowed with age. Ray flipped on the dome light and began to search through its pages. Egon turned around to face Bassle.

“Can you tell me a bit more about Eugene Simmons? I think he may be the key to all this.”

Bassle sighed and nodded. As they drove, she talked, Egon nodding every other word. “Let’s head over to my house. It’s not far. I’ll tell you everything there.”

The Ecto-1 soon vanished over the next hill, the red tail lights gleaming like eyes.

Back at the station, the hell hounds were still unmoving on the floor, their bulky bodies buried under brick, mortar and debris. The most that could be seen of their bodies was one of the heads of a beast who taken the most direct portion of the blast, its shaggy long snout resting on top of a pile of wood and glass. Blue slime dripped like blood onto the floor from their broken mouths and ragged jaws.

The lip on the exposed ones head jerked upward.

A set of black fangs gleamed into view.

The right eye opened onto a shattered socket, black ooze leaking from what had been an eye. The ooze was sucked back into the socket as if drawn by a vacuum and a black orb formed, pupil-less, and slowly, the eye itself re-grew with a sickening set of pops and snaps, nerves reattached and then, a hell-fire red glow began to simmer in it as the dog got to its feet, shaking off the debris, popping its shoulders back into place.

As it roused the others, a single primitive thought filled its inhuman brain:

Revenge.

Lol…and how would this have gone down without the foreshadowing of the video game thrown in? Just kidding–that was actually handled pretty well.

LOL

I enjoyed the boson dart so much in the game i wanted to work it in and in the game Egon said he’s been working on it for a while and just wanted to test it safely but as stay puft was ripping up times square he decided to “waive that safety step for today”…if that is in 1991, i thought it would kinda neat in fanfictions set prior to that if we could see the earliest versions of the new equipment settings…hence the boson dart lol…well proto-boson dart…

the earliest draft of this scene was more of a shoot out with the standard proton beams and Bassle trying to use her gun (of course it wouldnt do any good but hey, she was trying!). Plus the original scene showed what happened to Johnny himself…best to leave that to the next part …

…after i thought about it and worked in the proto-boson dart, i found that the scene worked alot better and was more fluid than the one i had originally came up with. I’ll keep em comin!

Thanks fritz!

Ray did not say a word the entire trip to Bassle’s house. He had his nose buried so far into Tobin’s that Peter thought he would fall in if he got any closer. The dim light from the dome lamp above cast a weak amber glow in the cabin and outside the rain still lashed the car windows. Ecto-1 lurched up as Winston took her over a large pot hole.

“Ok we are at the end of the road. Where now?” Winston asked, slowing for a stop sign. The road forked off in four directions, each stretching into the darkness with not a street light one in sight for miles. Bassle pointed to the left from over the back seat. “That way. Take Edgefield Road.” She then turned her attention down to Johnny on the floor, and went silent.

Winston took the turn without a signal and soon they left what appeared to be the last pangs of civilization behind and entered a deep dark country woods on a country road where the divider lines were so faded it was hard to make out in the storm. Around them, trees taller than buildings reached for the sky and in the distance in the lighting flashes, the peak of Goodnow Mountain could be seen, stark in the glare. “How far out?” Egon asked, his face drawn in thought.

“About four miles or so. Not far.” Bassle replied, her thoughts clearly on her friend.

Peter sat across from her on the rear driver side jump seat and said nothing for a time and simply studied her face. For the most part, she seemed calmer than she was before, the shock of the paranormal events beginning to wear off as she accepted what she had experienced. Normally, Peter knew that he would be hitting on Bassle. He found her immensely attractive both in her fiery spirit, her raven hair and the way she carried herself, which when he thought about it, was much like Dana Barrett used to before she left for Europe with Him.

Peter refused to call the man (Him) by his name both out of spite and jealousy and a little hurt. He couldn’t help he wasn’t ready to settle down yet, but part of him hoped Dana would come back. Shaking the thoughts clear with a mental shrug, he turned his attention back to the woman across from him.

“So…how do you two know each other?” Peter asked gently, trying not to be too abrasive or make a large point out it, and secretly he felt his hope rise that Johnny was her friend, a cousin or better a brother.

For a moment, Bassle didn’t answer and looked up at Peter. After she felt he was being sincere, she did answer, letting her eyes fall back to Johnny who lay flat on his back on the floor, his arms lying limply by his side, his skin a horrible ashen grey, his eyes closed and his breathing so shallow it could barely be seen.

He did look pretty bad Peter realized.

“He is my…fiancé. We were going to be married in December…just before Christmas.”

Peter felt his hopes deflate like a balloon that had been punctured.

“Oh.” Was all he said.

Then Bassle looked back up to him, her eyes seeking an answer.

“Will you be able to save him? Will he be alright?”

Swallowing a lump in his throat Peter answered her back, his voice barely a whisper and answered her the best way he knew how. Technical research and paranormal studies weren’t really his specialty, even though he was a doctor of psychology and parapsychology. He tended to leave the wierd stuff up to Egon and Ray.

“We will do everything we can to help him…everything.” he punctuated the last word by reaching out and taking her hand in his and just held it, not in romantic manner but just to let her know that he did really care as best as he knew how.

Bassle did not pull back from him. Instead a small sob escaped her. Peter felt his alarms go off. Uh oh. He didn’t handle crying women easily.

“I don’t understand what’s happening…I mean, every day I see the worst this world has to offer…murders, robberies…rapes…I’ve seen the darkest side of humanity and what it has to offer in the law. I don’t know how to handle this…this is new to me. I don’t know whether to cry, to laugh or scream. I never thought for once in my life about the supernatural…I never believed…” she said quietly, silencing her sniffle as soon as it was out.

Peter knew the feeling. “If it helps any, I didn’t believe in any of this ghost stuff either until a few years ago…had a nasty run in with a ghost at the New York Public Library of all places…she was less than pleasant.”

“Oh?” Bassle said, looking back up at him, surprise crossing her features.

“Yeah. Long story but Egon and Ray had been chasing down people who said they had had experiences with ghosts for years and had nothing really to show for it, and I mainly kept to myself at the lab if you can call it that, at Colombia.” Peter shrugged. “ …I did studies on ESP and psi, but nothing serious…to me at the time it was an easy ride…” he laughed a bit, “ bit like a hustle as the dean put it. But then Ray dragged me with him to chase down the ghost at the library and from then on, I had a change of heart about the paranormal.”

“What happened?” Bassle asked.

“Ah, let’s say we had a running encounter…but from that, grew all this.” He waved his hands around him, indicating the Ecto-1, the proton packs, spare traps, measuring equipment, computer screens and other odds and ends that Egon, Ray and Winston had tacked onto the old ambulance over the years.

“Are all ghosts evil?” Bassle asked, trying to keep her mind off her unconscious fiancé.

Peter chuckled. “No…not all of them. We’ have a few nice ones…” he said, thinking back to Casey Jones and one particular full roaming vapor that he hated almost as much as he loved.

Looking back down to Johnny, Bassle looked up at the back of Egon’s head.

“Shouldn’t we take him to a hospital or something?”

Egon shook his head and looked back in the rearview mirror. “No. He’s not in any life threatening danger but his condition is unlike any paranormal physiological effect I’ve ever seen…He may not be safe…to others.”

Nodding, Bassle turned her attention back to Johnny and reached out and took his hand in hers. His skin was like ice and felt raspy and clammy at the same time. She swallowed another sob and put on what she hoped was a strong face. Her mother had always taught her that a grown woman shouldn’t show emotion, to prove to men that women weren’t weak and were strong even in the most trying times.

Johnny did not respond to the touch.

That was the last time anyone spoke for the next fifteen minutes; everyone rode in silence, with the only sound being the rasping of turning pages as Ray read more and the constant white noise of the rain on the roof. Winston had since slowed down the car to a respectable thirty five as there was no sign of pursuit from those dogs. Peter could think of nothing more to do at the moment and laid his head back against the cool glass of the window and watched rain run in rivulets in random patters, swelling and shrinking as the momentum of the car drove them back to fly off the back for the door frame and into the night.

Finally, Bassle broke the silence.

“You’ll want to turn at the next driveway up. It’s the cabin at the top of the hill there.” Winston nodded and took the turn. Ecto-1 moved from the asphalt to a gravel driveway that stretched on a simple incline up and through a copse of trees, and then finally ended at a large gravel parking area. There were no lights on and no cars. The garage itself was closed and the house itself was simple; a log cabin built of the old sturdy logs used in the days when homes were built to last.

It was two stories tall, with large bay windows that opened up into what Winston assumed was the living room. The yard was well manicured and was beset with flowers and greenery. Apparently, Bassle was an outdoors type of woman who liked to be outside as much as possible.

The front porch ran the length of the house and Winston felt the home would probably feel warm and comfortable inside, like a grandmother or some special place where we all go to escape the world around us.

“Home sweet home…” Bassle said, letting Johnny’s hand back down onto his chest.

“We shouldn’t stay long. Just enough to determine his condition more fully and so we can gather what do know so far about Simmons and these dogs.” Egon said, opening his door and stepping out into the storm. He left it open so Ray could follow him and Ray closed it with a heavy thunk that rattled the frame of the car, shutting out the storm as quickly as the sound of it had filled the car cabin.

“Yeah let’s get him inside. I don’t like the idea of being caught out in the open with those dogs still loose,” Winston agreed and joined Ray and Egon outside.

Peter turned and looked Bassle. “You alright?”

She shook her head. “Yeah. I’ll be fine. Let’s help the others. I’ll go unlock the door.”

“I’ll go with you.” Peter answered, almost too fast. He felt like an ass the moment it was out of his mouth.

Bassle raised an eyebrow.

“Just for protection.” Peter quickly recovered while mentally kicking himself.

Smiling a bit for the first time since he had seen her, Bassle dug into her pants pockets and pulled out a set of keys and dove into the pelting rain, closing the door so the water wouldn’t make Johnny any worse. Peter joined her and he followed her up the path while Egon, Winston and Ray got Johnny out of the car with Winston taking point, his particle thrower drawn and primed, the hum of the proton pack barely audible in the roar of the thunder.

Mounting the four wooden steps up onto the porch proper, Peter stopped behind Bassle and took in what he could see in the occasional flashes of lightning. The porch was decorated with simple wicker furniture, some small end tables and hanging ferns every few feet. There were also large potted plants and a few knick knacks. Next to the door, there was a small wooden burned sign that read “Home is where the heart is! Bring yours and come on in!”

Peter remembered that his home wasn’t like that…except for his mom. His mom always tried to make life as best as she could for him, always hoping that his father, Charlie would stop running the roads as a con man and make an honest buck. She held on to that hope every year, for many years, up until the day she finally passed away last year.

Charlie was still a con man and had actually gotten the Ghostbusters into quite a bit of trouble recently but Peter still loved his dad…even if he wanted to kill him half the time.

“Can I have a light?”

Bassle’s voice brought him back and Peter snapped back to reality. “Oh sorry. Sure.” He click on the flashlight clipped to his pack strap shedding a brilliant cone of white light on the door handle and the keys that Bassle was fumbling with.

“I normally leave the light on but I guess I forgot.” She explained sheepishly.

“If we had one at the station, I would forget it. “

She smiled.

Finally, after much jingling and jangling, she found the appropriate key and inserted it and with a twist, the tumblers slid open and the lock came free.

She was about to open the door when Peter stopped her.

“Let me. I’ll scope it out for anything nasty.”

Considering whether it was wise to let this man with a super charged nuclear accelerator into her home or gauging the risk that something actually had beaten them to the house if those dogs could think rationally or understand or were even still around, she took the lesser of two evils and let Peter lead. “ Be my guest.”

Swallowing and hoping she didn’t notice, Peter reached behind him and drew his thrower, switching it on. Bassle stepped back and opened the door for him. “Wait here.”

Nervously, Peter stepped across the threshold and into the darkness. His light revealed a small foyer with a set of stairs leading to the upstairs, the kitchen and dining room off to the left and a large living room with a stone fireplace to the right. The hall went on for a few more feet, revealing what he thought was probably a bathroom and a broom closet.

Sliding his thrower onto the belt hook, he took out his PKE meter and turned it on. The WREEEEEEP as it power cycled was ungodly loud, and the light from the screen gave his face an eerie orange glow. So far, the readout was level at zero, with no sine wave readings or sudden spikes. Sweeping it slowly from left to right, Peter made his way down the hall way, past the stair case and to the first door he came to on the left. Switching the meter from his right hand to his left, he reached out and tried the knob.

The door handle turned easily and it swung open to reveal a modest bathroom with a shower, a toilet and a sink with a medicine cabinet on it.

The decor was very woodsy and there were little statues of birds on the countertop. It smelled faintly of flowers and perfume. Two white towels hung on towel racks on the left wall behind the door and the floor was covered in hunter green rugs.

Stepping in, Peter scanned the room.

Nothing.

Breathing a sigh of relief, he left the room and closed the door behind him.

The other door just down the hall on the right did indeed go to a broom closet, which also apparently housed spare linens and cleaning chemicals.

The door in the middle of the hallway opened onto a stair case going down, down into the depths of what was the garage and basement. His light wouldn’t even penetrate the first few feet and he got the creepiest feeling from looking into the abyss and quickly did a scan from the top of the stairs and decided he was NOT going down there.

As he turned away from the open door, he could almost swear that he heard something shuffling around at the base of the stairs, deeply hidden in the shadows, scraping a bit on the concrete. He could almost sense it on the back of his neck coming quickly up the stairs, coming out to get him, to eat him and drag him down with it—

“Sheesh. I’m creeping myself out.” Peter said aloud, and reached behind and quickly shut the basement door, making sure it was shut and stepped away quickly from it, making his way hastily into the dining room and kitchen, which also checked out as normal.

The feeling of being followed or watched did not abate but grew less the farther he got from the basement door.

Moving back across the foyer and careful not to look at the closed basement door

*( you know it’s open don’t you his mind told him, its open and the Thing is going to come out..going to drag its dead body up those stairs with its feet dragging and thumping on each stair, coming up to take you –if the door is open I’ll scream—) *

and moved into the living room. It was laid out in an open fashion, with two hunter green leather designed couches, one with its back to the large bay windows that looked out onto the porch and the front yard, and the other facing the fireplace. The floor was hardwood, well polished and cared for. In the middle of the room there was a deep burgundy rug and the fireplace took up most of the right wall. The stone was old, well worn, and was every shade from sandstone to a deep wet looking black and grey.

The far wall going towards the basement, had a television set framed by two book cases. As Peter swept the room, he noticed the pictures on the end tables and mantel were mostly of Bassle and Johnny together, at picnics, on what looked like road trips, and one that even looked like Niagara Falls with the water cascading brilliantly behind them.

The living room checked out.

Outside on the porch, Egon and Ray and Winston were holding up Johnny by the shoulders, with Egon on his left and Ray on his right, with one of his arm’s draped around each Ghostbusters shoulder. Winston was scanning the darkness out in the yard for any movements or unusual activity.

“What’s Peter doing?” Ray asked, shifting Johnny’s weight.

“He said he was making sure it was safe.”

“Oh. Wish he would hurry. We need to get him inside.” Ray said, grunting.

Peter completed his sweep of the downstairs and moved upstairs, the stairs creaking with his footfalls. Soon behind him the downstairs fell into shadow with the lightning bursts throwing actinic white light on the walls and through the open front door.

Thunder peals shook the house with each flash and finally, he made it to the upstairs. Surprisingly, the upstairs was fairly simple. The first door off the landing to the left was a spare guest room and he surmised that from the way it was decorated. The second door on the left was a much larger bathroom, the master bathroom with a large Jacuzzi bath, toilet and large countertop and sink. The only door on the right opened into the master bedroom, Bassle’s private space.

Hesitating briefly, Peter stepped into the room and shone his light around.

The room was large and open, with a queen size bed on one end with a large headboard with multiple shelves on it. The dresser was off to the right, under a large window. On the top of it were more pictures. Peter moved in closer to get a look at them.

These were more than just Bassle and Johnny. Some were of children and older women and men, which Peter took to be her family. There were two large black and white eight by tens, of a distinguished looking man and a homely but attractive woman with long straight black hair. Judging by the similarities in appearance, this was Bassle’s mother and father. She had her dad’s eyes and her mom’s hair.

Then there was an older man with a young girl in his lap, reading to her out of a large old book, the little appeared to be deeply enthralled in the story, her eyes wide, the old man’s face alight with the youngsters attention.

The older gentleman had wisps of white hair, combed back from his forehead and possessed sharp penetrating blue eyes. He wore a cardigan over a dark green shirt with long sleeves, long dark brown pants and loafers. On his right hand he wore a ring from a college (which one Peter couldn’t tell but it looked like a class ring). They were seated outside a cabin, similar to this one, but not as new. In the picture, it was painted white and the yard was well kept.

Seated on the log, it was as if the two had be captured in time, at a moment of innocence.

Strangely, Peter wondered if this the old man Simmons that everyone was talking about. He made a point to ask later.

On the bed, was a small teddy bear and suddenly Peter was reminded of Ray who kept a similar Stay Puft doll on his bed at the station, though how Ray could touch the thing nowadays Peter couldn’t fathom.

Something glinted next to the picture of Bassle’s father.

Looking down, Peter saw a gold badge next to the frame. His light made the engraving easy to see.

“Officer David A Bassle, Lieutenant, 1966-1976.”

For the first time, Peter noticed on the wall behind the door, hung a framed plaque, gold plating on a darker hard wood. He moved over to it and read it. On the top was a picture of the same man in the photograph and below it, a birth date and a second date and an inscription below the black and white photo of the man in uniform.

*Officer David A. Bassle, Lieutenant

Served Newcomb Police Force

Frm.1966-1976

Born 11/15/1935

Died: 12/24/1976

This memorial plaque is dedicated to Officer David Allan Bassle, who was a dedicated man both to his fellow officers and to his lovely family of Doreen Bassle and to his “Punkin” Jolene Bassle. For ten years, he gave of himself completely, to long hours, always seeing to it that someone else had more than he did, for in the end, he had a heart that some will say was more than for just a man, and he will be remembered, forever, in our ranks and in the community, as a hero for his actions that cold December night, now and forever, in eternal rest, God keep David A. Bassle.*

Peter said nothing and had forgotten to check his meter, lost in thought, remembering his own Christmas’s without a father. Charlie Venkman hadn’t been a hero. He just hadn’t been there.

Suddenly the two-way on Peter’s pack strap went off in a burst of static.

Peter felt himself nearly jump out of his skin and for a moment, it was like his heart was going to burst out of his chest.

When he had caught his breath and fought back the urge to scream, he reached over and keyed up.

“What?” he said almost irritably.

Ray’s voice came back over. “ Peter, are you almost done? Is everything clear?”

“Yeah”, Peter said, checking his meter and shutting it down, clipping it back to his belt.

“Ok we are coming in. Meet us in the living room.”

Peter keyed back up. “Ray? One favor ok?”

“Sure Peter,” came the static filled reply.

“Don’t ever, ever do that to me again. Ok?”

Peter left the bedroom and closed the door gently behind him, and made for the stairs and headed back to help with Johnny, careful to quickly avoid looking or standing in front of the basement door, which he could have sworn looked a bit more open than last time, but that was impossible his mind told him.

But somewhere else, a nasty voice whispered otherwise.

Normally I’d probably roll my eyes at such a long, involved description of the house, but I think it actually helped highlight the sense of Venkman trying to notice every little thing he could, to make sure that something wasn’t about to make a beeline for his face. Very tense.

I gotta do my slight nitpick thing, and say that the lines in GB2 implied Andre (Oscar’s biological father) moved to Europe without Dana and Oscar, leaving them back in New York, but that’s not a huge issue. Heck, it’s from Venkman’s POV–maybe at that point he somehow thought she moved away. :lol: I overanalize this stuff, don’t I?

I enjoy it actually. It gives me perspective and motivation! lol

It was dark.

Darker than any time she ever remembered in her life. The darkness was utter, complete, far more than if she had closed her eyes and been blindfolded. She felt that there was hard ground beneath her, and felt space around her. She had no other sensation but the ground. Based on the feeling she got from the earth, if it was earth she laid upon, she knew that she was lying down, on her side, arms and legs splayed.

The ground itself was hard, cold and had an odd texture to it, as if it were stone but something else, something she could not place. Closing her eyes and opening them did little more than to wet her eyes. It did not improve her sight. Breathing, she felt her chest hurt. She knew that no ribs were broken but something still hurt, a deep searing pain that had no source but was felt everywhere, from her toes to the ends of her hair whenever she took a breath. Finally, out of the corner of her eyes, she saw a dim blue glow, barely perceptible in the dark.

Focusing her eyes on it, and allowing them to adjust, the world around her finally became visible. There were more of the little blue lights, hovering are nearly regular intervals leading away into the dark. It took a good five minutes for this to occur, but at last she could see that she wished she was still blinded.

The ceiling was so far above the floor that it vanished into the shadows that were darker than the depths of space, but with no stars. Looking down, she saw why the ground felt so strange.

It wasn’t rock.

It was bone.

Shrieking, Janine leapt to her feet, causing a fiery sheet of pain to course through her chest. Standing now, she saw that she had been lying on the ground which was made up of twisted and blackened bones, some still showing the off white colors that bone is supposed to be. She quickly brushed herself off and realized she was still in her clothes from the office.

So how did she get—

DOG DOG DOG

With a jolt of shock, she remembered being in the fire house, wearing a proton pack, trying to fight off some kind of dog, but a dog that was bigger than anything she had ever seen, one with glowing eyes and glowing blue spit, one that burned its footprints into where-ever it walked.

She remembered the dead weight as it threw her to the ground, and then the sickening gleam in its pupil-less eyes as it snarled at her, less than an inch from face, its yellow and black fangs looking far too sharp to be so close to her skin.

And then…

Oh God yes then the pain as it drove its teeth into her, biting not her flesh, but her…spirit? Was that what it was? Instinctively, her hands flew up to her shirt and pulled it away from her body. Looking down where normally her brassier lay, was a black charred mark where the beast had driven itself into her body. Looking around her, she saw that a path followed the blue spheres, leading and winding down farther into the depths of what seemed to be a cave…a cave made of charred fused human bones.

“Where am I…” she wondered aloud to herself and then decided the best thing to do would be to follow the lights…after all..it had to lead somewhere. Fear pulsed through her like blood and for the longest time she felt the most maddening sensation that she wasn’t alone.

Her footfalls fell lightly and oddly, did not echo, and she noticed something even more interesting; she did not cast a shadow. Puzzled but at least up and around, Janine didn’t pay it much mind. She knew she had to find her way out and get back to the fire house and radio the guys and who knew what they were doing or up to. Most likely they were being chased by some wierd demon or monster, she reasoned.

On the whole, she felt she had ended up better than she thought she would have after being attacked and practically eaten by a hell hound.

For what felt like forever, Janine walked, her silent feet carrying her over the twisted sometimes heaped piles of burned and blackened bones. After a time, she lost her initial fear of the debris; After all, they were just bones, what harm could they do?

At least, she came around a bend and stopped in her tracks.

Ahead was a huge stone arch that was at least six stories high, and was made out of what looked like the same twisted and blackened bone that the walls and floor were made of. It had no gate or door that she could see, but the middle was filled with some kind of substance…almost like water but unlike any water she had seen before; it seemed to ripple and swirl giving off its own pale white light casting eerie pools of silver on the floor and walls, like the dancing of the stars.

Shuddering, she saw that a spinal cord unlike any humans wound its way around the archway and there, nestled on top of the gateway, was a terrible skull, with gaping eye sockets, a long drawn out jaw lined with shark like teeth and twin horns sweeping up and behind what were the eyes in life. It was three times the size of any horse Janine had ever encountered and it’s eyes, though dead, were filled with a hellish red haze, and tendrils of steam and smoke slowly trickled out of its blackened nostrils.

What made her stop however, were the two gigantic beings that stood to either side of the door. They stood over seven feet in height, and wore long dark cloaks and loincloths, their powerfully built bodies covered in armor plates of what looked like human rib bones and they had human spines wrapping around their waists and arms like bracelets.

They had jackal like heads, with sloping muzzles and blazing green eyes shining out from the shadows and recesses of the deep hoods they wore. In their right hands, both held a type of pike staff, long and made of some type of black metal, it was tipped with a wicked looking blade, similar to all the images of Death that Janine had seen every Halloween with his scythe, ready to reap the newly dead.

Their bodies were covered in short dark fur, and its color was so black it nearly was indistinguishable from their tattered cloaks.

Squashing a yelp, Janine dove for cover behind a large set of boulders that were made of what appeared to be volcanic glass, the shimmering black surfaces reflecting the hovering blue spheres and the terrible gaze of the creatures and the leering death-grin of the skull. She waited for the monsters to attack her, rip her limb from limb, eat her alive or worse…but it never happened. After crouching for what felt like an age, Janine risked a peek around the rock’s edge.

The beasts were still there, completely immobile, as if they were statues. Still, she shouldn’t get to close. They looked like—

A hand fell upon her shoulder.

Screaming in shock, Janine whipped herself around and found an old man standing above her, his hand jerking back from her as if he had scalded himself.

He was oddly dressed, as if he just stepped out from a classroom in a dark cardigan, that as singed and torn in places, dark slacks and scuffed loafers. His hair, white with age, was combed back from his forehead, and he had the strangest blue eyes, like he knew something you didn’t.

“I’m terribly sorry miss…I didn’t mean to startle you.” He said, crouching low next to her, his voice a rough whisper. After her initial fright, Janine felt her face go red.

“Of all the nerve. What do you think you’re doing sneaking up on someone in a place like this and—,” Janine stopped midsentence. She just realized she was speaking to another human being. “Who are you?” She peeked around the rocks edge to see if the creatures had reacted to her shriek of panic.

Still, they stood as if carved.

“I’m just an old man…why, who are you?” he replied looking her over. He apparently didn’t think highly of her short skirt, she noticed, tugging it a little lower.

“Janine. Janine Melnitz.” Janine said, pushing her glasses up on her nose.

“It’s a pleasure to see someone else…it feels like it has been such a very long time.” He said, his eyes lost. He seemed almost in a daze. His accent, Janine pegged him with was English.

“Where are we?” she demanded, sensing this little old man knew alot more than he showed. For a moment, he didn’t seem to hear her. Then when he looked up at her, all the haziness in his eyes was gone, and the look of utter fear in them was alarming and she felt her skin crawl and when he finally gave her an answer, she felt as if she were going to faint where she sat when the full implication of the simple quiet words hit her. His voice was low, whispered and filled with terror.

“ My dear…we are no where…and no when…we are in the place where those who go before are taken…it is Irkalla, the land of the dead.”

The mysteries deepen.

Janine’s “waking up”, as it were, in the strange place was handled very well.

For some strange reason, for a second, I thought the “old man” she meets was Heironymous from “Egon’s Ghost”. Wouldn’t that have been a strange twist?

I’d say this isn’t being updated fast enough, but lately I haven’t exactly been one to talk :lol:

as always thanks for the feedback!

I’m wanting to take the next few parts very careful because the story is about to pick up from here.

I was partially inspired by Heironymous (the english accent) but i wanted a father like figure…as you can see why from the earlier portion. Most people should put two and two together there pretty easily.

As for where Janine is…it’s not good and its not the Netherworld…

dramatic music

lol

I’ll keep more coming as fast as i can !

again thanks as always!!!

authors note: in the final draft, the name Nimbron will be changed to Negral***

A fire roared in the fire place, casting a soft orange and yellow light over the room as the storm roared outside, pounding the glass with its rain bullets and shaking the house with ever more powerful bursts of thunder and lightning ripping apart the sky like the screams of gods. Ray and Winston sat on the couch across from Bassle, while Peter too anxious to sit, paced behind her.

Egon knelt in the floor next to Johnny, who had been laid out on the rug, the deep carpet acting like a bed. The coffee table that had been where he now lay had been moved aside. Prone, he lay as if dead, unmoving, breathing barely perceptible. His skin was now a pale ashen gray and he was cold to the touch, as if he had been laid out in a meat locker for days.

Egon ran the PKE meter up and down his body, inches above his skin, deeply intent on studying the readings, making sounds that indicated to Ray that he was highly absorbed in what he was doing.

On the screen, Egon watched the sine wave that was a PKE frequency shift wildly up and down the scale, ■■■■■■■ and diminishing as if it could not settle on a specific reading. The meter’s antennae were going up and down, their lighted tips flashing and the meter itself buzzing like a Geiger counter.

Bassle sat forward, her eyes drawn and her graceful features worried. Finally, after ten minutes of scanning, she couldn’t take it anymore.

“Can you help him? Why is he like that?”

“Hmm.” Egon said, sitting back on his haunches. He had removed his proton pack earlier and set it aside. The ALICE frame was digging into his shoulders and he wanted to be free to study the readings without having to worry about toppling over like an oversize turtle. “Care to put that into words, Egon?” Peter scowled, looking over at his friend.

Sighing, Egon explained. “Peter, these readings are unlike anything I’ve ever seen or recorded. The sine formation doesn’t match any known entity. Also, the PKE energy is contaminated with some type of radiation..most likely Cherenkov radiation.”

Peter blanched. Radiation?

Egon noticed and dismissed the look Peter had on his face with a shake of his head.

“Don’t worry. The levels aren’t high enough to cause any harm to living tissue…but still it is almost as if there is something phasing through his body and creating the Cherenkov radiation…”

Ray perked up. “ Egon, what if there is a connection between his condition, this comatose state and the wound on his shoulder? I mean, maybe those dog ghosts are toxic.”

“No, I don’t think so, Ray. I keep thinking back to that word…Nergal…it sounds familiar, as if I’ve heard it before,” Egon adjusted his glasses. “ Did you bring in Tobin’s?”

Ray grinned, pulling the thick well worn small brown leather book from his back pocket. “ Always.”

Bassle nodded to the book. “What is that book you keep looking at?”

Ray brightened. “ Ah. This is Tobin’s Spirit Guide, or properly titled, J. H. Tobin’s Spirit Guide: Being a Compendium of Ghosts, Gods, Spirits, and Manifestations from Outside the Normal Realms of Existence, with a Travelogue and Notes on a Philosophy of the Occult Established by the Author.” Bassle could only blink as Ray continued, “ It’s a collection of studies and entries about many different types of spirits, phenomenon, activity and ecto-plasmic forms. It also established the class system we use for classifying entities. It was compiled by John Horace Tobin and the manuscript was probably completed around 1919.”

Ray opened up the book and began thumbing through the pages, carefully turning the crisp yellowed pages.

Ray fondly remembered theorizing with Peter and Egon for years that Tobin’s book was real and he even had a dream that Egon and Peter nearly laughed him out of the lab for until the dream came true, and Ray stumbled upon the first edition of the Guide in a crate of old forgotten books years ago in a building that was being torn down.

“Tobin spent his life traveling the world investigating and studying cultures and the paranormal before he died in 1920. His work is considered to be one of the few authorities on the paranormal.” Egon piped in.

Peter rolled his eyes, irritated by all the education, stopped pacing and leaned forward on the sofa, leaning his weight on the back of it, just above and behind Bassle. “Yo guys the history lesson is fascinating and we’ll take notes later, okay but we have a job that needs doing.”

Egon and Ray looked at each other and at the same time came to the same conclusion. “Right.”

Winston leaned over to help Ray go through the book.

“What should we look for?” Ray said, his nose again buried in the guide.

Egon considered. “Cross reference canine specters, hell hounds and the word Nergal. See what you come up with.”

With that, Ray and Winston dove into the pages of the old tome and Egon went back to studying the readings. Bassle was unsure how to act or what to say or do so she said nothing. Her training in the real world was useless here. She was completely out of her league and she knew it.

For the next few moments, not a sound was uttered; the only sounds that reminded Bassle that there was still life in the room were the occasional shuffling of pages, the crackling of the fire, and the stead drone of the rain and the scream of the storm.

Egon stood up, setting the meter down on the couch next to Winston. He pushed his glasses up, rubbing his eyes and the bridge of his nose. He knew that there was something about that word, but he could not place it and it was wearing on him.

The lightning outside had subdued somewhat and now would probably be a good time to call the station and find out what the analyzer found out about that slime that Frump recovered at the Simmons farm. If it shared the same Cherenkov properties as the hair samples that Bassle had recovered did, then it stood to reason that they came from the same entity, those dogs.

“May I use the phone?” he asked.

Bassle nodded. “Sure. It’s on the wall of the kitchen. Just through the foyer and on your right. Can’t miss it.”

Egon nodded his thanks. “I’m going to call Janine and see what the results were on that slime. It may give us a clue.”

He moved off into the foyer and stepped into the darkness that was the kitchen and dining room. He didn’t need a light as the occasional flash of lightning lit up the entire room like a strobe and he could easily see the phone on the wall. It was a touch tone phone, thankfully. He wanted to find out what the results of the slime were, but deep down that was only partially the reason he wanted to call home.

The real reason was that since that moment in the car earlier, where he had felt a sudden rush of extreme panic, he felt something was terribly, terribly wrong.

Back in the living room, Ray and Winston were still leafing through the guide.

Ray was mumbling to himself as they searched. “Dogs…dead dogs…slime hounds…bog hounds…” Peter grimaced. He HATED bog hounds.

Egon dialed the firehouse number and waited and a few seconds later the familiar ringing began. He tried to squash the feeling of growing dead and wasn’t doing so well. Normally, his emotions were quite in check but something was not right.

The phone rang and rang.

No answer.

Odd. Perhaps Janine was in the bathroom. No, she used the bathroom around 1:30 he remembered. She did every day regularly. Maybe she had went out for dinner. No, that didn’t make sense either. She wouldn’t leave the station like that. Why wasn’t Slimer at least attempting to answer?

The phone continued to ring and ring. While it rang, Egon tried to distract himself from the rapidly growing fear by trying to remember why the word Negral was so familiar. It was almost on the tip of his tongue if he could just make—

(NAME)

Thought hit him like a thunderbolt and he nearly dropped the phone.

Negral wasn’t word.

It was a name.

“Raymond!”

Egon dropped the phone and ran back into the living room.

“What?” Ray asked distractedly looking up from the book.

All eyes in the room turned to Egon. “ It’s not a thing. It’s a name. Negral is a name. Remember that lecture we gave on ancient Babylonian cults last summer at Columbia?”

Ray nodded slowly, not catching on. “Yeah. We only had four people show up.”

Egon dismissed it. “No, listen. Negral isn’t a ghost…..”

Winston had taken the book from Ray and was thumbing through it quickly.

“Then what is it, a turkey sandwich?” Peter shrugged.

“Oh boy…” Winston said, his voice coming out as a choked whisper.

“What is it, Winston?” Ray asked. His memory wasn’t as clear as Egon’s.

Winston handed him the book and pointed out a set of paragraphs. Ray took the book and read aloud the entry that Winston had found. As he read, the color began to drain from his face as he finally realized what Egon was talking about.

“ Negral….refers to a deity in Babylonia with the main seat of his cult at Cuthah represented by the mound of Tell-Ibrahim. Nergal is mentioned in the Hebrew bible as the deity of the city of Cuth (Cuthah): “And the men of Babylon made Succoth-benoth, and the men of Cuth made Nergal” second Kings, chapter seventeen, verse thirty…. He is the son of Enlil and Ninlil…He is known as a destroyer of life and bringer of pestilence, and is lord of the underworld called…Irkalla…land of the dead…” Ray’s voice began to shake and Bassle felt her hair stand on end. Peter shut up immediately.

Egon finished for Ray, without reading the book, remembering from his lecture notes. “ ..and Negral, lord of the dead, the Jackal and Wolf of Darkness, will return from his imprisonment in the Tomb of Allatu, his goddess, and reclaim the world, raising the dead as his army and laying waste to the living world, raising Irkalla to become the new Earth.”

Peter then finally understood. “ Hey wasn’t he the guy with the dog head you had those engravings of? You know, the ones that you had on the front of the stage?” he asked. He had slept through most of the lecture but the engravings stuck in his mind like a bad taste.

Winston nodded. “ That might explain the dogs…I remember you saying something about five guardians and a harbinger…”

Suddenly, Bassle spoke. “ The Harbinger and the Guardians. That was a story Mr. Simmons used to tell me….”

Egon looked over at her, his eyebrows raising. “ Oh?”

Bassle nodded. “ Yes. In it, he said that three thousand years ago, in a far away place, a powerful death demon was summoned from his world to ours by a sorcerer who wanted to cheat death and control it…but the demon was too powerful for him to control and escaped…the demon brought the corpses of the dead back to life, turning them into his slaves, an army of death and tried to open a gateway, some type of door, to a place he called Arali….the demon was finally stopped by a group of wizards who imprisoned him in a statue of a goddess…named Allatu and as he was defeated, the demon vowed to return to the world of the living…and wipe man kind from the face of the earth, eating their souls…”

Peter blanched. “Jesus, talk about giving a kid a complex. I’m surprised you didn’t have nightmares for the rest of your life.”

Ray, who had never heard this legend, looked at Bassle. “How was he supposed to come back?”

Egon interrupted. “Right. The problem was the wizards incantations on the statue had a flaw. If an unwilling blood sacrifice was given, and the statue drunk of the blood, then the seal on the demon would be broken….releasing the spirits of his five guardians who would stalk the earth, taking human forms, twisting them into the visage of the gate guardians of Irkalla. The statue was thus hidden and presumed lost…no one ever found it…”

Ray looked over to Egon. “What if the statue was found…what would happen if the guardians escaped?”

“….After they stole human hosts, the guardians would be strong enough to summon the harbinger, who would then open the doorway for Negral to enter our world through a human body as flesh is needed to act as a catalyst to open the door to Irkalla.”

“What is this Irkwalla you keep talking about? Some kind of dumping ground for ghosts? I thought that’s what the netherworld was.” Peter asked, scratching his head.

Egon shook his head.

“No, Peter, Irkalla is not the netherworld. Irkalla is a place where the bodies of the dead go after death, trapping the souls there, acting like type of limbo. There were seven gates in Irkalla, and one passed through the seven gates, giving a token at each to the gate lords, usually a piece of clothing, until at the seventh gate, you were stripped of your humanity, and became lost if the miasma of spirits, losing your identity…forever.”

“Sounds like a real trip. Remind me never to book a vacation.” Said Peter shaking his head. Suddenly Bassle’s eyes lit up. “Wait a minute. There were five people that went missing in the last few months…you don’t think…”

Winston nodded. “The guardians. I bet you anything!”

Ray perked up. “Well, if the missing people became guardians, those dogs, then who became the harbinger? Where is he?”

Egon suddenly felt his stomach sink. “Dr. Bassle, you said you found the slime all over the grounds and at all the crime scenes where people were taken?”

“Yes.”

“Then it stands to reason that the slime is the conductor for the spirit to take over the host! That explains that weird sine wave you got on the meter Egon and the Cherenkov radiation!” Ray said excitedly. He enjoyed solving a problem.

“Wait a minute…that means..” Peter choked.

“The slime that Frump brought back to the station!” Winston gasped catching on at last.

“….Janine.” Egon said, sinking into a the armchair which if it hadn’t been behind him, he would have fallen to the floor.

“We have to get back to the station then! She’s in terrible danger!” Ray cried, leaping to his feet.

“It’s too late, Ray. I think…I think she’s already been taken.” Egon said quietly.

“What do you mean?” Ray asked, perplexed.

“I…I just know. We have to stay here and stop Negral from opening that gate…and I think I know where he is…that may be the only way to save Janine and those people.” The PKE meter suddenly erupted in a flaring of lights and sound.

“Uhh…guys…you said the slime is a conductor right?” Winston asked, backing away quickly from the group. Ray glanced down in surprise at the meter and looked over at him. “It would have to be.”

His eyes went wide as he pointed back at the group and his voice shook with fear as he reached behind his shoulder, grabbing his particle thrower. “ Then we have  major problems, man.”

“Huh…”

The Ghostbusters looked where Winston was pointing and saw that Johnny was no longer in the floor. Peter realized Winston was pointing behind him. Peter turned quickly and wished he hadn’t. Somehow, the man that had just moments before been lying prone on the floor out cold like an ice block had slipped away from them, silently, without so much as making a sound.

For a moment, he was hidden in shadow and then lightning flared and revealed what remained of Johnny. Bassle turned on the couch and when she saw Johnny, she leaped off the couch with a shriek.

The man that had been Jonathan Radford was gone and in its place was a hideous amalgam, a twisted shape that only bore the slightest resemblance to a human form. It was if the man himself were hunched over, crouching almost, his arms crooked and turned inward, his spine cracked as he stood there.

His skin had gone from the ash gray to a nasty blackish blue. His face and jaws had stretched forward, creating a distorted muzzle out of stretched bone and skin. Curved fangs lined the crooked maw as it clacked in place and his eye sockets had elongated, revealing empty black holes with pin ■■■■■■ of blood red light where the pupils would have been. The lower legs were snapped backward, the knees have moved up to where the thigh bones in the human leg were.

His chest had swollen, barreling through the uniform he wore, leaving it in tatters. His breathing came in ragged gasps. He seemed to look at the Ghostbusters and Bassle and his horribly twisted lips pulled back to reveal black gums lined with glowing blue slime, turning into a hellish snarl.

“Whoa!” Egon cried, grabbing his proton pack and shouldering it on quickly, drawing and activating his thrower. Peter leaped over the couch and landed next to Bassle. Ray shoved the Guide into his pocket and looked deep into the eyes of the nightmare that stood before them.

“This is not good…… “ Peter said, priming his thrower and backing away with the others as the twisted Johnny’s neck somehow disjointed itself and with a sickening cracking of bones and tendons, stretched out and with a convulsion, Johnny dropped to the floor in a wet thud behind the couch, out of view.

Egon took the chance to grab the PKE meter with his free and pointed in the direction of the beast that had taken over the deputy’s body. The readings went off the scale, the alarm blaring at full tilt, the antennae swinging wildly.

For a moment, the storm growled outside and then a shadow began to slink out from behind the couch, on the wall….a lupine shape, that was huge…

The readings on the meter finally peaked, and Egon threw out an arm, pushing everyone back. “MOVE!”

With a roaring scream, a hellhound leaped up from the floor, clearing the couch, landing on all fours in front of them, its eyes gleaming with death and its jaws ready for the kill. The man that was Johnny was gone, lost inside the beast.

The floorboards beneath the beast’s paws began to smolder and char and the fire in the fire place went cold and smothered in a whoom of air, throwing the room into darkness as the power failed. “We can’t blast him, we might kill him!” Ray cried as the beast stepped forward, burning its tracks in to the wood.

“This is definitely not good, “ Peter said, backing up wondering how in the hell they were supposed to get out of this one.

Nice…I loved the callbacks to West End’s Tobins Spirit Guide, and their version of it’s backstory. As much as I love the Now Comics, and enjoyed “Tobin and the Maze of Time”, I like West End’s history of the book better.

Egon’s realization was well handled. Lesser writers probably would have had him go “Egads! Janine’s in trouble!” the second he had his seizure several chapters ago. This way there was just enough logical basis for him to make the last intuituve leap.

I sorta hope for Bassle’s sake Johnny gets better once the demon is dealt with (since we strongly suspect Janine will come out of it more or less intact). I guess we’ll see, though.

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Folding his powerful arms deep in the folds of the dark cloak that sheathed his corporeal form, Nergal stood in front of a large open space that he had hollowed out deep in the earth, far below what had once been the basement of the Simmons home. It had been deformed melted and twisted into a large cavern like space , and in the center was nothing but black stone that had once been granite, but that was now singed black as if it was obsidian glass. The walls glowed with a faint pale purple light.

For a few moments, his horrible yellow and black eyes with their red sclera simply took in his handy work, and then silently, he raised his right arm, extending out his dark furred and taloned hands and uttered words in a language that had been dead for over three thousand years, his voice low and rasping with an odd hiss to it, his forked tongue flicking and steam rising for the hole that served as his nose.

“ Ed e ig maruhamtu.”

If one happened to speak Sumerian, roughly translated, it meant:

*Arise the Doorway, song of the dead, opens the door. *

His extended right hand began to glow a deep crimson and the light grew into a sphere, which suddenly exploded out, into a beam, a jet of burning fire, blue white and red with the intense heat. The stream of energy snaked out and struck the earth, hissing and exploding with sparks like an welder’s torch hitting metal. The very earth seemed to scream and moan as the energy seared into it, causing clouds of smoke to billow. The sound of screams and shrieks became an ear splitting crescendo; Nergal intensified the power flow, red lighting snaking up and down his arm.

The beam was doing more than burning; it was cutting, shaping, transforming the singed rock. It moved as Nergal moved his hand, guiding the lethal power, and soon a searing red shape began to form in the molten rock, a pattern of an ancient geo-lithic design, not seen in thousands of years by living men. First, an outer circle that spanned over 15 feet across; in the middle of the circle, four smaller circles formed, and a center circle burned itself into existence in the passing of the energy beam.

Sparks and lightning spewed as cardinal spikes burned themselves at the top, bottom and sides of the circle and just as fast as it began, the beam slowed and then vanished, leaving the smell of burned flesh and the fading screams of the damned in the deep, deep darkness, which now had a hellish red glow to it, due to the carved molten rock.

Nergal felt his fiendish muzzle split into a morbid grin, exposing black gums and razor fangs, his forked tongue flicked in and out, tasting the anguish he had just unleashed. So the souls of the dead fuel my power…

He moved forward, his seven foot frame casting a strange shadow that seemed to move almost on its own, slinking on the walls and floors, his feet claws clacking on the stone. Stepping into the circle, his feet hissing as the dead flesh seared off the souls of the pads, smoking. He felt no pain. It did not matter to him. This body was but a vessel for his power. He would open the gate, oh yes. And this time there would be no mages to stand in his way.

He could imagine it, in fact, so well that he could nearly feel it, the power of the dead from a five guardians feeding him, draining their pathetic souls; with their soul-forces, he would finally have enough energy to bring Irkalla to this retched world, turning it into his domain, with endless souls upon which he could and would readily feast.

He called out to the five Guardian forms.

Within moments, they would be here and not only would they bring good news, that the mortals, the only ones who could stop him, were dead and that it was safe for him to enter Irkalla and bring back the souls of the Five. He could have minions do it for him of course…but it wouldn’t be half as fun.

What humans did not comprehend or understand, and thought quite wrongly that when they died, they could no longer feel pain.

Too bad for them that they felt pain, but as a soul, they could not escape through that wonderful exit death…oh no, it went on forever…and being several thousand years old, he thought, I have many ways to inflict that pain, any one of which would leave the soul begging to die a million times over…such fun he had in mind for the Five once they had helped him….if their souls survived the opening of the Gate.

With a flash of flame and sparks, five slinking hulking hyena like shadows appeared behind him, crouching low to the ground, their luminous eyes downcast and heads pointed towards the earth. Nergal turned and opened his fang-lined maw to speak and stopped short.

Something was wrong.

He wasted no time.

“ What is it? Why do you have no souls to feed me?”

The Guardians did nothing and did not make a sound, simply standing there, their lethal paws burning, melting into the rock.

“You. Come forth.” Nergal pointed a single long finger and a red aura surrounded the middle hound. He beckoned.

With a screaming yelp, the body of the hound contorted, twisting in on itself as it was dragged forward, scraping the stone. Whimpering, the demon-dog lifted into the air with a motion of Nergal’s arm and there, the dark god held it at eye level with him.

“I ask again. What happened?” Nergal said, his voice going deadly quiet, steam pouring from the gaping hole that was his nose, his yellow-black eyes narrowing, his horn-like ears pinning back, a snarl forming on his black lips.

The dog turned its gaze away from Nergal and whimpered.

Without another word or motion, Nergal flung the hound to the stone floor; the hounds body impacted with enough force to crack the stone. A half human scream of pain ripped from the dog’s mouth, and black ichor oozed from its snout. The other four dogs cringed back, knowing what was to come and knowing that the Dark One’s word was absolute.

His left hand opened and held over the dog. Instantly, snarls of black lightning began to crawl over and into the beast’s huge shaggy body, sending it into convulsions. Twisted gasping whimpers and moans came from the beast as its eyes dilated in shock.

With his right hand, Nergal made a fist, leaving his index finger extended. The claw on the finger began to extend, forming a dagger made of blackened bone.

Crouching while holding the demon dog in its black electric field, Nergal traced the lines of its skull with the sharp edge of his talon, almost gently, as if the creature were a favored pet. The talon slowed and finally stopped over what in a human would be the temple. Nergal made no sound or sign and instead paused for a moment, locking eyes with his minion; for a brief moment, the demonic creature had a pleading look in its eyes, a look of fear.

Nergal felt nothing.

The Dark God plunged the talon deep, driving it into the skull of the beast, through flesh, through tendon, black muscle and finally through the bone itself, searing like a molten metal. Black blood oozed and welled up around the wound as Nergal dug deeper.

The hound’s body went stiff, and it attempted to scream but no sound could come out and within moments, its eyes had gone glassy, unfocused and it simply spasmed as Negral buried his finger in the creatures skull up to the third knuckle.

With a violent jerk, Nergal twisted and then the images began to flood through his brain, his mind, like a jerky old movie on film strip, shooting back and forth incoherently.

A building…a man…biting the man…the man’s soul is taken….taken but not eaten….sent to…Irkalla…then moving…bursts of light, searing orange yellow lightning…Searing burning, weakening…an explosion…the Mortals escaping…unconsciousness…

Nergal withdraw his finger and stood up, maintaining his electric grip on the hound.

Snarling, he knew. They were still alive. Still a threat. He would have to accelerate the opening. They must not interfere. Roaring in fury, the sound like a lions enraged bellow, he released the hound and telekinetically threw it against the far wall, where it slumped, shivering, the black ichor slow congealing and forming a hideous burned scab where the god’s finger had ripped into the skull of the beast.

He moved to the center of the circle he had burned and without looking at his five beasts, made a single order.

“Stop them. At any cost. They will track you here and if they interfere with my work again, you will wish to all the gods that you could die.”

Raising his arms, he threw his head back and let out an unearthly howl; the ungodly sound ripped through the chamber, shaking loose rock from the ceiling. Blue lighting began to play across his finger tips and finally, it sparked brighter, becoming a single continuous current, slamming into the five circles that had been burned into the earth, following their lines.

Within moments, the circles began to glow blue and the air around the circles began to dance and shimmer.

It was time to begin.

Ouch.

Some development of the villain and his plans. Some very intense imagery.

Keep up the good work.

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I believe I can quote a certain parapsychologist in regards to Nergal…

" He makes Gozer look like little Mary sunshine."

“ We can’t blast him! It would kill him!” Ray protested bumping into the far wall as he and the other Ghostbusters and Jo backed away from the hideous beast that was once a human being.

The demonic hound that was once Jonathan Radford was nothing remotely human any longer; it had became a predator, a beast of evil, a huge hulking monster with no shred of humanity left in its flaming eyes. The wooden floorboards seared with the piercing hisssss of hot metal being dipped into ice water as its footsteps burned holes into the floor, sending up tendrils of smoke and embers.

“ Perhaps a low setting…modulate the frequency! Shift down to 100,00 megahertz!” Egon said, turned the dial on the stock of the particle thrower. Ray shook his head. “ We don’t know the frequency of Johnny’s biorhythm..if we’re wrong…he’s going to be blown apart!”

Jo’s calm façade finally broke. “ DO SOMETHING!” she shrieked as the beast crouched for the kill.

Peter adjusted his settings and took aim, hoping Egon was right. If not, murder was not something he did not want see himself in prison for and at the same time, thought how ironic it was that they were in the same situation just minutes before. Funny how life works out, he thought.

Ray nodded. There was no other way.

Steeling himself, Winston leveled his thrower. “ On three.”

Jo turned her face away and prayed, afraid to watch should the Ghostbusters be wrong because if they were, she was about to kill the man she loved.

The beast bunched its powerful hind legs and leaped, clearing the ten foot gap with ease, its jaws open wide, its nostrils and eyes flared, diving right for Jo.

“NOW!” Egon barked and fired.

Four particle beams blasted out, each one with a slight blue tinge to it, making the normally bright yellow orange energy surges take on a ultraviolet glow.

A high pitched roar rang out through the room and in the instant the beams fired, a shimmering green streak blasted through the far wall of the house, flying like a bullet, slamming into the chest of the beast, throwing it backward before finally passing through its ugly body; with a snarl of angry defeat, the beast crashed backwards onto the floor.

The particle beams screamed across the room, ripping into the far wall, sparks and embers cascading as the beams utterly obliterated the north wall of the house, blowing wood and debris everywhere in a single powerful explosion.

“CEASE FIRE!” Winston ordered, shutting off his weapon instantly. Within seconds, the other Ghostbusters shut off, leaving the room filled with smoke, flaming debris and the smell of burnt fur and singed wood.

o opened her eyes, and took in the amazing amount of destruction that has just ripped her home apart. She looked around, her eyes darting, looking for the beast. What the hell just happened? She shouldn’t be alive. None of them should. She blew an offending strand of her raven hair out of her eyes and looked to the Ghostbusters who were in turn looking at something else.

She followed their gaze and felt her eyes nearly pop out of her head. This night was getting far too strange for her to take much more. First, people go missing, then these hell hounds show up to terrorize the town, then a demon-god is on the loose and finally her fiancé is turned into a creature out of a bad movie and here, in what was left of her own home, was a floating green oozy potato shaped…..thing.

“Slimer!” Ray called, a grin splitting his boyish features

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The green blob of a ghost turned and faced them, hovering in mid air, and was about to say something it appeared when the hound exploded from the floor, leaving Johnny’s crumpled body behind, rage burning hatred turned its already twisted features into a death mask, blind fury driving it and it leaped for Slimer who summarily bolted shrieking like a scalded rat through the wall and disappeared.

The hound was now fully ecto-plasmic, and almost translucent, its form shifting as if it had waves going through its body. It crouched, ready to dive through the wall after Slimer.

Egon saw their chance. He switched back to full power. “ Full stream now!”

He let loose a proton stream, now back to its regular orange-yellow color, blue lighting crawling up and down the energy blast which caught the hound broad side.

Screaming in fury, the hound was snared instantly in cage of energy, the beam wrapping itself around it like a snare made of lightning and crackling electricity. Spitting and hissing, it was lifted off the floor like some kind of mutated fish, held in place by the surging proton stream.

“Nail it!” Winston cried, snaring it with his proton stream which was joined by Ray and Peter’s. The four beams held strong, and the beast, raging, could not break free.

Peter grimaced, fighting to hold the beast in the streams with the others, sweat breaking on his brow. This thing was powerful. He wasn’t sure if it could be contained much longer.

“ Ray…a trap would be nice!” he snarled at Stantz.

Ray grunted as the hound thrashed wildly, tugging on the streams, nearly pulling the thrower out of Ray’s hands. Ray glanced over at the gaping hole in the house.

Jo ha ran over to Johnny’s inert form. She knelt beside her fiancé, shaking him, trying to wake him up, gingerly trying to avoid the green sticky Jello like liquid that covered his body, tears in her eyes.

“ Please…please…wake up…”

Ray felt for her but they needed her help. They could tend to Johnny later but there wouldn’t be a later if the demon broke the beam’s hold on it. He called out across the room, bracing against the demon’s bucking and thrashing as it roared and snarled in a fury that had not yet been seen.

“Jo! Grab the trap off my pack…it’s the box with the doors on it and the cord! Hurry!”

Jo glanced up at her name and against everything she felt she should do, she left Johnny and dove across the room, ducking under the snarling beast as its jaws came within inches of her head, the burning beams nearly searing her where she stood.

“This?” she asked, her hair flying in the electric fields that were being generated.

She grabbed onto the trap which was on its clip on the side of the left side of the proton pack. Ray nodded. “ Yes! Toss it on the floor under him!”

Jo lifted up and the trap came free and for a moment, a second, she looked at it, totally unconvinced this little dinky thing would do any good. The two foot long box was solid steel with buttons on the right hand side and a vent like plate cover on the left with a single twist dial on the left front panel. It had a single handle protruding up and back from the rear of the box.

The single plate on the top of the trap had a seam running up the middle of it, and the top plate was painted with caution stripe yellow and black. A long ten foot cable ran out from the back of the trap, ending in a rounded pedal of some kind that ended in a plate switch.

Not knowing what else to do with it, she tossed it out, sliding it on its bottom wheels across the floor, the metal box skittering to a stop just under the beast that was caged in the energy sphere above it.

She tossed the pedal down; it landed with a thunk beside Ray’s left foot. Jo stood back and behind the Ghostbusters as Ray wasted no time and slammed his left boot down hard upon the plate switch, driving it down into the pedal with a loud click.

Instantly, what Jo had thought was a single metal plate on the top of the trap painted in caution stripes opened, splitting into two parts, doors, one opening to the each side of the top of the trap.

A blinding cone of white light shot upwards, and purple blue fire seemed to spark up from the trap, sending twin blue energy snarls up, filling the room with the glow of a sun. A wind began to pick up and Jo realized it was coming from the sheer power of the open trap sucking in energy. “Don’t look directly into it!” Winston cautioned. Jo turned her head away, shielding her eyes.

The beast began to be pulled down, drawn into the open waiting trap. It re-doubled its efforts and all four Ghostbusters threw all the strength into holding on to their throwers as the beams undulated and bent straining to hold the creature steady.

Shaking its ugly head the hound’s rear feet touched the blue fire sparking from the actinic white trap light cone and the hound began to descend faster as it hit the event horizon of the trap, unable to escape now, its capture was inevitable.

As its lower body began to be pulled it, the beast threw out its paws, bracing itself against the floor, trying to hold itself out of the draw down of the trap, snapping its jaws, its paws scorching burn marks through the wood as it fought to stay free.

Peter locked eyes with the beast as it focused its gaze on him, sneering as it bared its fangs through the proton field. The beast was now into the trap up to its shoulders, and it was nearly completely inside, its form reduced to atoms and energy as it was pulled in deeper.

“You have been one bad puppy.” Peter snapped and Ray lifted his foot from the pedal.

Instantly the traps doors slammed shut, forcing the beast down into the trap and sealed it inside, the brilliant light vanishing and the wind stopping as the Ghostbusters shut off their beams. For a second or so, blue electricity crackled across the trap before it too faded and a red blinking light began to pulse on the front of the trap and with a four tone electronic beep, the room went silent.

“ Help him!” Jo cried, running past the blinking trap and over to Johnny who still had not moved or awakened.

Egon and Ray holstered their weapons and ran over to the inert form of Radford. Peter and Winston looked at each other. That had been entirely too difficult. If one of these things was this hard to contain…what about the other five? What forced that demon out of Johnny…and why wasn’t he waking up…normally when ghosts and entities affect people or the environment, once they are trapped, most of the time things tend to revert back to normal.

Peter scowled at Slimer who had came back into the room, looking around fearfully as if he was going to be either ripped apart by a demon or turned to cinders by Peter’s glare. What was HE doing here? Venkman thought angrily.

Winston shrugged and went over to help the others and Peter advanced on Slimer.

This was not going to be an easy night.

For those who are wondering, Canis Mors is still being worked on. Both my desktop and my laptop went boom this week. Fortunately I have both Canis Mors and the Extreme Ghostbusters story I am working on saved on a flash drive and burned to a disc. Once the PC is back up and running, I’ll begin posting again. Right now the only access to the net i have is via the PS3, which is limited. Thanks for being so paitient for those who have helped this project get this far.

Crapola, both went out at once, thats not cool.

Highly enjoy reading this as it goes along. Gives me ideas for my own little pieces.

Don’t worry–I’m patient. As long as it’s taking me nowadays to get my own stuff out, I kinda have to be. :smiley:

Good news! by a stroke of luck, much hair pulling and praying to the gods that be, the computer is fully restored with a clean install of windows xp and all my software has been put back. i expect to start working on Canis Mors tonight and am aiming to have a new post ready for next weekend. thanks guys! i really appreciate the feedback.

That is freaking awesome. Can’t wait to see what comes out of it. I’ve been ruminating on a plot twist that came to me over the weekend but i couldnt do it because of the pc crash. now that its back up, time to hit the keyboard!!!